ArDi FF 2 ~ The story is still yet to come|LastChapPg33| - Page 20

Nice update👏

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Res
putra itna bada dussahas ??
Mughe pm nahi ki :x
but I am really really very very happy that finally mera putra ne update kia *damn exited to read but mera timing wrong hai :( i have math wala tuision
now*
I will be back to jump on ur FF tonight ;)

Unres😃

So sorry putra ji for being late kal so gaye thi dinner karte and could not come here😭

So you finally updated huh?😛

and the update was so awesome 👏romantic and as well as damn interesting.😳

I should learn from you😃

pata hai when you told me you are updating I was like🥱 ye toh tu hamesha kehti hai "I am trying my best to update" but I am so happy the update is real😛😆I thought i was dreaming

so stop idhar udhar ki bate lets start from the line you started the update😉

it was so so so beautiful you stole my heart re it is so awesome.👏

~She survived because the fire inside her burned brighter than the fire around her~

i loved the part where you know drau fails to recognize arya's hand. mughe toh pehle se hi pata tha ye arya ka hand hai. 😆

it was so cute ehen arya says i'm hurt wala line . 😛he must have looked like a puppy making puppy eyes *aww*😳

and then the part where drau gets shocked. 😲😆

A voice which sent hundreds and thousands of butterflies flying in Draupadi 's stomach .

pata hai mai hoti toh mera bhi aisa haal hota.😃😉

when arya says he found out that drau was alone i was like *Yeaay they are gonna kiss*

and I loved the line so much❤️

"I found out that you were alone so thought to give you company but looks like something is more interesting than me "

@pink specially pink wala part😆🤣

Aww ardi can't stay away from each other

"I missed you . "

"Me too . It's been 24 hours 38 minutes and exactly 42 seconds since I have seen you , held you and ..."

"And ? "

And my guess was right *jumps (but I should be jealous)*

Just then he pressed his lips against hers , before blowing into her ears "and kissed you "

I knew it yeaay

This was the part I enjoyed the most😛

You wrote it so awesome Wahh putra👏

Loved every bit of it and the part where daru exclaims the book I was like clapping my hands Pata hai I like the most when drau sends angry look to arya😆

"Oh this book ! Yeah the brother of the hero is the killer . You know there are four killers . He is one of them ! And his partner was the heroine 's sister in law . You know they had a affair and ..." Arjun bit his tongue looking at the 'are you serious ? I will kill you ' look in her eyes . it was pata hai one of my favourite moments in the whole part

"Anything . I mean we can go out or you know ..." "No I don't want to go out of my house . Lets do something here . " "Hmm I wouldn't say no " he said winking at her all the while pointing towards her bed naughtily. "Arya ! Lets watch a movie . Maybe horror ?" "No lets watch the star.

It was the most beautiful moment of the whole part I just can imagine how beautiful they must have looked when they were watching stars. 😳You write so simple moments but so beautifully I think tere hath me jadu hai.👏

"Do people really turn into stars after they die ? " Panchali asked curiously as she ran her hands in Arjun's hair.

Aww how romantic .

They were lying in a bed sheet in her terrace . On one side was a basket of grapes and berries and on the other was a bottle of French wine Arjun thought would go best with the evening . "I don't know , why ? " he replied taking her hands in his and placing a soft kiss.

Just awesome re and that part where arya becomes serious It was damn awesome and how protective he sounded😳😳👏

"But whatever happens " he said with a serious face after their laughter died "whatever happens I will walk right by you side . We will never leave each other in any state "

And then the part when Arya says he have 3 gifts for Drau I was like it should be three magical words 😆

Loved the gift wala game Ardi played wih each other.😳😛

I am speechless how beautifully you wrote everything👏😛

I love you re. 🤗

And this one was epic I mean heart of the part.🤣😆 I thought they would kiss but Arya ?😳

You are really a devil😡😡😡

She looked at him and kneeled down . Panchali ran her hands in his face . His beautiful hazels . She slowly placed a kiss in his eye lids and he closed it feeling her wet lips . Then she moved to his nose . Panchali pulled Arjun's nose and laughed as he looked at her confused . She placed a kiss in his nose then moved towards his lips . Her fingers played with his soft oral organ and as she bent down to press hers against his it seemed as if the time had stopped . Their lips were about to meet...

"Times up ! " his husky voice made Panchali open her eyes . "What ? " "Times up . Your time is up madam . " "What , that's ridiculous ! We didn't set any time ! " "We hadn't . I had . Otherwise you wouldn't be able to take off your hands and eyes off this handsome face "replied Arjun smirking while Draupadi rolled her eyes . "You devil ! "

Loved the next satya and drau part So much. 😃😳It was really very interesting.😛 And I really proud of drau she saved the poor girl but my blood was really boiling at that part loved how drau slapped that filthy mouthed.😡

"You girls are nothing but wh*re . And wh*re don't have any self respect so stop protecting what's not yours . "

Kuch log kavi nahi badalte kavi nahi.😡 I hate that man. You will have a horrible death, I swear.😡

I felt really bad for her when she gets the visions of past. 😭😭😭

Panchali stood there , confused , angered , and disappointed as the flashes of her past played in front of her eyes . Slowly she got what she was seeing . Slowly she felt her surrounding and herself . Slowly her inner soul recognised her old self and re connected with it .

I am speechless.😳👏 Itne din baad I got to read my fav FF.😳 please update soon. 😛You used to update almost in each and every week.😭😭 I really miss that.😭😭 I can't wait for the next part.😛

Update soon Sam .😳 please?

Love you.❤️

omg ? Mou I shall award you ! For the longest comment every k !

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapter Sam

Looks like Panchali is getting flashbacks⭐️

thanks 😃 and yes Panchali is getting flashbacks . 😉

Originally posted by: ShreejataD.

Nice update👏

The book portion was funny😛 if anyone spoiled the story like that I would be really furious😡

Now Draupadi will come across the villains.😕😲

Just wanted to know will they still be in a negative role always?😲

thank you so much . Hahaha I know right . People love spoiling others read like Arjun did 😆

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome update Sam😃

thank you 😃

Originally posted by: mishree

I read all parts of your ff

It is awesome and wonderful

I love the Krishna part very much

Update soon

aww thank you so much . 😳

Originally posted by: panchali12

Such a cute one! But so small?? Not fair..

Update fast😉

thank you so much . 😳

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Thank you beta...khushi dugni ho gyi meri!
Awww! This is so cute!
Yaar sirf gola kyun manga...mein hoti toh bankrupt kar deti! *ROFL*
And woww! Kaala khatta...this is my all time fav! Muh me paani la dia Sam...
Loved it!

thank you and welcome 😉😆

An out of the blue question. Who is Krishna paired with in this story?

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

An out of the blue question. Who is Krishna paired with in this story?

still not decided . 😆 There is Radha . But Satya made entry just some couple of chapters before . She is Drau's best friend so maybe her . 😳😉