Arshi FF(Complete): LikeNeverBefore(1)#5 - Last ch+Note Pg52(30.06.15) - Page 8

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Okay so i had written this comment when I was in bangladesh but couldn't post it for several reasons:

1. it isn't the original comment,... the original one was bigger and when i clicked on "post:" it showed some error and my entire comment got deleted..

2. i wrote it again but then due to load shedding, it got loast once again... frustrated, i gave up

3. i wrote this comment in MS word again and saved it, sent myself through FB msg and thought would post it when I come back to canada. but the i saw your note that you wouldn't post the next chapter for two weeks... I was SO UPSET AND SAD that I also made up my mind of not posting this comment until you return 😆😆

so here you go... just copy pasting the comment from MS word and adding some emoticon to it lol...

First of all, I'm extremely sorry, Candy. I have already told you the reasons behind the delay of my comments, so I'm guessing I won't require any further explanation And it's not just a matter of two lines comment that I can just log in and do in five minutes. You know LNB doesn't deserve that injustice! And I have made this habit of commenting IN DETAIL, exceptionally for this FF. So😳

Shall we start? 😳😳😳Candy must be like: 😳 I still need to answer that question?!

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Okay okay... 😆

Comment for chapter 25... this one chapter, i just had to comment on... no matter what!

Candy, I dont know if a birthday could have got any better! I swear I was in awe at the extent Arnav went with Khushi's Birthday planning. It was just so perfect... Aww I could totally understand how khushi felt when she said she can't face anyone right now... After all, why wouldn't she feel that way? She had actually thought arnav didn't know it's her birthday, especially when he said it himself. And then what does he do? Takes his sleeping beauty from his private jet to the the car, and then takes her in his arms, and stand right in front of that magnificent villa and be like "Happy Birthday Love"... And being this her first time celebrating her birthday, and on top of that such huge surprise from her dear hubby, such reaction was bound to come in from Khushi's side.

Aww loved how Arnav made her realize that it's the same love she has for him that makes him do every possible and impossible things.

And OH MY GAWDDD! THAT VILLA! IT"S SOOO BEAUTIFUL! MAN! SO BEAUTIFUL! I wanna go there for a holiday trip with family Candy, mujhe le chaliye aap... , pretty please?

Candy must be like: haan haan, why not! of course...😳 baas kharche ka paisa aap de dena, thik hai?😳

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"I'm sure I haven't drunk yet but I kinda am feeling confused about the man here. I mean, could you guys come again. Who kissed whom?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAAH! 🤣OMG LOL... Lavanya is so naughty I don't know what to say for this part LOLOLOL 😆😆😆😆😆

AND AND the best part when Anjali and lavanya asks for a girl's night and instead of Arnav, it's khushi who stands up and screams a "NO " HAHAHA OMG that was just too cute!😆 LOLOL ... honestly, LNB's Arshi is the CUTEST COUPLE EVER... I don't know if you'd believe me or not, but I actually dream about them before going to bed...Dream as in, think what if this had happened, what would Arnav do... such stuff lol nd then I replay some cute random scenes from this FF at the back of my head and smile like an idiot hayeee... Can I get a hubby like this?Oh Candy, I so love you for introducing such pure love and cuteness between arshi to us! You truly do have magic in your writing..

Awww Loved how not only NK but Arnav and even Aman was concerned about Anjali's health! That's so sweet! Loved the bonding of the friends... so strong!

LMAO Aman is sooo funny oh my god!😆😆 I died laughing when he came running out of no where screaming "it's a snake!! SNAKE" when all this time, it was a weed HAHAHAHAH OMG and then Baby, we are insatiable in bed. So I gotta keep a heck lot of energy, don't I? That's where all of the food goes."

OH MY MY! someone please hold me... I'm gonna faint.. this guy is soo...🤣

And I absolutely loved Arshi beach walk. and then the footprint on the beach was too romantic and promising. depicts so perfectly about their journey of their past two weeks and the up coming journey ahead..together! That was VERY VERY thoughtful of you to include! These small detail you take care of and include only further proves why you're such an amazing and flawless writer. And please mark my words, you're one of the BEST writers in India Forum! You know whats the best thing about your writing, besides the cuteness you portray our Arshi with? you keep a very fair balance between the main characters and side characters! I mean, you never just focus on only Arnav-khushi but also give the same attention to the other characters, and what amazes me is that you do that without getting us huff in boredom! Usually, even if the the writers are able to keep that balance between the characters, it's very rare that they do that without getting the readers bored. And I don't know if you know that already but you have that wonderful power of tackling it perfectly!

Payal's entry actually freaked me out... but loved how Arnav consoled her, soothed her with his words and touch and made her realize and accept the reality! that was SO heart touching!

Loved the last bit of this chapter... the campfire, the dance, and the best part:

"This is the best Birthday, ever."

"Don't be so sure, Mrs.Raizada. We have a life time ahead."

Of course! When you have such a wonderful hubby, your life events would undoubtedly be unpredictable with lots and lots of surprises and definitely every upcoming surprise would just break the record of what you claimed as the best surprise ever!