ArShi SS: The Indecent Deal|Sneak Peek of Part 5|12/11 - Page 21

WOW!! outstanding part dear...loved it

Jealously brought out the kiss which was mentioned to rile her.. Arnav and his jealously.. Khushi is taken by surprise.. waiting to see her reaction.. loved the update..

What the!
Ye kaisi mazaak hai?
You didn't update the next one yet?
After stopping at that point, you dared to leave it like this?
Hihihi

I've read all d updates of this fic just now, and i must say that you are very good at light-hearted fics!
Why don't you write more?
Hamesha intense fics hi kyun likhti ho? Not that they are not good, but one should try all genres right!

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

What the!
Ye kaisi mazaak hai?
You didn't update the next one yet?
After stopping at that point, you dared to leave it like this?
Hihihi

I've read all d updates of this fic just now, and i must say that you are very good at light-hearted fics!
Why don't you write more?
Hamesha intense fics hi kyun likhti ho? Not that they are not good, but one should try all genres right!

HAHAHAHHAAH! Thank me that I didn't stop at point where Arnav enters the Suhaag Raat room. I will do that too. Thanks a lot, re. Mera Do Aur Hai Jo Lighthearted Hain! Mujhe Intense Pasand Hai. Comedy comes easily to me while speaking but likhna thoda weird hi lagta hai but this FF is fun. But Intense, you always get something new to write and depth is there. But yes, new genres have to be explored.

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

HAHAHAHHAAH! Thank me that I didn't stop at point where Arnav enters the Suhaag Raat room. I will do that too. Thanks a lot, re. Mera Do Aur Hai Jo Lighthearted Hain! Mujhe Intense Pasand Hai. Comedy comes easily to me while speaking but likhna thoda weird hi lagta hai but this FF is fun. But Intense, you always get something new to write and depth is there. But yes, new genres have to be explored.

I wont mind if you stop at that point!
But this is different! I want to know her reaction now! And Arnav's too!
I want that fun from you!
I know you love intense but kahi hum bore na ho jaaye 😉

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

I wont mind if you stop at that point!
But this is different! I want to know her reaction now! And Arnav's too!
I want that fun from you!
I know you love intense but kahi hum bore na ho jaaye 😉

How about Khushi's sari dropping in front of Arnav? I hope people don't mind me saying all this here though.

HAHAHAH! Nahi Hoga! Itne Bhi Bude Nahi Hue Hain Ham!

Awesome part !

OM G
seriously?????????????????????????????????????????
continue right now
at this very moment
i m lov'in it
amazing
continue asap pleaseee

ufff
perfect update
when r u gonna continue this?
please jst continue it right away
its amazing
loved it
continue soon

Mind blowing update