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sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Wonderful update dear...

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anukap

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Dear Jigs, the chapter was heartening in the sense that Khushi and Arnav are now sharing their sorrows and mourning their unborn baby together and not in isolation. Their journey on the plane was so moving and then their meeting with anjali and her family was cathartic too. So Arnav is ready to go full throttle, but Khushi is still insecure and not letting go of her fears. Guess it's a work in progress and we have to be patient. hmmm. But you did a fabulous job of telling the story so realistically that one felt a part of them...I felt I was sitting and having that fabulous meal with all of them and listening to their their chatter. Oh, how i wish...anyway, if i can upload this link, i think I may have found the Mehra house for you.:)

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Cheers!

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pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

UnRes :)

This update even though started on a painful note with kushi and arnav imagining pari in the clouds, it ended on a joyful and lovely note " anything for you my love".. there is so much of love and promise felt in that one sentence of arnav...

arnav taking anjali in a bear hug after a long meet was very sweet and siblings bonding is always very cute..

Both of them are trying hard not to show their pain and emotions in front of the family but anjali felt something afoot..

i loved the way arnav is trying to ask kushi with his silent gestures " is she fine"??? Which shows his love and concern for her in every moment of their life...

anjali's kids are adorable..

arnav and kushi's little moment started and banggg.. i was so disappointed. . Usually its always anjali's job to disturb but this time for a change its her son.. lol..

I'm glad I felt a little change in the dynamics of arshi's relation.. but only I'm imagining things or is it really changing. .. only you can answer.

Thanx for the pm and the beautiful and slightly light hearted update jigs :D

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bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

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There is something about the family. It brings out the best in you and makes you forget all the issues when you meet them. Its always a happy time isn't and that is what Arnav and Khushi felt. Both were genuinely happy despite everything that was happening in their lives; despite their recently shared grief. One have to get out of that daily rut to experience something else and am glad that they chose it with family. Anjali here is a typical sweet sister. Who can gauge the undercurrent of the couple just looking at them and that shows how well the family is bound together.

Like Arnav even i am wondering how did Khushi take care of that little baby despite her grief 😲

Frustration that you showed in travel; those images in cloud; they both discussing what they see in cloud; sleeping on each other's shoulder - Can any one even think that this couple is on the verge of divorce😕 It was a picture perfect sleep there Jigs😃 and then the end with kids disturbing THE MOMENT😆 😆. I am sure that kids have the super power to know when their parents/couple are having their MOMENTS so that they can disturb it easily.😡😆 (Seems like you and Mira had ganged up to show this to their readers who regardless experience it in their daily lives😭 )

Saying that I could see the first ray of sunshine through the window (a hope today) with Anything for you my love ❤️ 😃

Beautiful update👏

Regarding your survey - Answer is depends but most of the time speaking with families makes it worst as we have to deal with not just our issues but nagging questions of families aswell😕

Ps Thanks for translation. It made it easy read without help from google😳

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Shalini

@tvmania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Finally Unresed after reading all the 12 chapters which took me more than 3 hours to complete reading + 3 cups of Bournvita (I have no complains on that)... 😆 When ever I like a story I am so drown into it that I feel like I am watching some movie!!!

When I started reading first chapter I was unable to understand anything I mean it was so confusing for me as to whether it's Arnav or Khushi pov , guess my kidney has stopped understanding IF fictions after few months 🤢

Each and every chapter had its own spice be it taunting, guilt or love was beautifully written. The way khushi has been longing for Arnav and his care be it a note for that matter was so touching. In this fiction I feel the entertaining part is Aman and Lavanya and I dont know why but I am loving Aman more than Arnav 😉... And you named the kid Akash 😲 I never expected that. I hope Arnav gets into his ASR avatar to kick off Alisha it would be nice if it's filmy style just like Sameer 😛

You have chosen a very sensitive topic in this fiction on relationship, children, siblings comparison. I have seen couples in my life giving away their relationship just because they dont have time, or parents comparing their own kids at some point of time in their life whcih is good sometimes but not always ... We do truely know that it's Arnav - Khushi Hamesha so at the end it will be (should be) happy ending but I guess every story be it fiction, novel or article gives you a message and this fiction is giving you a strong message to sort out things in your life , give them a chance rather than keeping quiet be it any kind of relationship for that matter. Rishtein mitti ki tarah hotein hai mil jaye toh mitti hi hota par kho jaye toh sona hai!!

I knew you are an amazing writer 👏, I would never get tired to say that and this fiction shows it all. You have brought in a lot of changes in this fiction with polls which is good to know on other person's POV. I hope you bring out their flashback on how they had met for the first time as I would really want to read as to how they had fallen for each other. I would be glued to read on ways how Arnav bring back their relationship in track and I hope they do have a complete family...

Shalu

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Diya Angel

@dewdropangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

I read the chapter few days back and it was so touching that it left me in tears... u r a great writer.one who can bring out raw emotions within a reader while reading. Upate soon

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Thank You Jigs for writing such a sensitive story that really touches the heart ...

At sometime or the other I think We All may have gone through similar feelings ...

Life is not smooth sailing All the time ... 😕

That was a naughty teaser ... hope he gets what his heart desires now that he

has realised where they were going wrong ...

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

SIGGHH>>>>In Dreamland post the teaser ❤️

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Lovely update dear :) thanks for pm..!

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#600

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Oh my it was such a touching update. Melt my hurray for Arnav and khushi. They shared there feelings for there Pari and they had the same visions of there Pari happy in heaven with her grandma. I loved how Arnav described his vision of Pari and his mom playing in the clouds.

Loved the Mehra's. They can sense the tension between the couple and the every inquisitive Anjali has not been quite about her enquiries. Hope she can help them. After all Khushi felt home in there presence and Anjali felt a warmth of mother in Khushi's.

I loved the scene between Arnav, khushi and Sid. Especially Sid telling him to go and sleep in his room coz he wants to sleep with Khushi. Poor Arnav, khushi saved by Sid. But Arnav's happiness in seeing Khushi happy is what reflected more.

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