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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Congrats on the new thread!!
Excellent update! I was actually waiting for the meeting between Arnav and the kids. And Arnav telling Khushi about them. All through the update i was thinking She is so gonna stop right before them having any conversation and i have to wait for the next update and guess WHAT i was right!! 😭 for once i was hoping i will be wrong but nah uh
So now i have to wait for the next update which i hope will be a bit sooner than this one? 😃😛😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
wow..
how did arnav even think abt lying and getting away fro KASR:-))
i was hoping tht he take khushi along, and glad tht she came by herself...
i am curious to see how the kids react to arnav n khushi... sure khushi will deal with them easily, but how is arnav gonna make them accept him?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awsomee update
khushi understands arnav so well
hopefully arnav will share his pain with her
will the interview with arnav happen??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
U know I did a mental-fist-pump when I saw NLB in the pms... that hapie u made me 2day...
The start of the update was rilli touching... Khushi's reaction to the truth...The way she cried was so painful...
Arnav consoled her very well...He is a great husband...!! "Live,to make her live..."
(Such a beautiful line buddy)
Riva's hospitalization was shocking...!!! Poor kids... what i loved was the way Arnav felt a fatherly pull towards his siblings...!!
M sure they gonna have a great bond once they meet...!!
What happened next was Explosive girl...!!!!!
Ah...finally the furniture cracking romance...!!!
It was loving...passionate...hot..sizzling...
Very beautiful and romantic it was buddy...
Itz finally time fo them to become one
Like Never Before..!!!!!!
P.s... thankyou fo the amazing update dear... as always u right magic with ua words... extremely excited fo coming parts...plz continue soon tc
Edited by sweety421 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Absolutely loved the update!
They are soo freakin hot and adorable at the same time love love love it!
Cant wait for the next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Congrats on new thread
Awesome update loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
That was hot romance all the way... They both are in so much love. I love the way they comfort each other, whenever they sense the other is troubled. The beginning was fantastic, the way arnav suggested khushi to live the way her mom would have lived happily.

Looks like arnav is going to tell khushi about his past in the next chapter. I am also waiting for arnav and khushi to meet the kids officially.

Nicely written. Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
DO NOT READ THIS COMMENT YET! GO TO PAGE 13 AND READ MY OTHER COMMENT FIRST 😆😆😆
RESERVEDDD OMG 🥳RESERVEDDD OMG 🥳RESERVEDDD OMG 🥳


Unres😳

CANDYYY
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*cough cough*

Hi ☺️

Did you miss me? cuz I missed you to hell and back Oh what a question! you definitely missed me... and I also know, you missed my comments more than me 😆 Am I complaining? duhh, not at all😳 jokes, YES I AM! 😡

Anyway, let's start with the update...uh oh.,.. MAHA UPDATE! 😳😳😳

I was in shock to know about khushi's mother in the previous chapter... And if we, normal readers get that heart wrenching feeling just reading what has happened to Khushboo, it is beyond comprehension what khushi must be going through.

True, revealing the truth at least got her out of the misinformation that her mother was a prostitute... but the fact that Khushboo's been through such cruel, brutal and inhuman suffering till death is what's ripping Khushi's heart and making her drown in the dark. And you have described khushi's situation so precisely that I could feel what's she's going through...

and there comes her ever so caring hubby for consolation! Aww both of them were wide awake all night... Arnav knew she's not asleep inspite of her closed eyes, and so he couldn't sleep either... and then the way he finally took her on top of him, held her in his embrace, comforted her with ever so soothing words was just the perfect recovery for her... and exactly why she didn't and couldn't lose herself in the dark... exactly why she's still the way she is now. I'm still afraid to imagine what would have happened to her if she had got to know about her mother before marriage... you know, the first time buaji revealed about her mother being a prostitute in chapter 18, regardless of the misinformation, the way she got into her own shell, losing herself and breaking down, I don't think it was in any one's hand other than arnav's to get back to her own self right from that night... it would have taken hell lot of time, if not her whole life, to let the reality sink in... And I don't think even anjali or NK could bring khushi back... And same thing happened in this chapter as well. he just has this unbelievable magic in him to sooth her with his protective embrace, warm kisses and soothing words... No wonder why I fall for this man over and over again!
Call me crazy but I have read chapter 18 so many times that have lost count of it lol😆 the way he dealed with buaji, and then the way you depicted his protective side when he found her lifeless naked form under the cold shower, the way he wrapped her in the towel, took her back in the room, dressed her up and comforted her till she gave in was sooo B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...so heart warming gosh..ooppss sorry back to this chapter lolol

In love with this line: "Live, to make her live".. This one simple line holds so much gravity... no wonder why I love your writing so much candy...

Dammit can't even copy paste the lines I wanted to talk about... ugh this is annoying ...😕😕


wooo so Arnav has some surprise for his sweetheart... i see.. itni taiyaari for "THE night"
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dammit when lavanya came witht he breathless worried look, I swear i thought it is something about khushi.. something happened to her... lekin candy bitiya ne mere hopes ko hammer se crush kar diya... bilkul aise
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(sorry couldn't find a hammer gif lol)



Absolutely love how it's not only khushi who needs Arnav in the hard times but Arnav equally needs his wife's presence during his hard times... LOVE how just one look at his hubby always makes her realize if he's alright or not... are you sure they have been married only for a month? and not for years?

And the fear of separation gripped her once again when he revealed bout his 2 days trip! aww!

And you know what's the best thing you portray in khushi? she selflessly gives everything of her, be it her support or her love, to him. When he said he had to go to london for 2 days, although she knew it's something else other than just office work, he never questioned him once... all she asked him is if he's alright...! how could someone be so selfless and so understanding?

You know if in real world, people could actually leave their selfishness just for a day and could do something for others without expecting anything back from them, be it just for a day but the world would have been so beautiful! Right now, all we see is people interfering in your life, knowing what's going on in your life, how youre doing in school, if you are in a relationship... and if any of it goes wrong, thwy would talk shit behind your back and spread rumors... it is as if our lives are some entertainment show and they're here to watch , criticize and pass judgement!!

Same thing with marriage.,.. if the partners could have good understanding between them, love each other not for the sake of something or someone else but for themselves, and if there's a good support from both of their family, I don't think there'll be any marriage complications between the two. but alas! I guess that's just too much for us to ask for..

sorry i went off topic but i'm just fed up of all the sad news and couldn't help comparing the real world to these fictional characters ...

"taking a moment to laze around, the warmth from his wife lulling him back to sleep he tried to go back tot he previous day. A moment or two of utter silence was followed by a deafeningly loud "what the F*ck?!"

HAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA🤣 I died laughing right there and then...

when he came back to bed, and then found her in the bed but behave all normally, i seriously though i missed out on some part... so i went back reading the last few paragraph.. but no t finding anything i started reading part C , still confused, when that "what the F*ck?" came... I swear it took me a moment or two to realize khushi surprised him by coming all the way to london! i laughed so hard at his reaction OMG 🤣 best one! LOLOL 😆😆 and then his wife behaves all normally as if nothing happened! 😆😆 "kya hua aapko.. subha subha" 🤣

"you lied yesterday... you weren't alright"

awww! JUST HOW MUCH MORE CARING THESE TWO GET?! he didn't even utter a word abotu not being alright... she just saw through him and understood that he wasn't alright... and that was enough for her to fly to london?! leaving all her work behind? goddd candy! how can people be wonderfully selfless?! why can't ppl like them exist in real world?!

"you're an idiot , you crazy woman"

hayeee this line is so CUTEEE ☺️

And then comes the ahmm ahmm ... i mean.. woh ... ahm.. the... ☺️

man they were indeed very explosive... sorry no detailed comment on that... humein sharam aati hai 😳😳😆


Can;t wait for khushi to meet with Riva and ryan... looking forward to see how she mingles with them and how she befriends with them! it's gonna be hell awesome to finally see a happy family! I know it's gonna take time for both arnav and khushi and Riva-raiyan to adjust but i'm sure khushi'll handle it!

Thank you so so so sooo much for the early update candy! I feel honored that I'm one of the reasons why you updated earlier... thanks for giving us a maha update (i didn't give you an option there baby, did I?😎) I'm just too happy and finally feel content reading my Fav FF after almost a month! Thank you for the surprise and the wonderful maha update! kissies for my candy!
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AND HERE COMES THE PERFECT PIC FOR THIS CHAPTER (esp for PART A)
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P.S. I would like to thank my parents for giving me birth and giving me the opportunity to make the other innocent readers (in your words, "BACHCHIS") of LNB chuddails like me😳

P.P.S. Love my new name... HITLER! makes me feel powerful
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Edited by Mushfika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
I feel like dancing omg omg omg
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Eagerly waiting for Arnav and Khushi to meet the kids and to know their equation

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