Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7

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Sobhan006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

It's nearly time for CH 5... I'm ready and waiting to read...

Any chance for an update soon

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Sanaya Javaid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Roop_P

😊 Zoya I was expecting some Ghalib here in return of this, You are not in your form these days...

Anyway I was reading it again and I noticed one thing, Arnav called Mr. Gupta for permission or rather I should say informing him for Bombay trip,but how and why Mr.Gupta trusts him and it seems like he is so calm on this matter.There seems something deep in it.I am sure The author 😊 will reveal it with due time .My mind was stuck to it.

Roop di ,

a good observation👏

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xZoyax

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Roop_P

😊 Zoya I was expecting some Ghalib here in return of this, You are not in your form these days...

Anyway I was reading it again and I noticed one thing, Arnav called Mr. Gupta for permission or rather I should say informing him for Bombay trip,but how and why Mr.Gupta trusts him and it seems like he is so calm on this matter.There seems something deep in it.I am sure The author 😊 will reveal it with due time .My mind was stuck to it.

A good point and I am noticing a pattern

1-He told Arnav, Khushi knows more than him about Shesh Mahal, It means Shashi also knows something about Arnav before in hand .Just a thought

2-Shashi is very protective towards Khushi and he also wants Khushi to explore,but my thinking is he keeping a close eyes on Khsuhi by himself .Definitely on Arnav too ,after all Shashi himself is a resourceful person.

I am so waiting for her to reveal these things or whatever the reason is out there.

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AdventureAwaits

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Chapter 4

First thank you for pm

It was as always beautiful and well written.

I like Shashi a lot. I love his bonding with Khushi. That's a true father.

I felt with Khushi and when she got nightmares even more.

I think that she saw something very bad in her past but can't or wont remember. Maybe her brain got some blockade.

And how would Arnav react when he hear about Khushi's past?

Thank you very much Faiqa for this amazing story. I know there is so much to be reveals.

Can't wait for next update.

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Edited by ZANADI - 10 years ago

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Lazyblazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

waiting

but I know

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Roop_P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: apinky81

A good point and I am noticing a pattern

1-He told Arnav, Khushi knows more than him about Shesh Mahal, It means Shashi also knows something about Arnav before in hand .Just a thought

2-Shashi is very protective towards Khushi and he also wants Khushi to explore,but my thinking is he keeping a close eyes on Khsuhi by himself .Definitely on Arnav too ,after all Shashi himself is a resourceful person.

I am so waiting for her to reveal these things or whatever the reason is out there.

The 2nd point is a killer ,I must say.👏
Yes as a resourceful man Shashi himself can go to certain length to find about Arnav and all.

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Tina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Amazingly written!!! Love it :)

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xZoyax

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Roop_P

The 2nd point is a killer ,I must say.👏
Yes as a resourceful man Shashi himself can go to certain length to find about Arnav and all.

True and that is what I am thinking of that he is very much aware of that...Shashi's character is mysterious itself...

So waiting for the update

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Chapter 4 has me really intrigued and I can't wait to see what you have instore for us in chapter 5. Mr Raizada has some making up to do.😃

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Aimer_vous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: ArhiMaria
Chapter 4 has me really intrigued and I can't wait to see what you have instore for us in chapter 5. Mr Raizada has some making up to do.😃

same here