New Arshi TS:-You will always live in my Heart 2B Pg 38 Mar 7 2016

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Abhisa

@dattamaitry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awesome update...

Though feel bad for Khushi...

waiting for next...

update soon...

thanx for pm...

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harman12

@harman12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

inyeresting n different story really want to read more

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Nice start... I think, considering Arpita was Khushis friend and she is no longer alive, AND she has the hots for Arnav her friends husband. OK I'm holding my ears, Arnav and Khushi Hamesha!

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vaishnavi

@vaishuu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Interesting start..
can't wait for next..

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charmfriend

@charmfriend

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hi..

An interesting concept..

Loved the start.. Pls continue soon.m

Thanks for pm..

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RenuHooda

@Hrithiksmile

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awsome update love it thanx 4 pm

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This is good. A second chance for Arnav and Khushi. Will Arnav remember her? Can't wait to read the next part. Thanks for the PM n

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Interesting

Felt sad for Khushi

Crap Arnav's wife died

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Pinku, honestly, as I clicked on 'Post reply' my mind was brimming with emotions...but now am too numb for words!!!

Yes, this was so powerful yet emotional chapter!

Though it carries shades of KKHH, but still I would never ever compare the two 😉

This is too beautiful!

Now, am thinking of the title of this TS...why did you name it 'you will always live in my heart'...

Is that for Arnav saying Arpita will live in her heart, or Khushi saying Arnav will live in her heart!

Oh my dear!

Though, I feel little...very little bad. Arpita and Khushi got really close, so ideally Arpita should have shared that she was in a relationship with Arnav.

And I think you should have ideally mentioned the time gap after Khushi came to the present...you know it helps picture the age of Abhilash or how many years have passed since then...I am guessing Khushi is single...what happened to Shyam or he doesnt have any more role in this? Is Anjali there too? Hey Devi Maiya...so many questions, and yet you say this is only a TS... not even a SS?

Well, then I demand 4000+ words in Chapter 2 & 3, hehe...or you can simply put Chapter like 2a, 2b, etc...I am okay with it honestly, as long as you weave in your imagination with our Arshi!

Well done!

PS- No pics, but I really feel like gifting you a bottle of RUM!

(Excuse my poor knowledge of cocktails, not sure which is your favorite...hehe)

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

my heart nearly jumped out when I saw that the chapter ended already!

I want to read moreee

please update soon it's really an interesting concept <3

Khushi became a doctor and waiting to know more of the history, what must have happened? Did Arnav love her too or he was simply being forced into this marriage and I think Shyam is evil, with the two horns?😆

Too sad for Khushi that her best friend married her love/crush/love interest..

Pinkyyy, please, have mercy on us and update soon

😳