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IPKKNDFAN82

@IPKKNDFAN82

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#921

Dear Jen,
none of your updates has ever failed to create overwhelming joy in my mind, thank you for giving me so many boundless joyful moments.

I am feeling a little bit melancholy in my heart that SF, this remarkable journey in its final stage.

but honey, you will start another for us, no?
and send updates, no?
love you
ayesha

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Raadhiya

@Raadhiyaaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#922

loved d update di
its amazing

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#923

Wow, beautiful together at last and the love blossoming with ease
and understanding. Update soon. 👏

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#924

Jenny,

This was so beautiful. Looks like the confrontation with Khushi's parents is closer than anticipated earlier! I am as nervous as Arnav is about him meeting Khushi's parents, particularly Sujata. Anita is in a sad place, will Aman just get on with it already? He still has too many feelings for Khushi, his palpable dislike for Arnav is clearly indicative of that. Hope he puts these pointless sentiments aside and concentrates on Anita. Arnav and Khushi appear to be in a place where they are calm and content...having made peace with the fact that they are now two hearts, one soul...waiting to see what happens next!

Best,

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sheen.sk

@sheen.sk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#925

this was very beautiful, light hearted, romantic update..
though i feel really bad for Anita but that over shadowed by Arnav Khushi like this without any pain & just happy, thier flirticious manner, enjoying every moment, laughing an all cause after along time we are seeing them like that.
& for a reason i know that they come to help Anu, call me biased or anything but i was concentrating more on Arshi..
& like Arnav said 'he'll make sure that Sujata accept them for Khushi', but i think it will also be for his sanity also..
& i m sure with Madhu & Sumita's help they will cross that bridge also..

love their alone time in the garden & off course their dance that really capture my heart, would love to see them dance again & The Exploration part also & i also agreed with Arnav that' he will be more interesting for exploration than the city'..
will be eagerly waiting for the nxt..

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#926

A wonderful update. I totally love the way you express the emotions and feelings of each character. I just feel like the story in unfolding right in front of me.

Thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful story with us and specially taking out time from your very busy life. 👏👏🤗

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#927

Good one.. Very nicely written..

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#928

Lovely update! So nice to see them just talking about random things. Keeping their conversations light.

So it seems like both Arnav and khushi have noticed Anitas reaction to Aman. I'm glad that khushi is giving her some space. She will come to her sister when she's ready.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#929

Their so in love .. And it as simple as that now! They just have to speak through their eyes... I feel like giving Dr Raizada a pat on his back for being so chilled and relaxed! Very impressive ... 👏

Oh Jen... Loving this subtlety romance .. It's like Khushi praying and thanking the lord.. for this blissful time and moments!

Jen you are a rock star.. You write from the heart and make everything feel so heartwarming and beautiful!

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ipkviewer

@ipkviewer

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#930

very beautifully written all the chapters. reading 10 chapter at once gives a nice continuity and i got to cherish better. a simple example of how you gracefully write several sentences such as this gives the true depth of general human psychology-

"So do you practice near Cleveland?, Arnav tried again with a generosity of spirit that perhaps rests much easily on the winner of the moment.