Arshi FF : Merger Thrd #3 Chp 34 - Pg 86 - 2 Posts

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#491

Wonderful updates
Loved them
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#492

awesome update...too good...👏

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TanBan

@TanBan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#493

I have been reading this story for sometime now but, your thoughts at at the end of this update really got to me. I am not married and I have a long time ahead of me before I have to even think about marriage. But I have seen it with my cousins who got married and when I read what you wrote, I was really amazed at your words because that is what I felt when I saw my cousins getting married and starting anew, completely anew. Everything which made them who they were slowly starts changing to be able to keep their husbands happy. I don't know if it is natural or it has become natural because of society and years of doing so, but I sometimes miss them as they were before their marriages.

Onto the story, I love Khushi and I adore her strength. I love Arnav too but he has not shown the level of compassion that Khushi did till now. I might be missing something here because these two fit together like two parts of the puzzle but I have not see that same kind of 'I will be there for you Khushi till the end' or 'I need to know if Khushi is sad or happy about this' or even wondering about her reaction to some situations like leaving her family or telling her himself that he wants her to continue to support her family. I hope Arnav says that in later updates and gives Khushi reasons to trust him.

Please continue writing this amazing story.

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#494

Lovely update..thw gradual shifts n arnavs persona was wrotten nicely..abt hw this next level of relatnship has changed him...pls do update soon.

N if you shift to blog, pls pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#495

Good to hear from you...

hope the person close to you.. will get better...

no worries life have ups and downs...

everyone is busy building their life...

we understand... you take care...

and happy to hear you going to continue this story...👏

Edited by Linsie - 9 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#496

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docs

@docs

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#497

Hey suri. I hope all well at your end.

Wow you have given words to the million thoughts a girl faces at the biggest turn of her life. Well said n very well written

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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#498

Very nice update.. Thanks for the pm

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#499

I recently came across this story dear... I completed going through this story last week... I genuinely loved it dear...🤗

I thought of commenting after completing all chapters instead of commenting on every single chapter.

You have fabulously described merger as in merger of two people, two souls, two hearts...❤️

Khushi is little bit apprehensive about trusting Arnav because she has seen people suffering after getting married...

But I feel Arnav's love will give her the security & strength to trust him because he is different from others... He truly loves her so he will allow her to retain her individual identity... Then she will submit herself completely to Arnav... Then they will finally become one...

Please dear try & update quickly...

PS: I have sent a buddy request. Please accept it & do send pm when you update.😛