T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148

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Shamz

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

OMG this was a beautiful it brought all the emotions out can't wait to read the next update

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Aise arnav Kaunsi factory mein bante hain yaar, I'll get myself one. I'm a new reader Mira and I quite enjoy your story. It's very well thought of but it isn't very heavy to read. It's dramatic but not sugar coated with melodrama. Very touching.

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kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

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snoopy84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

awesome update was very touching how Khushi is trying to hold onto her mother in law

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

The story is very touching.

Every updates surpasses the previous one.

It was bit emotional for khushi.

it wasn't just about her mother in law leaving.

it's about the close bond that you feel with the only family she has now and doesn't want to be away taken as many moments she can.

Not to mention the fact she's nervous about the feelings that are stirred within her when Arnav is close to her. It's way beyond physical.

Mostly somehow khushi might be feeling that she's cheating on NK or that if she has to accept Arnav then she'd have to let go of NK and his memories too like he never existed.

It's not easy for khushi to accept what she feels when she's with Arnav she has a lot of baggage.

Arnav however has no such issues except Mohan being a concern for him.

It's was thoughtful of Arnav when he made her hold the ring and out his hand on hers.

He indirectly told her she can still have the memories of NK and he'd be with her every step of the way.

Then he made her talk about nk. The worst thing is making a person talk about what bothers them and he made khushi speak about nk and how Arnav heard her and even told her about meera and nk.

This was something that surprised khushi. They both can heal each other.

Arnav is going to be with her. Khushi needs Arnav and its no longer awkward if they talk it out.

Finally he made her smile and laugh m brought her out of her sullen mood.

Hope this trip is more fruitful.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

My unres on page 33.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122978614

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

How beautiful it is to read this story :)
Khushi's struggle with her conscience and her heart is so amazingly written Mira.
All the characters of this story make it such a beautiful canvas...very well conceptualized and written👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Each time I read a new chapter in this story, I end up with a lump in my throat and a smile on my face.

I love the Arnav-Khushi moments!

And the Khushi -Manorama moments.

And the Meera-Mohan moments.

And the Meera-Arnav moments.

So, basically I love the story as a whole.

Loved and completely understood Monarama's apprehension at perhaps losing the one link to her dead son to another man. She is a good MIL, but is first and foremost Naren's mother. Khushi and Meera are her remaining family, and she is scared of a future without them.

What she needs to realise is that she will gain more family instead of losing.

For Arnav is a guy who always looks after his own.

loved the bit where Arnav provides Khushi his shoulder to cry on.

And he cheers her up.

Loved the scene with the children playing together while the parents were together on the swing and Sumitra was looking on. The ideal family picture.

I got a special mention! 😃

Thanks a lot, MB.

Love you! Mouah!

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Wonderful update... N worth the wait...the entire thing had a feel good feeling...

Sumitra Raizada playing cupid that was cute...she seems so happy for Arnav and Mohan...

Even Manorama seems to have an inkling of what's happening between Arshi...

Khushi wanted to avoid Arnav and hence didn't want Manorama to leave...looks like things r happening too fast with her...

Like Arnavs fascination with her nose ring... Its so endearing... Loved the way he made her comfortable... To talk about NK...held her hand around the ring...these little gestures go a long way in a relationship... N finally managed to get her out of her gloom...

Sumitra saw them with their arms around each other... Was Khushi comfortable with that??

Looking forward to the next update ...beautiful writing...