Originally posted by: EnVee
Read up thread 21 and 22 and most of the comments yesterday! I loved the memory ones. Something about memories that gathers a lot of force, no? In describing Savvy and R&B, Nisha has also indicated what R&B sees in II. How similar Savvy and II are. Some things rattle you so much that you cannot forget it ever, no? It is more than just an after taste, I guess.
I loved the progression in all the chapters. Slowly changing dynamics like one step at a time and the spotlight shining on each at a time.
The best thing about your writing is you use day to day incidents and experiences and mundane talk to bring out characteristics and sketch your players and don't really describe the characters. So the reader imagines according to his or her perception. Precise way to write.
And Ranjan just checkmated II deftly.