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putti77

@putti77

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Hi Dristi n all

I am facing bad network issues in home also..WiFi is damn slow 😡
RIP Abdul Kalam 😭 😭
One of the saddest day..

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Jai Singh Rathore

@jairathore

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: moonwearer

STAR TREK
The Venus in Spectrum wedded to her deployment role she was
Adonis that benignly charmed all transformed into Mars in her presence
Cupid struck he fell for a damsel so unlike him
Wealth acquired by dint of hard work yet seed of discord
Family relented seeing the resolve in her eyes
He stooped and scooped her as his greatest treasure
She shuddered at the thought of how the world would perceive her
Bellona the role she donned in his presence
His and hers is how she perceived possessions
Me and mine she claimed all else
We , ours and us he longs to hear
She readied herself for one but visualized a trio
The quartet would vie with her for his attention
The toughest to manage she'd always be in his view
A fifty carat golden anniversary gift he'd offer
She'd hop and fret and fume
An arm around her waist laying he'd hiss ENOUGH II'
She'd look up and demurely surrender to him
The way he'd claimed her at a Delhi flat one evening
An epitome of love quixotic in their expression of love
A couple like no other they'd live to be

Oh my god!!!!😲

A remarkably beautiful piece of writing 👏

I have read it atleast 5 times

You have splendidly shown dude and II's journey

Really truly REMARKABLE

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Aina91

@Aina91

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

I would love to see II off to chandigarh and Dude has to go to shatabdi naming ceremony.Always saw II warming up to the bhallas.maybe its time for dude to follow the same path with Iyers.or Maybe dealing with another potshot-taking manny attitude type in a jealous Bala. Or dealing with Iyers principles.

Just like II dreamt of having a baby watching shatabdi,wish dude dreams of the same watching the ceremony.

Dude and II in chandigarh..visiting mandir,shopping and romancing awww...so cuteee

Edited by Aina91 - 10 years ago

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#424

"Pohaade da" she begged softly
He bend her down and kissed her,
with bitter coffee taste

-why he not get irritated nd not said an enough II??bcoz he is thinking about the same???
how i wish he doing so!!

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Mockingbirds
you write beautiful for your age.
putti thanks for index. i was missing this one almost.

Thank you 😛

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: moonwearer

STAR TREK
The Venus in Spectrum wedded to her deployment role she was
Adonis that benignly charmed all transformed into Mars in her presence
Cupid struck he fell for a damsel so unlike him
Wealth acquired by dint of hard work yet seed of discord
Family relented seeing the resolve in her eyes
He stooped and scooped her as his greatest treasure
She shuddered at the thought of how the world would perceive her
Bellona the role she donned in his presence
His and hers is how she perceived possessions
Me and mine she claimed all else
We , ours and us he longs to hear
She readied herself for one but visualized a trio
The quartet would vie with her for his attention
The toughest to manage she'd always be in his view
A fifty carat golden anniversary gift he'd offer
She'd hop and fret and fume
An arm around her waist laying he'd hiss ENOUGH II'
She'd look up and demurely surrender to him
The way he'd claimed her at a Delhi flat one evening
An epitome of love quixotic in their expression of love
A couple like no other they'd live to be

One word...LOVELY...😳😳

@bold...hats off to your imagination power...👏

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namratha

@NSB7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

just here for the review!!

stuck in work beyond my head..not even neck deep!!

APJ is the most terrible news i heard in a while...he was my icon.!

but they say...those who leave lived it to say a goodbye sooner than us...and yes he lived everyday such that his every breath left some message for us

il post the review in the next one

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

% off, for that thing u do

Perfect negotiation 😳..

My fav part in the whole update:..

"I forgot to ask" she picked him up and hugged him tight, hiding in his strength... afraid of the consequences

This is what we call "Soulmates" ryt??...where one finds his/her strength in the other...Nisha the way penned down this part is just beyond praise 😳

Edited by .Harshita. - 10 years ago

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra
Chotti, you have great collection of quotes.
And seem really mature for you age. Seems we have Chotti Namrata with us. You and vibhu and keep posting something which we all enjoy.

Heyy Pritee...🤗

I love reading nd posting quotes...😳..

Me n chotti Namratha??...no...

I am not even 1 wat she is...

She is the sweetest person here...n I admire her...

But am glad if am able to bring smile on ur face through my posts...😛

Edited by .Harshita. - 10 years ago

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namratha

@NSB7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#430

II you are showing me a mirror today!

i can relate to you

1.when excited you dont think beyond the first few steps..later things blow up and bite u in the back!

u were lost in him werent u?? u couldnt think beyond the week that u thought he would be here for??

2.u want to give everybody everything...and in the process end up makings things terrible for yourself?

want to make sure everybody is comfortable everybody is happy everybody gets what they need and in the process forget your own tasks that u need to attend to!!

3.is it terrible to want something so badly but unable to stand up and say it out loud?

afraid it might turn your sort of settled life upside down? afraid it might be the worst decision u would make for many other ppl?? what about u and your dreams da??

somebody told me "take the leap...and learn to fly your way down" do it II

4.silent because u are unable to express your grief? unable to say yes i need to be picked up and held tight? ofcourse...isnt it very easy to loose? but hard to put a brave front?but u arnt going to take the easy way? u wont ask but u want to be held

she picked him up and hugged him tight, hiding in his strength... afraid of the consequences

a big step II? good..hold onto him..sometimes its better to take comfort

DAM

she is unable to express he is unable to understand

im panicking for II

she is keeping it all within her...all that pain is going o be a volcano someday😭

Why is dude being so dense? He isn't just asking her "what's wrong II??" That's all it takes dude

Somebody do repost it for nisha to read

i have to review all the old updates

will do it in a few days

very late..but yeah i will 😊

Edited by NSB7 - 10 years ago