THE HAUNTED MANSION*wedding bells* - Page 26

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awesome 👏 👏
plzz continue fast
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: memze

oh is it happy bday to her i love her ff and id love to do a part 4 her now but ive got a horrible cold and headache and thats why i havent been continuing that often anyways ill try and continue tommorow and yea u r ver smart😛

😡😡 continue fast
Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!! did you stop writing????!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeease don't stop writing. It's really the best fan-fic i hav ever read!!! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase continue!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

angad is shocked to hear what he has just heard,prithvi pulls kripa towards him by her shoulder

kripa-choro mughe

prithvi-kripa me and u r gonna go on a trip back to simla where we first met rememba and this time there wont be any fights cuz im gonna make sure u don't remember anything

a huge vortex opens,prithvi and kripa go in and angad silently sneaks in

im really sorry guys iv delayed so much but its juts that ive been busy now that skools back on i got exams, dance practises and lots more, and when i do come on the comp i go to the ff section and convince myself im gonna write but then i see ff updated and i cant resist but read them and by the time i finish my times up on teh comp sorry for the delay but im writing a promo for now as its l8 next part shud be up tomorrow

hope u like the promo

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh thank god u didnt stop writing this ff lol i thought that u didnt wanna continue anymore lol!! cant wait for the next part the promo is awesome!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome promo 😛 now u better cont soon 😉 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

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Prithvi looked at kripa and a tear fell out his eye

prithvi-kripa sab kuch tik tha yaad hai hum sab khush the phir tumne kyon

kripa-prithvi wat u done was horrid,u thought id stay with u after all of that

prithvi-kripa u cudve handed me to the police lekin tumne u killed me

kripa-if I didn't u wudve killed everyone

prithvi-I told u the secret about the house in shimla rememba

kripa-yea I thought u were making it up

prithvi-well now u know and ure gonna pay today

angad is shocked to hear what he has just heard,prithvi pulls kripa towards him by her shoulder

kripa-choro mughe

prithvi-kripa me and u r gonna go on a trip back to simla where we first met rememba and this time there wont be any fights cuz im gonna make sure u don't remember anything

a huge vortex opens,prithvi and kripa go in and angad silently sneaks in

(right guys just to clarify sumthing they've gone back in time and kripa doesn't rememba anything)

kripa was with her friends shiv and jay and kumkum,kumkum was talking to kripa,while they were talking angad had snuck behind the door and tried listening and understanding what exactly was happening,he then saw shiv who was him,wait he thought how can huh whats happening,yeah ur guessing right shiv looked exactly like angad

kripa-hey mein shiv ko bataloon

kumkum-yea u love him right so deri kyon

kripa-ok mein jaoon

kumkum-jao

kripa was going when prithvi grabbed her arm

kripa-prithvi

prithvi-kripa I have to talk to u its important

kripa-ha

prithvi-idar nahin mere saat ao

now angad was proper confused ,then he remembered prithvis words "ill make sure u wont rememba anything".he couldn't let this happen he had to tell kripa the truth,he silently followed prithvi and kripa who went in to the porch,they were in the same house but it looked abit different and it was snowing outside,he saw a sign saying shimla

prithvi-kripa shiv told me sumthing today

kripa-he did wat?

prithvi-he told me he luvs kumkum

kripa-(tears)huh tum sach kehrahe ho

prithvi-yeah I knew u like him and I just didn't want to see u get hurt

krip-lekin shiv kumkum

prithvi-bachpan se chahta hai,dekho kripa main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon

kripa-bolo(still tear)

pritvi-dekho kripa main abhi kuch kehna jaaraha hoon jo shayad use kehne ki baad tum mughe nafrat karo,lekin mein ab yeh baat mere dil mein nahi chupasakta

kripa-kya baat

prithvi-kripa I luv u

kripa-(shocked)wat!

prithvi-ha bachpan se jab se hum dono pehli baar mile the park mein vaha tak ab tak,mai hamesha chahta tha ke tum bhi mughe pasand karo lekin tum to mughe pasand kya dekhte bhi nahin ,aur jab maine pata chala ke tum shiv se pasand karti hoon to mein tutgaya yaad hai mein school nahin aya kuch dino ke liye

kripa-prithvi mein,mein kya kahoon mughe samaj nahi aaraha,tum …mugh.se

prithvi-ha kripa mein tumse pyar karta hoon aur hamesha karta hoon chaho tum mughe pyar karo ya na karo

kripa-prithvi (she holds his face)kya tum,will u go out with me

prithvi-kripa do u mean this

kripa-listen prithvi I don't luv u but ill try my best to give u happiness if it will ever turn in love I cant give any guarantee

that's when angad steps in

angad-nahin kripa u cant do that

preview-murder!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome Part Shaz

whos murder is gonna happen now? cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool part! continue soon! wait so how come krips didnt mistake angad for shiv before???
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: unum ali

Awesome Part Shaz

whos murder is gonna happen now? cont soon

thanks😛

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