Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th

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rn94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Finally you are back.
Interesting start.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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divya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

kirru darling... urz was the most awaited fic during the span of completion of pyaar ka intezaar till date...especially for our mooka...

well i wanna share dis ...

my mum n me were watching indian idol while i was reading ur fic ... the moment i finished and was about to comment , one of the contestant sung "MAA" song from TAARE ZAMEEN PAR, the one which stole the hearts of the universe, n every1 has tears in their eyes listening this song...n dn came " LUKA CHUPPI" from RANG DE BASANTI, and vn i had to comment i dint know what to comment ...

i really wonder how come a mother not think of her child vn she takes such a drastic step of leaving her child????

more than prologue i liked the title "Color Of Distance"

just sharing those songs... just could not stop myself from sharing...

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gEc1qzEmojY[/youtube]

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5qhBM3KJY8[/youtube]

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divya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

dheka phir videos post nahi ho rahe😭

Edited by diyadivya - 10 years ago

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arnavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Firstly, I congratulate you for turning into IF-Rockerz

Secondly , I congratulate you for the new beginning you have started in form of this story.

Akka, my heartily congratulations to you for the wonderful start of this story.
Akka, i have read a few chapter of your other story and now its first time i am reading your work from beginning and i am amused to say you have really marked an excellence in this period . the growth i can see in your writing is tremendous.

The beginning of the story where you have given a great simile of the weather with the cracking relationship was so phenomenal. i really liked the way you have penned every word and was imagining every single change of that was happening around there.

it was so painful to read that the relationship which was once a fresh blooming flower is now destroyed with the hands of the lady love who was once a reason to bloom this love and give the faith in love to her husband. But what must be the reason for her to turn so cruel to herself and her beloveds.

Somewhere the pain in her heart was visible for seconds on her face but same time her words ended the every last possibility of rebuilding the relationship.

Akka, you have really created a magic with every emotion you have penned here.
it was a great beginning .

My heart went to the lady who had a miscarriage, but something again unsettled me thinking why his husband was shocked about her pregnancy..

Aww.. she was mentally stressed .. that again break my heart thinking about her condition and plus how her mind must have fought the war to break the heart of her beloved and leave them for forever.

The little boy, omg is Arnav...

it was the worst feeling to read and feel how the boy who considered his mother as his life was leaving him without glancing back at him for once.

Akka, really it was amazing from writing point of view and painful and emotional from the calculative point of view.

Wonderful start.. waiting now for the next chapter.

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arnavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Akka .. my stupid heart took a pandiculation and penned few lines for this SS.

Life was turning cruel at every instance

Taking away the real fragrance

Every emotion was burning inside

Giving no sign of tears in the eye

Words played out by her may be a lie

The heart still cracked with the cracking sky

Filling up the life with a new absence

She was taking away every feeling of pleasance

Since yesterday the heart that desired her presence

Today is marked with the color of distance

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divya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

😊

Edited by diyadivya - 10 years ago

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Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: diyadivya
kirru darling... urz was the most awaited fic during the span of completion of pyaar ka intezaar till date...especially for our mooka...

well i wanna share dis ...

my mum n me were watching indian idol while i was reading ur fic ... the moment i finished and was about to comment , one of the contestant sung "MAA" song from TAARE ZAMEEN PAR, the one which stole the hearts of the universe, n every1 has tears in their eyes listening this song...n dn came " LUKA CHUPPI" from RANG DE BASANTI, and vn i had to comment i dint know what to comment ...

i really wonder how come a mother not think of her child vn she takes such a drastic step of leaving her child????

more than prologue i liked the title "Color Of Distance"

just sharing those songs... just could not stop myself from sharing...

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gEc1qzEmojY[/youtube]

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5qhBM3KJY8[/youtube]

Divya.. It's been long time yaar. How are you dear.

I know right.. But ..When people are in depression.. Generally they won't be in right set of mind. They often take wrong decisions.. Unless there is a very good thought behind that.

Hey thanks for sharing the songs Divya... Try to post link taking off the s from https.

Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago

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Titaliya1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Very amazing start! Very intense! The atmosphere surrounding their room and the storm inside their heart matched quite perfectly! Guess the lil boy is arnav... If so, will he grow up hating women? The lady in the picture seems to be faking her hatredness towards them! I feel she was forced to leave them! Anyways enough of my imagination! Waiting fr this story to unfold! Thanks for pm!