ArHi OS: The Caped Crusader and The Cigarette Smoking Man - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am really curious what inspired this piece? For some reason, I visualized this conversation taking place on the darkest rooftop of Gotham city.. At the end of the day, she is no super hero n he is not a filthy rich business man... . They are just a couple of worn-out, conflicted, cynical individuals!
By the way, do NOT make it into a TS, FS, or SS... it's beautiful the way it is..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As Robin would say to Batman- Holy Moly!! How you manage to seamlessly incorporate Arnav and Khushi into the super hero genre flabbergasts me. The conversation between the two just seemed so typically Arshi that you could actually picture a comic book or whatever about them. Oh gosh- that would be something else for sure! 😆

This was yet another brilliant OS from you. You've covered Arshi in such a variety of genres: humour, crime, romance (duh!), political, chick flick, angst, sci-fi, drama and now this. I will admit, I usually don't like OR read fics/books in half the genres you've written in, but the way YOU have penned them, it was kind of hard not to like. I'd love to read a period romance/drama fic/OS by you. Umm, that's not a hint or anything, really it isn't. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiramisu_coffee

I am really curious what inspired this piece? For some reason, I visualized this conversation taking place on the darkest rooftop of Gotham city.. At the end of the day, she is no super hero n he is not a filthy rich business man... . They are just a couple of worn-out, conflicted, cynical individuals!

By the way, do NOT make it into a TS, FS, or SS... it's beautiful the way it is..



I have a draft of this story (about three chapters) where Arnav is a superhero and Khushi runs a post-attack service. What Khushi does is clean up the street, fix cars, fix buildings and roads, take injured to hospitals etc. The city is bled out of money after destruction after destruction.

What I posted here echoes to what I wanted to write in that long fiction.

No, this is it. Its a one off conversation that's already ended. Nothing to write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhi611

As Robin would say to Batman- Holy Moly!! How you manage to seamlessly incorporate Arnav and Khushi into the super hero genre flabbergasts me. The conversation between the two just seemed so typically Arshi that you could actually picture a comic book or whatever about them. Oh gosh- that would be something else for sure! 😆

This was yet another brilliant OS from you. You've covered Arshi in such a variety of genres: humour, crime, romance (duh!), political, chick flick, angst, sci-fi, drama and now this. I will admit, I usually don't like OR read fics/books in half the genres you've written in, but the way YOU have penned them, it was kind of hard not to like. I'd love to read a period romance/drama fic/OS by you. Umm, that's not a hint or anything, really it isn't. 😛



Oh yeah. There is that genre I haven't touched yet. Let's see 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one... I am glad to see the different concepts you are writing .. quite nice :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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They sure do make an unlikely couple.
The superheroine😉 and the rich guy.
Interesting rooftop conversation.
Like many other readers Khushi reminded me of a certain Catwoman.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I wish you would continue this OS! It's lovely. I want to know what happens further between Khushi, the superhero and Arnav, the charitable businessman.
Amazing story though.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Incredibly poignant and extremely visual as always. Beautiful moment of fantasy and reality
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RockBarbie



I have a draft of this story (about three chapters) where Arnav is a superhero and Khushi runs a post-attack service. What Khushi does is clean up the street, fix cars, fix buildings and roads, take injured to hospitals etc. The city is bled out of money after destruction after destruction.

What I posted here echoes to what I wanted to write in that long fiction.

No, this is it. Its a one off conversation that's already ended. Nothing to write more.

My two cents - things will be so different if we all were in post-attack service mode... Why do we have to waste so much confetti at the Time Square to welcome the new year? Why do we just focus on throwing a welcome home party for a soldier rather than building real supportive environment? Our world is not going to be destroyed some evil outsider, it will be all our doing ... Shoot, this is so random wish I was smoking pot n I could have blamed this verbal diarrhea on that but oh well... Will be waiting for that ff...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiramisu_coffee

My two cents - things will be so different if we all were in post-attack service mode... Why do we have to waste so much confetti at the Time Square to welcome the new year? Why do we just focus on throwing a welcome home party for a soldier rather than building real supportive environment? Our world is not going to be destroyed some evil outsider, it will be all our doing ... Shoot, this is so random wish I was smoking pot n I could have blamed this verbal diarrhea on that but oh well... Will be waiting for that ff...



Its a thin line between celebrating being alive and well v. luxurious wastage. The idea is to cheat on life every once in a while and live as if we have no issues of our own. Our world has slowly fallen into a consumerism induced trance which has rendered some cynical and many chasing after one unnecessary luxury after next.

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