~*Dhoom Machale*~Chap 4 Pg 28 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

tnx😳am trying 2 fit in ur date somewhere but dont worry u'll get it😆

hehe dats ok then i can wait😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

tnx...wat makes u think that

by the way wen r u gonna cont ur ff only you

she has finished only u as far as i remember it

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg I can't believe he killed her! That was awesome, lol. Can't wait for Kripa's entry, it'll surely be rocking! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part cont soon can't wait for Kripa's entry. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow..interesting fan-fic continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

tnx for the comments guys

the next part is gonna be up in a few secs

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 3: She's a Devil

Mishti was buried the next week, the police force decided to call their best officers since there was more murders and stealing by the Zeroixs. At home Angad wouldn't eat, talk to anyone and always stayed in his room after mishti's death. The Khanna's were concerned about his behavior and so they decided to call Aaliyah back home. Aaliya came back the next week and tried to cheer Angad up but she could not.

5 months later

We see Angad in the studio singing the last song for his latest album.

tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 3
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi - 2
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi - 2
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi

tera jaadu aaisa chhaya
har zarre mein tujhko paaya
chaahe woh hall ho shorogul ka
chahe ho veerana aalam
har pal hai maujudgi teri
har mausam hai tera mausam
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi - 2
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi

main karta hoon laakh bahane
par bin tere dil na maane
jitna tujhko bhoolna chahu
utna hi tujhe paas main paaun
tu na jaane aye mehbooba main tere ishq mein kitna dooba
tujhe bhul jana jaana mumkin nahi - 2
tu yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi - 3
tu yaad na yaad na yaad na yaad na
yaad na aaye aaisa koi din nahi

All the people there thought that this song is especially for mishti but to Angad this song held no meaning to him. After Angad finished it he went to home.

Aa: Bhai can you pick up my friend from the airport…She's coming from Australia

A: why don't you do it yourself…she's your friend not mine

Aa: Please bhai I cant I've got to go to a match today please bhai

A: Okay then anyways who is it

Aa: I think you know her Kripa--

Angad interrupts her before she could finish

A: You mean that Kripa, Kripa Sharma

Aa: yeah

A: please tell me she's not staying here

Aa: Actually she's staying with us until she finds a place for herself.

A: (under his breath) OMG No…please god delay her flight or anything just as long as she doesn't come here

He had known her since he was 8 years old when she moved in his street. Kripa and Aaliya had become quick friends and Kripa used to come to khanna's most of the time. She liked to annoy Angad at every chance she got and Angad could do nothing about it. She left Mumbai a few years after her parents death and joined the police force. One of the biggest reasons she joined the police force is to find out who killed her family.

Later Angad went to pick up Kripa from the airport, he came 10 mins early so he went to the caf. The line was long and like 15 mins later he was at the front of the line. He hurriedly bought a cup of coffee and started walking fast to look for Kripa. On the other we see a girl walking looking around. They both bump into each other by accident and Angad spills the cup of coffee on her.

Note: this part is not finished yet.... i have to go somewhere now i'll cont it later...waiting 4 ur comments

The Continuation: A-k fights😆Actually kripa annoying angad😆😆

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭 not fair CONTINUE RIGHT NOW 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooh someone is gonna be pissed 😆 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww awesome ant wait 4 the rest 😉

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