Arshi FF-Falling in Love Again- Ch15-19 upd 16/11

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

ARSHI are going through so much pain ,but that is and will be their strength.. Hope after Arnav's pying this debt against all odds make his Khushi to give him a second chance and they both can learn to give each other a space of acceptance..

There is no doubt what Arnav did in the past was the worst, but now he is repenting. and mending his ways

hope things work out in between them and for them.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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sweetydoll32

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Awesome updates dear please update soon

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yoga123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Nice one...thanks for the PM

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Beautifully written...

pure agony for both...

he did redeem for her...

the only way he can by burning his sin

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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lovetoread08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Res😉 unres.below

Edited by lovetoread08 - 9 years ago

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lovetoread08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Hi,Sorry for late comment.Finally caught and bowled by last 4 chapters.What to say chapter 9 not only amazed me but made an imprint in my mind. Sentences like she was sewing her torn and slit pieces, he lost spirit coming back to her life,his heart too had became like stone, truly gave insight of their thoughts.As the chapter progressed it catch and hold the reader's eye. What to say about the unique gifts, you just made the thought of proposing magnificent. Arnav's each gift indicates

to take baby step's and rejuvenate with him. In chapter 10. I really liked the para which starts from I did slit your soul... and excellent sentence says he is in the gutter can I be the anchor for him. In chapter 11 you maintained the rhythm of the story by not just comparing the love with life,showing the glimpse of South Indian culture along with Khushi's outburst. Chapter 12 start with the misery of Arnav's thought and a try to pull him out along with the comparison of three wise monkeys, walk on the fire are thoughts which can be put in words only by you, and is really commendable. Thanks for PM.

Edited by lovetoread08 - 9 years ago

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Sweety012345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

great update...,.

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Sweety012345

great update...,.

Thank u dear

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
Hi,Sorry for late comment.Finally caught and bowled by last 4 chapters.What to say chapter 9 not only amazed me but made an imprint in my mind. Sentences like she was sewing her torn and slit pieces, he lost spirit coming back to her life,his heart too had became like stone, truly gave insight of their thoughts.As the chapter progressed it catch and hold the reader's eye. What to say about the unique gifts, you just made the thought of proposing magnificent. Arnav's each gift indicates

Thank you.. You read my deepest thoughts wandering all the time in my mind.
Priyanaka, u amaze me with ur observation of phrases and sentences which have very deep thoughts.
Thanks.. Iam lucky to have a reader like u.

to take baby step's and rejuvenate with him. In chapter 10. I really liked the para which starts from I did slit your soul... and excellent sentence says he is in the gutter can I be the anchor for him

Im truly amazed ..

. In chapter 11 you maintained the rhythm of the story by not just comparing the love with life,showing the glimpse of South Indian culture along with Khushi's outburst.

The place i had shared.. its the place where i was born..

Chapter 12 start with the misery of Arnav's thought and a try to pull him out along with the comparison of three wise monkeys, walk on the fire are thoughts which can be put in words only by you, and is really commendable. Thanks for PM.

Thanks for ur true and lovely comments dear..