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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow great teaser please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting teaser
I guess some secrets will be out in open & khushi might run away with Nikhil
Congrats on new thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar dil nikal bahar aa gaya.. wow.. now what?? do continue jaldi... sabar nahin hoga..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow beautiful teaser loved it can't wait for the update thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">THE ALTERNATE UNIVERSE</font>
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<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Teaser for Chapter 15</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">As Khushi stood in front of the Fairview Resort, at the outskirts
of Jaisalmer, the Golden City of India,
she realized that she was starving. Her anxiety had got the better of her as she
had turned her back on food, the whole day, preferring to calm down her fraying
nerves in order to reach here as soon as possible. The journey had left her
completely exhausted, even though the temperatures were on the warm pleasant
side now.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">The sun was starting to set, giving space to the black
clouds in the sky. It was definitely
going to rain
, she thought as she looked at the numerous tents crowding the
desert space. The lights were more subdued, flickering to life as the music
danced on in the balmy air. The warm breeze was refreshing and the view of the
glowing orange sun dipping into the horizon...breathtaking.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">She enquired about the tent booked under Dr. Aman Mathur's
name at the reception and walked quietly along the pathway, admiring the
gorgeous scenery and smiling at the songs coming from the nearby stage. It appeared
to her that a celebration was going on. The aroma of lavender, eucalyptus and
an array of exotic desert flowers perfumed the air, while the peaceful quiet of
the resort soothed her soul.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">With her head bent, she failed to look at the steps
approaching until she heard her son's voice.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">"Mumma"</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">Khushi turned languidly and bent down to the ebullient little
boy's height, "There you are! How was your day Nikhil!" she paused to notice him
completely covered in a pink transparent raincoat, with little fairies on the
front, "Whose raincoat you are wearing? And why are you out here alone?"</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">"Uff mumma...so many questions", the kid protested and only then
did Khushi hesitantly notice him holding onto someone's hand, "Meet Annav
uncle"</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">"And uncle, this..." Before Nikhil could continue further, he
heard a distant voice and rushed back, "Di is calling me"</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">But he had done the needful
already.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">Arnav felt as if he had been rendered to stone. He stared at
Khushi, with wide eyes, hoping she
was a mirage that would mercifully fade, but she clearly had no such intention.
She moved, rose to her feet and looked at him, her face mirroring the same aghast
look as his.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">Khushi thought she would die of hysteria. She wanted to
scream, it's not true! It cannot be true,
but she remained silent.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">Time stilled between them as the light drizzles
started turning to a downpour.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">__________</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Okay, here it is!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The dedication for the next chapter will go to the reader who can correctly guess the immediate sequence of things to happen between Arnav-Khushi.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yup, I know you can...if you have been following this fiction as closely as me😆</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So the game is on! Lets see who gets it right!</font>



I m not guessing anything but yes finally the wait is over:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi..
Teaser is a bomb!!!!!

I guess kushi will avoid arnav and will try to go back..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome teaser
looking forward to chapter now knowing this is comin
im thinking raining
khushi gets up starts to panic thinking Arnav will sus all out n take Nikil from her
she will go to leave but Arnav will stop her
I don't think he will click straight away that Nikhil is his son
but im sure being ASR he will demand answers
n wont stop hounding her till he gets truth
cant wait for next chapter now plz update soon
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome teaser dear please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am reading teaser at 6th June...wow me and my entry...both sucks...

but your teaser is so good ..really waiting for the update now.😊

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