THE HAUNTED MANSION*wedding bells* - Page 27

Originally posted by: Numera*

cool part! continue soon! wait so how come krips didnt mistake angad for shiv before???

thats a raaz😉

im guessing prithvi killed shiv..then when kripa killed prithvi, she moved and krap.. she sees angad and starts hating him cuz he lookz like the guy she loved.. or shiv survived.... and became angaad.. u noo awt im sayin..
this is extreemelyy koooll... i dint read for a while so i went back to pg35 to read the last part.. when i read he turned into prithvii.. u have any idea how much he freaked me out!!! 😆 talk about scaryyy 😉 😛

well i no ur bzy but plz try to continueeee!!!! sooonn

awsome part yaar! u better make this Pritwi away from Kripa otherwise my poor princess will suffer nd cry nd i dunt want her to cry please 👏

Hiiiiii!! You're fanfic is ah-mazing!! Continue sooon!!! I can't wait!!!

FINALLY!!! 😡 😆 You caontinued,I have been waiting for years 😡 But now I am perfectly ok 😳

Awesome part, continue soon 😛

sorry for the delay guys and thansk for the comment nad lastly but not least HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

recap

kripa-listen prithvi I don't luv u but ill try my best to give u happiness if it will ever turn in love I cant give any guarantee

that's when angad steps in

angad-nahin kripa u cant do that

todays part

kripa-shiv u

shiv-no kripa im angad yaad karo prithvi bhoot

kripa-shiv yeh tum kya mazak karreho

angad-that's it prithvi what u done to her

prithvi-maine kya kiya shiv

angad-kripa pls try and remember we were in the house then prithvi made us come here

kripa got sum flashes

kripa-prithvi yeh shiv

prithvi-yeh to use yaad dilara hai

that's when shiv came in to the porch

shiv-hey guys I was woah ure me

angad-I no crazy but at the moment shut up

kripa-look whoever u are I think u need to see a doctor

angad-(thinks)angad soch kya karu kya IDEA!

angad sees the vortex is behind the coupard if he can get kripa to go back thru it they'll survive,angad goe sot kripa grabs her from the arm and takes her through the vortex

back to present

kripa-angad prithvi hes gonna kill us

angad got the coupbard and shut it

angad-kripa this is all crazy and im not in a mood to die well not yet anyways so pls explain

kripa-explain what angad

angad-well firstly u knew I had a lookalike

kripa-angad vo,basically what happened was

flashback

kripa-I luv u shiv

shiv-I luv u too

prithvi comes and punches shiv

kripa-prithvi wat u playing at

prithvi-he does not luv u I do

kripa-prithvi I don't luv u I luv shiv

prithvi-wud u luv me if he wasn't here

kripa-no ure my mate (puts her hand on his shoulders)try and understand prithvi

kumkum came in

kumkum-shiv tum tik ho

prithvi-kripa marry me

kripa-what r u out of ur head

prithvi-(he got kumkum and put a knfe by her neck)kripa if u don't marry me ill kill her

kripa-prithvi wat r u doing ur supposed to be our mate

prithvi-im sick of being ur mate kripa r u gonna marry me or u gonna lose kumkum

kumkum-kripa help

kripa-f9 ill marry you

shiv-no kripa

prithvi got the knife and stabbed shiv

kripa-SHIV

prithvi-one gone kumkum will be next if u don't shut up and marry me

kumkum got out his grip and slapped him

prithvi-now ue gonna pay

he got the knife out of shiv stomach and was going to stab kumkum when he felt a sharp pain in his chest,he looked at the stabber it was kripa standing there eyes ful of hatred and tears

prithvi fell to the floor

back to the present

kripa-(tears)and that's bout it

angad-and shiv

kripa-he died and after that my faith off god went and then I saw u in college rememba I hugged u on the first day

angad-oh yeah tumhe laga ki mein shiv hoon

kripa-yeah lekin….phir mughe pata chala ke tum angad ho angad the player and I hated u for having shivs face mughe kabhi nahi laga ke mera kal phir aise mere samne ajayega(tears)maine prithvi ko mara yehi mughe din raat tarpati rahi aur ab vo(crying)

she hugs angad,thtas when the coupard moves and out comes prithvi

prithvi-kripa u never learnt did u looks like well have to sort out angad the way we sorted out shiv

that's when the others cum in

shaz-wats happening here omg whose he

unum-kripa

laksh-wats happening

prithvi-aww look kripa more frens well kill all of them

kripa runs to prithvi and goes on the floor an holds his feet

kripa-prithvi tum kya chahte ho mughe batao lekin pls mere dosto ko kuch nahi karma

prithvi-(gets her up)f9 mein tumhare sab dost eke chordoonga ek hi shart mein aur vo hai ke tum mugse shaddi karlo

kripa-aur phir ull let my frens go

prithvi-yeah

kripa-f9

pritvi opens the front door for them

laiba-no were not gonna let u marry him kripa

kripa-pls laiba go

anisha-no

laksh-kripa don't marry him

kripa-pls guys go I beg u angad u tel them

angad-lekin kripa

kripa-I beg u angad u no wta happened to shiv I cant let that happen again

angad f9 guys lets go

angad finally manages to take them out the house

outside

angad drops them by the bustop an dthen starts walking back to the house

unum-wat u doing angad

laiba-tum kahajaarahe ho

angad-I cant let kripa marry him

laksh-dude ill come with u

angad-no

Rishi-let us come with u angad

angad-nahi tum log ghar jao na dguys tell ym mom and dad I luv them kya pata

Rishi-just shut up kuch nahi hoga tumhe

laksh-were coming with u

angad-no pls guys

angad hugs them all and walks back towards the house

preview-kripas marriage

Awesome Part Shaz

Poor Kripa this Prithvi should die h8 him

o god.. that lil prithvii!!!!!! he cant do that!

angad wil save her! i no he wil..

continue sooooooooonn

im soo soorie but i kinda find it funny that shes marrying a bhoot and bhoot prithvi ko bhi akal nahi hai ke hes dead omg
how can he marry her for heavens sake
sheshh
nywayz cont soon

aww pooor kripa....i hate tht psycooo