TaaRey Collab Story - Is It Over?? (Ch-4 Page -27) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
No words to explain hw much I liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
awesome updt
loved the chapter
love taani she is strong bold and independent
excited to see how things will turn out in india
when she and d3 gang will come face to face
updt nxt part soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
nice and intersting concept
loved it
loved to seee taani's success and gang's struggle
waiting for the next
how gang will react once they meet taani
and vice versa

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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Awesome update
It was beautifully written
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
I knew it that I am going to cry a lot coz of this stry rey is so helpless the happy go lucky guy is now no where to seen gang is taking diff career rey is lost alone 😭 he love taani but he know he can't tell her that hreatbreaks rey dad harsh words were painful rey was quite gang will work for this event where taani will be there hmm taani have change beyond my imagination she doesn't look like taani hmm she coming to Mumbai thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
mind blowing part. loved it.
d3 gang is in need of money.
rey saw taani in tv... he said to his dad that he is ready for work with his friends in event.
taani is so successful... pierce is her friend. it was he who helped her when she came to france.
she overcome past or she thinks so.
after cumng in front of rey, will she feel something or not.
waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
amazingg...i loved ur writing mimi...n in love wid ur os SHE...
dis one ws awesome as well...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Amazing update...
Rey and his frnds in such a bad conditions...
Rey was lost in her picture but still thought abt his frnds...
Taani is so successful now and have a nice frnds...
Waiting for taarey meet...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Great start
Loved the update
Taani has surely changed now
Rey going to work at the back stage
In the show in which Taani is going to judge...
Awesome
Taani smokes 😲
Shocking
I guess these are the side effects of glamour world

Looked like Taani have moved on
But completely???
Its clear that Rey still loves Taani
But want to know weather Taani still loves him or not

Can't wait to read further
So PLEASE...
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Hello Girls!! 1st of all thank you to all of you for lovely comments. Thank you for praising and criticizing. I'm glad to see you girls are liking this Taani who is completely different from the show.
In this story Taani is not holding on the past.She has moved on and living her life enjoying her success. She is someone who loves to live in present not reminiscing past. Taani is someone who enjoys her success, she is independent and sexually extrovert.
You can guess it won't be a typical love story.
Thank You Priyanka di for hatching this awesome idea where Taani can be shown in a different light.
PS. I have pointed a few silly mistakes in last part. I will edit them. If you point out in typo or spelling mistake please post it. I will edit it.
PPS. We are changing the teaser a little bit.

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'No Rey! No!' We can't work there. 'Taani will be there. She, who is responsible for this,' Shouted Vicky as Rey noticed them about the job arrangements he had done.

'But Vicky, we need..' Rey was cut midway by Vicky.

'I know.. we need money.. But I can't do that.'

'Vicky shut up!' As Sharon roared Vicky came to a pause. 'Why are you blaming her? Did she ever say something, which will affect our reputation? Did she even mention about us anywhere?' The brown eyes of Sharon were burning with anger. Vicky did not dare to add another word in his defense. Taking a breath Sharon continued to speak in a lower tone of voice. 'I guess it's time to accept we're paying for our deeds. And we can't change the past but we can make a better future for ourselves. Don't know about you guys but I'm in.'

'I'm in too.' Simmi added in a low but determined voice. 'I can't sit like this blaming Taani for what happened to us. I don't want to live in the past.' She paused to take a breath. 'Count me in Rey.'

'and you Swayam?' Asked Rey shifting attention on Swayam.

'I don't know Rey. I'm happy to see my sister touching the sky. But I'm ashamed of myself.' Swayam paused. 'I wanna see her again.. but I'm ashamed to face her.'

'Swayam..' Sharon hold his hand sitting next to him. 'Past is past.. we can always learn from our mistake.'

Rey has always admired and respected Sharon. If it was not for Sharon he would have backed out, thinking about facing the bitter past.

*Flashback*

'you are an embarrassment Taani.' Yelled an angry Rey. Her hurt and teary eyes gave him a sadist pleasure. A cruel intention of hurting Taani purposely possessed Rey.

'Rey I'm sorry. I did not mean to embarrass you.'

'But you did.' Rey spat at her. 'Not only me, but your brother and all of our team members.' An eerie silence settled there for a few seconds. 'I need a break from all this. I cannot go on like this.'

Taani did not say a word on the day. She left. Somewhere in his heart Rey knew it was not Taani's fault. But his ego stopped him to confront Taani.' A month later Rey received the news of Taani went out of India to study art.'

******

What an irony! Rey thought. One day he said to Taani she is an embarrassment.. and today he can not gather enough courage to face her as he is ashamed of himself.

As the five of them landed on their job for the first time, they met with their team leader, Jack Reese. With funny accent and weird hair cut he looked like cartoon but he made five of them hate him instanly.

'Rey Singhania!' He shouted bring his face awfully to Rey's face, he had to take a step back as he continued. 'you will not get any facilities 'cause you're son of Mr. Singhania.'

'and you' Jack moved towards Sharon. 'Just because you're pretty and a girl don't think I will spare you from heavy work.' He continued a few more minutes as the gang continued not paying attention to whatever he was blabbering.

'DO YOU UNDERSTAND!' He shouted at last. As all nodded, positively he left [thankfully].

'what a jackass!' Said a disgusted Swayam.

'I'm sure he has not brush in last few month.' Rey added fanning a hand in front of his mouth.

'Guys! Let's move with our work.' Sharon chirped in. 'This jack ass has already gave us our work. I'll be with Simmi. Jack ass wanted us to move all the gifts the producers' gave to Taani in her suite.' She said as she started to move. 'Byee guys. See ya soon.'

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Though she travelled in business class, yet long flight journey made Taani tired in a great length. Waving at fans at airport, posing for the camera did not cheer up her mood. As she made way to the waiting car, she throw back her head in exhaustion.

'Grace!' Taani said with her eyes still closed. 'I need a full body massage as soon as I hit the hotel.

Her personal secretary Grace is a pretty lady with a little heavy figure. Though she is only a handful years older than Taani yet she is little bit motherly. As she made a call to arrange what Taani has wished for Taani spoke softly.

'Thank you Grace. You are my life saving angel.' In answer, Grace smiled softly.

As Taani entered her suite she realized Grace has already made arrangement for body massage.Taking a quick sour she surrendered to the relaxation the body massage was giving her.

Taani was in half asleep state when she heard the door bell. Grace opened the door. She heard two voices.. Known voices but could not remember whose voice they are.

She heard their conversation with Grace.

'we're here to deliver the gifts producers have sent.' One of the voices said.

Grace instructed them something about placing the gifts. She could not relax properly till she finds out whom the voice belong to. Getting up she put on the red over gown as she made her way towards the source of the voice.

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As Sharon and Simmi entered the luxurious duplex suite, they were praying silently to not to face Taani. But their prayer were not answered. As they were moving the items, they saw her coming down.

'Sharon, Simmi!' She sounded surprised.

As Sharon watched her, she realized Taani has changed a lot even physically. She was pretty before but she has the star aura around her now.

'Hello!' Sharon said in a low voice, Simmi was still trying to find her voice.

'wow! Seeing you girls after a long time' Taani said as she sat on a couch crossing her legs. 'so how are you guys? How is dance going on?'

Sharon bit her lip for a moment thinking the one they usually blame for ending their career do not actually know anything about their career.

'Actually none of us want to be a professional dancer anymore.' Sharon answered. 'I think we should go now. It's our working hours.'

'You girls are working here?'Taani raised an eyebrow. 'that will be great. I can use company of a few old friends.' She smiled at them.

As Sharon and Simmi took a few steps towards the door Taani called out.

'Wait.' Taani said standing up elegantly from her sitting position. Then she made way towards the piles of gifts the producers have sent her. She brought out two packets of expensive cookies and chocolates from the gifts. Then she made her way towards the girls.

'Take them.' Taani offered.

'Sorry but we can't take it.'

'Come on girls.' She smiled. 'Don't be so forma. Consider it as a gift from an old friend.'

Sharon accepted the gifts, smiling at her they left the room.

Something is wrong. Taani thought. They have many memories. Not all of them are good. But one thing she knows surely was those guys.. her brother.. Rey all were passionate dancers. All of them left the dream of becoming a famous dancer. She connected the dots and concluded something went horribly wrong in her absence.

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Promo shooting at noon and press conference in evening. It was Taani's routine of the day. She sat with a cigar in her hand waiting for the shot to be ready. A knock o the door notified her it's ready. As she reached the shooting spot an assistant came forward to remove her dressing gown.

'Let's take a break.' The cameraman shouted. 'Taani, change our costume.'

As she went towards the dressing room, she received the 2nd shock! 'Rey!'

'Hi Taani.' Rey murmured.

'What are you doing here?'

'My job.' It was a to the point answer.

'So you're assisting your dad here?'

'No. I'm gonna work at back stage. I've joined the event management company which is working here.'

'Okay!' Taani took a moment. 'What is going on? I met Sharon and Simmi yesterday. They did not seem like the Sharon and Simmi I knew. You have changed drastically too.'

'Even you have changed.' Rey cut in before she could say more. He did not feel like talk about their downfall. Somewhere in his heart he is insecure maybe a little jealous of the life she's living. 'In a positive way though.' Rey she has earned it. You have not. He scolded himself for his thinking.

He tried to see if there are any emotions playing in her eyes apart from being shock. But there was not.

'I should go now.' Taani said. 'But it's nice to see you guys here.' She added before leaving, flashing a small smile.

Rey sighed looking at her retreating figure.

'It's nice to see you too...I guess' He said as Taani went out of his sight.


Edited by --MISANTHROPIST - 10 years ago

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