Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th - Page 6

Originally posted by: ToxicLove

Welcome back K. Very impressive start without revealing the characters. 👏

I think I know who could that couple be. But I am going to seal my mouth from guessing and let you reveal the story. Cannot wait to meet your Arnav and Khushi and the sizzling chemistry between them...😳

Originally posted by: arnavini

Firstly, I congratulate you for turning into IF-Rockerz




Secondly , I congratulate you for the new beginning you have started in form of this story.

Akka, my heartily congratulations to you for the wonderful start of this story.
Akka, i have read a few chapter of your other story and now its first time i am reading your work from beginning and i am amused to say you have really marked an excellence in this period . the growth i can see in your writing is tremendous.

The beginning of the story where you have given a great simile of the weather with the cracking relationship was so phenomenal. i really liked the way you have penned every word and was imagining every single change of that was happening around there.

it was so painful to read that the relationship which was once a fresh blooming flower is now destroyed with the hands of the lady love who was once a reason to bloom this love and give the faith in love to her husband. But what must be the reason for her to turn so cruel to herself and her beloveds.

Somewhere the pain in her heart was visible for seconds on her face but same time her words ended the every last possibility of rebuilding the relationship.

Akka, you have really created a magic with every emotion you have penned here.
it was a great beginning .

My heart went to the lady who had a miscarriage, but something again unsettled me thinking why his husband was shocked about her pregnancy..

Aww.. she was mentally stressed .. that again break my heart thinking about her condition and plus how her mind must have fought the war to break the heart of her beloved and leave them for forever.

The little boy, omg is Arnav...

it was the worst feeling to read and feel how the boy who considered his mother as his life was leaving him without glancing back at him for once.

Akka, really it was amazing from writing point of view and painful and emotional from the calculative point of view.

Wonderful start.. waiting now for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: arnavini

Akka .. my stupid heart took a pandiculation and penned few lines for this SS.

Life was turning cruel at every instance

Taking away the real fragrance

Every emotion was burning inside

Giving no sign of tears in the eye

Words played out by her may be a lie

The heart still cracked with the cracking sky

Filling up the life with a new absence

She was taking away every feeling of pleasance

Since yesterday the heart that desired her presence

Today is marked with the color of distance

Originally posted by: kushikumari

interesting, with a bit of mystery added to the identity of the man and woman. look forward to the story!

kk

Originally posted by: canapoem

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Pandu, I know its still the prologue which you have given and hardly know the direction we are heading to, but still thought of posting a song in appreciation for the title of the story.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">If Mani Ratnam showed us the "colors of love" through the below song and compared it to a rainbow, I am wondering how different would it be if it is "colors of distance" instead.</font>

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfvGrChLEn0[/YOUTUBE]