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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. I totally did not see this coming.

In all my conjecture about Arnav and Khushi's past, I never considered this scenario and now in retrospect, it makes perfect sense because I kept thinking how can Khushi not fall in love with him. He truly seems to have been the one source of comfort in her rather loveless existence. Her mother sure did not love her and both her brother and her grandfather love her not as a person for who she is but more as a prized possession or a symbol of their prestige or a trophy.

Arnav sure has a battle on his hand but in this last chapter he sure has made a lot of progress. Waiting to find out more about past and present. So looking forward to the entertainment as Khushi takes him thru the paces for putting her thru hell.

It will also be interesting to see how two people starved of love will actually learn to live with being loved by someone and deal with it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi! how are you. that was a great update .sorry for poor comparison but you reveal in layers like onion:) i like the pace and emotions in the story.
been busy for a while. got a lot to say, but to be honest its simply beautiful narration cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dspandana

hey waiting for ur update...plz update soon

i liked this update very much l love Arnav's approach also openly finally admitting his love and mistake but I am worried about khushi is she matured enough to undustanding Arnav
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my god! I just found your story and i love it. Arnav is super hot with his gangster attitude. I can't believe Khushi told him she loves him and he threw her out. I was not expecting that, that just surprised me. But i love it. I hope Khushi makes him suffer a bit and make him do all these cheesy romantic things or become friends with archie or something.
Can't wait for more! I'm so excited. 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow, that was one heck of a chapter!...brilliant writing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
You wouldn't believe but I read this chapter like 5 time already and about to read it again 6th time ... What can I say.. It was everything I wanted to read... God my heart was beating fast when I was reading... Lovely update.,, I would it to read so much but I am speechless.. I can't wait to read the next chapter.. Hope you uodate soon.B/c I can't wait
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Posted: 9 years ago

The pace and story were racing in this chapter, which was needed for the readers to have the continuation of anticipation from the previous chapter as well as be on the edge to get to past which has been playing hide and seek since prologue. You did a brilliant job of keeping all this is one update and not stretching it into multiple chapters.

It's interesting that guilt doesn't exist in Arnav's dictionary for what he did to Khushi but at the same time he wants to grovel and make it up to her no matter how long she takes to forgive him. But he is right, there is no need for him to feel any guilt because his love existed even before Khushi confessed her love and if doesn't consider falling in love with her a fault, so where is the question of guilt? When he said "I love you" it was purely love and nothing else...But he is sorry for pushing her out of his apartment, not acknowledging her feelings and breaking her heart and for that he knows he needs to be punished. However, the punishment doesn't include staying away from each other or being just friends. He wants the punishment to come with an expiry date so that they can move on in life, together. He has very clearly and neatly categorized all his feelings and not mixing them up. Good he needs that because Arnav needs to prove to Khushi is that he isn't loving her out of love.

Khushi is a very sorted person. She is anything but clumsy with relationships or feelings. In her head she knows that her love for is completely different than the love she has for Archie. Nothing and nobody in life would break the upbeat attitude Khushi has towards life, not even her mother's monstrous behavior but rejection from Arnav shattered this girl that she still hasn't been able to pick up the broken pieces of heart. So, how can she walk into his arms and heart and accept him in her life. Once Khushi gets past her heartbreak and understands that Arnav's love isn't out of his guilt, she won't let him grovel or punish him. She doesn't carry any grudges against her mother, and this is Arnav the man she loves, the only man who was there for her every step of the way protecting her. How can she make him crawl.

It will be interesting to see how Arnav is going to take this forward.

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Posted: 9 years ago
You made my day ..finally confession...loved every bit of this update..pls update soon this time
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi this flashback is a surprise to me.i always thought khushi is avoiding arnav because of akash and arnav's enemity.now this is really interesting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was mind blowing.. so finally after three years they talked.. oh God.. this is so different Arnav.. in this story till this chapter have faced such hardcore, intelligent crude gangster Arnav but in this one he is vulnerable lover who is all set to manao the girl whom he have hurt.. well Khushi is perfect match to Arnav.. lets see what will happen next as he have made his point very clear.. loved the amazing update..


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