~*~Life~*~pt34 pg109 Finale - Page 62

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Posted: 18 years ago
i am so happy that krish is suffering. cool. nice part. continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Note to readers - firstly lol 😆 at the amount of readers who want to join Anti - Krish club 😆 made me laff also I'm really sorry for the lack of AK scenes, its not intentional......this krish thing is draggin a bit i must admit I was ment to have had him out in the part i just wrote but hey thingz never go as planned......but good news he'll b out in the next one and theres a treat 4 ya all 4 putting up with non AK scenes!!!!! Theres not long left for this fanfic.....maybe 3 or 4 parts at the most.....I'll make em long and ill make em good...i promise! Ok thats me out for now, gunna go do update 2 she loves him....ull love this one 😃 sorry once again everyone 😊 and thanks for putting up with me
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Posted: 18 years ago
So v have d whole gang lined up against him....cooooll 😈. Itz time 4 sum FUNNN!! 😈
Keep writin!
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Posted: 18 years ago
KOOL!!!! waitin for da nxt parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
hehehe...awesum work...make Krish confess all his sins thn we'll wave bye bye 2 him...do introduce sum1 4 kartick..i mean he cant b basantiless😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow 3 or 4......only...........man i'll miss it...well seriously if i were you....it'll be like your latest part will be equal to my 3 parts......seriously....i make thing longer.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

AWESUM!!!!!! LOVED it!!!!!!! 👏 👏 i HATE krish!!!! 😡 😡
how can he do that to Karthik, so sad!!! atleast he's fine now!!! 😃
can u PLEASE have more cute AK scenes!!!!! 😳 continue soon!!!! 😃


p.s. LOVE the title of this part!!!! lol!!! 'Anti Krish Club'!!!! lol!!!!

thanz n sorry hun, ive posted a note aplogising about tht....but ull love this part i promise😊

Originally posted by: brainychild92

haha.. can i join the anti krish club!! i wanna make him get into trouble too!!! lolzz


that was wikidd!! he better get out soon

continue soooon!!

lol u mke me laff!!!! thanx a lot

Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!!! omg, i am lovin the anti-krish club!! it sounds so much fun, can i join?? i love to do stuff like that 😈 !! continue soon 👏

lol go ahead, everyone else is😆 thnx hunni!

Originally posted by: Numera*

ahaha they just took over the sharma house soooo funny!! continue soon!

lol thanx!

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

wow...that was nice...continue soon...and I hope you get well soon!!

awww thanx sweetie
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

that was sooo i cant describe in words i just love the way krishs getting getting the taste of his own medicines great perfect humourous simply out of the world

lol thanx
thanx!!!!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

😆 Loll, I agree, i wud like to join as well, awesome part

lol thanx!

Originally posted by: Chotii

Rachi Wachi!! jus caught up on d last 2 parts.. n omg! i jus had a gud larf 😆 😆 awww, por krish, O WEL, he dservd it! idiot! 😆 put sum mor ak scenes in as well yaar plz plz plz 😳 hehehehe
stil, gr8 parts!! im luvin kartik n angad waaaay mor (oviusly lol)
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

lol nice 2 kno u liked em😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: del_geo

i am so happy that krish is suffering. cool. nice part. continue soon

thanx hunni!!!

Originally posted by: HardRock

So v have d whole gang lined up against him....cooooll 😈. Itz time 4 sum FUNNN!! 😈
Keep writin!

yep the whole gang lol and yea definately time 4 fun😛 pritz will b coming bak in this part 2 join in

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

wow now the nxt part gonna be fun

thanx!!!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

😆 wht can i say great 😛

thanx!!!!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

KOOL!!!! waitin for da nxt parts

thanx!

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hehehe...awesum work...make Krish confess all his sins thn we'll wave bye bye 2 him...do introduce sum1 4 kartick..i mean he cant b basantiless😛

thanx! lol no no karthik wont b basanti-less....jus wait n see😉

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

wow 3 or 4......only...........man i'll miss it...well seriously if i were you....it'll be like your latest part will be equal to my 3 parts......seriously....i make thing longer.......

yea hunni!!! ill miss it tooo!!!! lol thanx hun!
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Posted: 18 years ago

~*~Previously~*~

R - I didn't hear you....say it again

Kr - i said i'm sorry!

R - Josh did you hear him?

J - nah, he's going to have to repeat it

Kr - you....

L - calm down now Krish, you wouldn't want uncle to come back would you?

Krish glared at them and left, they all then started laughing.

~*~Part 33~*~

Three.....Two...........ONE!!!!!!

Angad roared on his guitar as Josh played his drums, it was 9AM and the guys had been awake since 6 moving their music equipment into Kripa's house, Angad had managed to convince her to let them bring the stuff there and her parents were all the more supportive.....however......

The door burst open and a very tiresome Krish locked eyes with them all

Kr - what the **** are you playing at? I'm trying to sleep!

A - sorry dude....we were just practicing

J - yeah and besides its 9AM, you should be awake by now

Kr (glaring at Josh) - I would have.....if i had got enough sleep!!!!!

R - and how come you didn't get any sleep?

Kr (glares at Rishi) - maybe because some people were up late watching movies and making a lot of noise

L - what? us? nah nah if we were then aunty ji and uncle ji would have something

Kr - that's mum and dad for you!

A - anyways do you mind, we need to get some more playing time in

Angad virtually pushed Krish out the door and slammed it in his face. Krish was furious now, he went to his room locked the door and jumped on the bed hiding his head under a pillow. Meanwhile Rishi opened their door

R - he's gone

A - ok Lakshya, go work your magic!

Lakshya nodded his head and quickly and quietly checked on where Suryaban and Gayatri were, they were watching tv in their room and Kripa was on her laptop. Perfect Lakshya thought, he gave Rishi a thumbs up and crept downstairs, he found his way to the garage and hid behind some boxes waiting for Krish........Rishi knocked on Krish's door, he opened it looking irritated

Kr - what do you want now!

R - dude keep ya hair on! Surya Uncle is calling you

Kr - where is he?

R - in the garage ......i think

Krish shook his head and pushed him out the way, Rishi smiled and sent Lakshya a text. Lakshya received it and went to the fuse box, he found the fuse he was looking for.....the main power......and simply took it out, the house which was roaring with noise was now as quiet as a mouse....Krish opened the door to the garage and called out to his dad

Kr - dad you in here?

Krish tried to put the light on but it wouldn't work so he went over to the fuse box and was looking at it, not noticing the fuse missing for the main power, which was lying on the table next to him. Lakshya managed to creep out without being heard and ran upstairs ready for the action. Angad and the guys opened the door to see Suryaban and Gayatri standing with Kripa all looking rather angry

S - what happened?

A - i don't know uncle, maybe the powers gone

S - its never gone here!

K - dad...chill....where's Krish bhai?

R - we saw him go downstairs after he complained about our music

S - hmmm

Suryaban and Gayatri went downstairs, followed by everyone else, they all made their way to the garage and opened the door just as Krish was picking the missing fuse up to put back in the fuse box

S - KRISH!!!

Kr - dad, there you are, i came......

S - what the hell did you do!!!

J - when you complained about our music, I never though you would resort to taking the power out

R - yeah dude, we were almost finished anyways

Kr - wh....what you talking about, you said....

K - enough bhai, I was working on the laptop, and because of you my works lost

Kr - but I......

S - just shut up and move

Suryaban took the fuse off him and put it back in, Gayatri and Kripa looked at him and shook their heads but the guys just smiled away and headed out the door. Krish felt like killing them all, he slammed his fist on the wall and went after Angad, he lunged for him in the hallway making him fall on the floor, Krish pulled him up and was about to punch him when someone caught his hand, Krish turned around

????? - I wouldn't do that if i were you

Kr - and who the **** are you to tell me what to do?

????? - mind your language

Kr - what the....

Krish was about to hit the other guy when Angad pushed him out the way and smiled at the guy standing in front of him

A - Prithvi!!!!

P - Angad!!!

Krish left and the two guys hugged each other, the other guys came and said hello to him aswell

A - how's life treating you?

P - it's good, where is she?

A - upstairs dude

P - i'm going to go surprise her

Prithvi went upstairs only to be encountered by Krish

Kr - so your with them idiots aswell

P - those "idiots" are my friends, so i would watch how you talk about them

Kr - and what will you do?

Krish pushed Prithvi slightly

K - BHAI!!!

Kr - Kripa?!

K - what is wrong with you!!!! It's like you're a completely different person

P - you know him?

K - yes! he's......my brother

P - oh.....but Kripz

K - yeah?

P - i'm so so so happy to see you!!!!

Kripa screamed and hugged him, Krish looked bewildered

K - now why were you pushing him for?

Kr - he....

K - listen bhai, Prithvi is my best friend, understand, please do not do anything to him....Pritz come on, mum and dad will be happy to see you

Krish watched them leave, he cursed himself, what was happening today, everything was going wrong.....could it get any worse? the answer of course was yes........things got a lot worse that night. Krish was in his room talking to his friend when Kripa knocked on his door

Kr - yeah?

K - I need a favour

Kr - what is it?

K - you see Prithvi is staying here

Kr - and?

K - and all the guest rooms have been taken up

Kr - so

K - I was hoping you would sleep on the couch for tonight

Kr - why should I! Karthik's room is empty! Let him sleep there!

K - bhai, we only have 7 rooms!

Kr - so!

K - there's mine, mum and dads, Karthik bhai's which is being used by Angad and 3 guest rooms. Which leaves just this one, so you will have to....

Kr - I'M NOT DOING ANYTHING!!! I spent the last 4 years trying to be the perfect son and the perfect brother and everything was going fine until that ******* Karthik came back! WHY DIDN'T HE JUST DIE!!!! And to top it all that boyfriend of yous and his friends are leaving no shortage in getting me angry! I have had enough! I came here because my parents told me this was my real home, if i knew things would turn out like this I would never have come here!!!!

Krish didn't speak another word as Suryaban slapped him, and in turn Gayatri

S - we took you in to our home, in our lives into our family. You wanted to be our only son so we let go of our Karthik. 4 years we have given you everything you could ever ask for and this is how you repay us? Karthik was right about you all along

Kr - mum, dad I...

G - enough! There is no way that you can ever be our son, i'm ashamed to think that i gave birth to you. In my life i used to think i had no regrets but now i only have one, if only it was Karthik i had given birth to not you!

Krish was thrown out of the house, Angad and the guys sat in Karthik's room

A - thanks for coming Prithvi

P - hey there's no need for thanks, you've done a lot for me in the past, this was nothing

The door opened and Kripa stood there, the guys got up and left Angad and Kripa alone, she sat opposite him

K - you did all this?

A - yes

K - why?

A - look at that photo...

Kripa looked at the photo Angad was talking about, it was a family picture before Krish had come

A - I did it for all of you and especially Karthik. He had realised Krish never loved this family but every time he tried to do aomething about it, he was blamed once i found all this out, I couldn't help myself. I couldn't let that guy betray your trust any longer......i'm sorry

Angad bowed his head, Kripa got on her knees and looked in his eyes

K - why are you sorry for? I should be thanking you, if you had not have done this then God knows what Krish could have done, I'll be happy once Karthik bhai comes home and we can be a family again

A - he'll be home tommorow

Kripa smiled and hugged him and gave him a small kiss

K - so it was you who took the fuse out?

A (smiles) - not me...but it was my idea

K - you.......monkey!

Kripa jumped off him and ran outside

A - hey miss donkey!!!! come back here!

Angad got up and chased after her. .

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