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Posted: 10 years ago
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Howdie! 😃
I hope the upcoming weekend keeps you in the best of spirits.
To my great pleasure I found some time to write today.
Read it and let me know if you like it.

Love you all!

Chapter 6 - Drums of destiny

She slept most of her way to the resort. Because she didn't want to think about it. She was mostly a creature of habit and it gave her nightmares to think about hotels and their 'complimentary' breakfasts. Hotels tended to forget that there is nothing like a free meal.

But there were other reasons too why she refused to slow down and take a vacation. If she was not working what was she doing then? Meaning to say if there was no work what was there? Lazing around the house and watching TV was something Khushi was incapable of doing. She could only think fruitfully if she was already thinking about something else. Get it? If not don't worry. Not everybody understood what drove Khushi's maniacal drive. It was something to be written about and admired from afar. Living it was not everybody's cup of coffee.

She reached the resort without much incident. As soon as they reached the gates the driver got down and opened the unlocked gates revealing a cobbled car pathway. They drove on it for about five full minutes before reaching a modest looking cottage. Hmm interesting. This place was BIG. The fresh air would definitely attract all the burnt out techies in Bangalore for a weekend getaway. Hence it would be a prime piece of real estate. She had to enquire with the manager or owner or whoever was in charge of the place. How much did they make in a year. If the going rate was good she didn't mind owning one of these charming little places herself.

The driver stopped at the foyer and she got down stretching her body. The cottage looked really decent. She waited for somebody to come and receive them but nobody did. It looked really empty and creepy. Except for that fact that it was evidently well maintained. And the lawn by the side of the cottage was freshly watered.

She decided to call Payal. Payal being Payal of course didn't receive the call. She didn't go for such things as being reachable, handling emergencies etc. Khushi sometimes wondered how it was possible that they both came from the same womb. If Khushi was not biologically programmed to love Payal, there was no way in hell she could have tolerated such a person for even five minutes.

She began walking around the cottage looking for some signs of life. Apparently there weren't any. The only noise she could possibly hear was that of crickets. Did they make noises in day time too? So long story short. After half an hour, the driver made an urgent excuse to leave and Khushi was left stranded next to the cottage in the middle of bloody nowhere and her cellphone discharging. Bloody hell!

"HELLO! Anybody home?"

Silence.

She banged on the door and on the windows a few times for good measure. Finally it was clear that she was pretty much alone. No point in losing sleep over it now was there. She set her handbag down by the suitcase and sat on it. The silence continued except the odd chirping of birds. And now her stomach started making rumbling noises. Her phone too switched off. Where the hell was everybody?

Finally she lost sense of time. She began humming an old song. A melodious song from her youth:

Ek garam chai ki pyaali ho. Aur usko pilaane waali ho.
Chahe gori ho ya kaali ho, Seene se lagaane wali ho.

She had forgotten the rest of the lines. So she stood up, brought out some good old dorky moves and mouthed some drum rolls as well.

Dig dig dash. Dig dig dash!

Just like Sallu.

Suddenly she could feel eyes on her back and she turned. She was shocked at what she saw.

It was a man. Seeing him brought back memories of an old poem she had read about Karna.

He, who was so handsome stood up in the Swayamvaram and walked till the dais.
Befitting was his shoulders to rule the length of the Bharatvarsa.
So handsome was he that:

He who first saw his hands just saw his hands.
He who first saw his feet just saw his feet.
He who first saw his jaw just saw his jaw.
He who first saw his smile did not see anything else
because they were all bedazzled.

Bedazzled by the one with as much as virtuosity and brilliance as the Sun himself.
Armored by a golden vest that seemed part of his brilliant skin.

Standing before her was the most dazzlingly handsome man she had ever laid eyes on.
He gazed at her lazily and snitched an eyebrow up as if trying to enquire who she was.

Her breathing stopped.

When she didn't respond he began to float towards her with a fluid grace and swagger.
Her heart began hammering in her chest.
Even in the thick breeze she began sweating. Her hands began shaking.

Her words deeply uncertain "Name?"
A deep manly voice that promised so much came out just a whisper "Arnav".

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice update...but Payal n Khushi are real sisters, are they ? i thought payal was there with her family, wasnt she ? wasnt Akash ranting bt Payal's father...
are their parents separated ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fell in love with this story.. thanks for PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So atlast they met good n khusi is attracted towards arnav so lets see wat happens next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khushi toh gayio hehehe
Nice story
Plz add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting story...its so different!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
nice!😃 they met...it was superb
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Sorry for commenting just now. I am busy with my master thesis so I get very little time to come to IF. I love this new Khushi and I am sure Arnav will be very interesting too.Since Payal and Khushi are real sisters and Khushi lives seperately with her mother I assume Garima is divorced... Can't wait to read more. So far, the story is really interesting. Thanks for the pms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ahaan...
very nice updates dear...
so now arnav khushi have come face to face..
eagerly waiting for their love story to start..
plzzz continue soon...
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thanks a lot for pm...
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Heya ladies!
I am back with another update. Hope you like it.
Please let me know if you do. Your feedback means everything.

Chapter 7 - Venomous

Ever heard a good song?
The elixir from the song first pricks your feet gently.
The neurons in your leg then begin to enjoy the sound waves resulting in the foot tapping.
Then the elixir travels through the neural synapses invading your entire body
Until you begin swaying, lost and delirious.
Time and belief suspended.
A place where only music exists and you hear with your being.
More intoxicating and possessive than a vicious snake bite.
That was what Khushi was experiencing.

Cupid striking.
Except cupid strikes a more delicate part closer to the heart and mind.
The eyes.

"Madam shall I carry the bags inside?"

Those words and his thick accent brought her back to her senses. Why did he have to open his delicious uncouth mouth?

Khushi "I hope you don't mind terribly if I also come inside?"

He looked at her blank. Ok she had to spell it out for this man.
Khushi "Shall I also come inside?"

He nodded vigorously and smiled for the first time. Why did this man staying in the middle of nothing have such an arresting smile? It didn't make sense. Handsome men usually craved attention. This one defied all possible odds. She saw his lungi flowing about gently in the breeze and she had to grit her teeth to stop from laughing out loud. Funny man.

"Follow me."

Ah! Khushi stood there tapping her feet. The man turned and began to walk away. When he turned back of course he didn't find Khushi behind him. He saw her standing where she was before. He seemed puzzled.

"Follow me Madam. Entrance other side."

Khushi "Say dayavittu" (Say please).

Then it appeared to dawn on him and he seemed to blush and stammered "Madam sorry. Dayavittu banni." (Please come)

Khushi "Arms folded."

He stared at her. Of course he would. Khushi didn't take orders from anyone. Least of all a man.

"Problem with that madam."

Khushi frowned and the anger inside her began to bubble up.

"My arms are carrying your luggage!", a broad stupid grin. Total ass. Was he trying to flirt with her? He seemed to be unperturbed and quite enjoying this exchange. She didn't like that. However she let it pass. She wasn't going to stand there arguing with this specimen. She badly needed a shower. Fixing this fellow could wait.

But the idiot was not willing to wait. He was talking as if he was doing the entire world a favor. The gall of the man. He was speaking to her in vernacular. He couldn't be bothered to talk in English even. And he expected her to indulge him?

"Madam do you see the grinding stones that are lining this entire path on either side?"

Yes indeed. There were stones used for pounding rice or making chutney by hand. So?

"You see they have been lined here so that any woman who walks through them becomes fertile immediately. No woman who has arrived here has left disappointed madam. The power of these grinding stones are such. It is a legend. You can ask my grandmother if you like. She will tell you the power of grinding stones. Every home should have one. Here we have rows of them! That is why this place is special."

Khushi was stunned. That man said all this with a poker face but was he...he was walking ahead. Grinding stones, fertility seriously? Why was he telling all this to her. She hadn't come here with a man. Of course it was a double entendre. She wanted to lift the holy stone and drop it on his feet. With great difficulty she controlled the layers of caustic words threatening to bubble out of her mouth. Momentarily she had no acid retort to 'grinding stones'. Bloody hell!

She took a deep breath and kept walking. This man was a non-entity. Whatever words he might throw at her did not change the fact that she was infinitely more intelligent than him. She was from the stratosphere where airplanes flew and he was a son of the soil. Yet it bothered her that her caustic words did not affect him either! It had to.

Well it was still early days. She shouldn't be slotting him under arrogant category. He didn't deserve to get there yet. A great many educated powerful men who were dying to date her were in that category. Most likely this one was too dense to understand sarcasm.

She looked at the back and broad shoulders of the incredulous country bumpkin before her. This was meant to be a fun journey. And Khushi was going to have oodles of fun. She wasn't called the piranha feminist for nothing.


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