~*Dhoom Machale*~Chap 4 Pg 28 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

i cant wait for the next part...i wanna see kripa..n the girls gang in action soon... 😛

yes ur gonna c kripa n the gang in action soonb but first i hav 2 finish of mishti😆...am gonna post a part today but dont knw wen😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
I want to see Kripa in action today btw just read your other ff it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 2: Live and Let Live

Angad turned around smirking and he and the rest of the gang slowly took of their helmets. Angad put his hand in his hair and ruffled it, he slowly turned around with a big smirk on his face.

A: Hello dear wife

Mishti was shocked at what she saw, she first thought it was just her seeing her things she closed her eyes and shook her head and opened her eyes again to make sure she wasn't seeing things but still it was Angad who she saw infront of her eyes.

M: "No it can't be you Angad, no my Angad can't be an underworld gangster" said mishti still in shock

A: Well guess what Angad Khanna the Rockstar is the most wanted person in the world.

M: "No you cant be an underworld gangster…My Angad I know is friendly, sweet, caring and a nice person" said Mishti in tears

A: Darling This is the real Angad…The Angad you know is Fake…and one more thing from now on don't say my Angad because Angad Khanna doesn't belong to anyone. Mishti I'm feeling so sad that you're going to leave this world so soon but it was your fault, we as a gang live and we let other people live but once you double cross us or do something that's against us then just think that your gone. We just don't go anywhere and start shooting like mad.

While Angad was talking mishti slowly started moving next to the phone which was on the cabinet next to her bed.

S: "Boss..i doubt that she'll ever talk after this."

A: Get back to looking for the file ZAL

S: Yess Boss

Mishti slowly took the phone and dialed the police office but Angads voice startled her and the phone fell from her hands.

A: "You b****" he slapped mishti

S: Arre is this the time to phone people…cant you see we are having a conversation here

K: we have like 10 mins until those stupid officers come yaar. Can I do the honours ZAD

J: Why do you always vote to do the shooting ZRN

K: I don't know yaar but I like the feeling of guns

S-R: You're weird

S: guys stop it now its decided that the boss will do it

K: ughh

Angad takes out his gun out from the back pocket of his pants and he points the gun at mishti

A: Say bye-bye to the world mishti…this is the last you'll see it.

J: (excited) found it boss

A: (confused) What

J: The file

A: Good job ZAH

Angad pulls the trigger infront of Mishti's head.

A: Bye Darling

Angad and the rest of the gang put on their helmets then Karan throws a badge on mishti and all of them run out of the house. We hear police sirens coming to the mansion while Angad and the rest of the gang going from the mansion with their bikes.

Next Part: She's a Devil

Note: Ur surely gonna like the next...Kripa's Entry😆and poor angu😆😆i'm waiting 4 ur comments😃

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
👏 to goood man u rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cont soon
guys i m back i m reading ff's again loll 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

👏 to goood man u rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cont soon
guys i m back i m reading ff's again loll 😆

tnx yaar😳

glad to knw ur back again😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
Wonderful Part

looking forward to Kripas entry
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
tht was such a fab part!!!!!! haha bye bye mishtyyyyy 😃 btw i was waitin 4 my dateeeee 😃 😃 lol continue ssxoooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
gr8 part!! waiting 4 kripa to make her entry 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
dat was an awesome part plz cont soon cnt wait 4 kripas entry 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
rockinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
very nice......mind-blowing...wonderful.... excellent... fantastic....superb..... collllllllll..... i'am loving it totally...👏
continue soon...me waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃

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