~*Dhoom Machale*~Chap 4 Pg 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
well i think rach guess about the code names are right... when i tried to figure it out i got the same thing.....😊
if i had a chance i would go on a date with Sujal..but then as he is already booked i mean married..it's ok..never mind....😆

please post the first part soon...me waiting eagerly....😊😛😃






Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
hey can u set up dates 4 each of us with 1 of our hot favs 4 some time?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

hey can u set up dates 4 each of us with 1 of our hot favs 4 some time?????
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well i was thinkin of that since most of them r playerz...evry1 except sujal😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehee surya!!! lol ayt u can do tht...but i still get angad 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep

hehee surya!!! lol ayt u can do tht...but i still get angad 😆

lol..ur still gettin but after he dumps u the otherz will get a chance😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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First Part coming up in Half an hour guyz
Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1: Betrayal

There's a big sign reading 'Nakul Malhotra's Mansion' next to a big gate made out of metal bar then from a far view we see six guys dressed up in leather pants and jacket with their helmets on where going on their bikes. They all have an arm band on with their name codes on, the leader jumped on his red Suzuki hayabusa 1600 the rest of them had the same model but in different colours. They drove out of the gates with boss leading the way and zoomed down the dusty roads of Mumbai.

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They parked about 5 meters away from the Khanna's Mansion. They started walking to the back of the Khanna mansion and when they were at the back wall they looked to around to see if they're was anyone nearby.

A: Okay come on guys…ZLL you go first

Sujal climbed up the wall and jumped down on the newly mowed grass while Angad was looking around to see if anybody was coming. One by one they jumped inside the mansion, they sneak in to the mansion and go upstairs to the first room on the left. Mishti who was cleaning up the room heard the door to her close so she turned around and was shocked to see the zeroix's (that's the gangs full name) in side her room.

M: Boss what are you doing here…I told you not to come to my house and if it was emergency then you should have called to me I would have come personally.

A: (in a deadly voice) Mishti dear you know that I don't like to take orders but I give orders instead.

Josh sat down on the bed and started munching his chocolate bar while the rest were looking for something.

A: "Get your ass of the bed ZAH I didn't bring you here so that you can lazily sit anywhere and start munching. Get up and start looking the file" shouted Angad angrily

J: Sorry boss

Sahil and Rishi chuckled softly, that was josh for you...everytime he went anywere he would first sit down and start munching on a piece. He always gets shouted and scolded by Angad but he always forgets about everything when they go to another place.

A: Mishti where is the file

M: What file sir?

A: Your time is up mishti…stop pretending and give me that file. That way it would be easier for us and you.

M (shocked and scared) "S Sir I don't know what your talking about" trembled mishti

A: " Mishti you wouldn't be sweating and trembling if you didn't know what we are talking about. Trembling and Sweating only means one thing only 'a lie'." laughed Angad

Angad starts walking near her and she starts backwards until she bangs on the wall. By now mishti was sweating and trembling crazily. She was disgusted by this guys behavior, he knew that she was a married woman and he was standing like 5 cm away from her. She doesn't know even know them properly. Last year she signed a contract with them saying that she would work with them. She didn't know what kind of jobs they would give her, first month she was getting small jobs like delivering a few parcels to some other people but after the first month she got more big and dangerous jobs. She didn't want to work with them anymore but she couldn't do anything since she signed a contract saying that she would finish her full 1 year. Around the 8th month she hooked with the police and from that time she started giving the police quarter's small information about the Zeroixs. She knew that one day the Zeroix's would find about her betrayal but one thing she didn't know was that once she put hands together with the Zeroix's that her destiny would be written by them.

A: so are you gonna give me the file or are gonna play the hard way.

M: What will you do If I don't give the folder! Huh will you shoot? Then go ahead and do it because I am not going to give you that folder. That file is going to go to where it should have gone long time, to the cops.

S: "Uh-Oh I don't like where this is going" said sahil fully knowing what Angad would do next.

A: You sure got guts girl but don't be sure of yourself and if I kill you then do you mind telling how will that file reach the Cops?

M: Have you ever heard of the name Angad Khanna the rockstar…oops I forgot that you guys are a few b******* who are scared of the police. How would you know the outside when all you do is hide in that mansion of yours and run away from the police 24/7. Anyways I left the file somewhere only my husband knows about and I left a piece of note explaining what it is. I think you guys should start finding your self a shelter since the police are gonna be behind in a few hours.

At this point the gang were laughing so hard. Mishti who had no idea what they were laughing as far as she could remember she had said nothing that was funny. She looked at them confused but what she didn't know was that the next thing they would do would be the biggest shock of her life.

*********End Of Part 1************

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Heloo dear readers,

there's the first part and let me tell you something this is not anything like i planned for my first but what could i do once u start writing it always goes the opposite of wat u planned to write. i wanted to add mishti's death but i used 4 1/4 pages of microsoft word. the next part will be mishti's death atlast. i try and cont this early but i hav 2 write my other 2 ff's aswell so the next mite be a bit late

Next part: Live and Let Live

Enjoy and am eagerly waitin 4 ur comments😃

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgggg fabbb part Ahlam!!!!!!!!! wow simply great!!!! so like are their faces covered???? because mishtey was like oh im angads wife....but angad was there??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep

omgggg fabbb part Ahlam!!!!!!!!! wow simply great!!!! so like are their faces covered???? because mishtey was like oh im angads wife....but angad was there??

they had helmets on😆😆poor poor mishty she doesnt knw wat's cumin her way😆😆by the way how do u knw my name

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

they had helmets on😆😆poor poor mishty she doesnt knw wat's cumin her way😆😆by the way how do u knw my name

lol thought sooooo oh becuz i checked ur profile😛

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