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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Great update

thanks for d pm

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Mrieshka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

This was much awaited, beautiful and very emotional update. I was so much apprehensive and when I read comments first( I usually do that first before reading the actual update to mentally prepare my weak heart), I was thinking WHAT THE😉, how come they kissed so early, how come Khushi has forgotten everything so soon--but when I read the actual chapter, I was completely overwhelmed with the emotions. Jenny you have poignantly and accurately portrayed their emotions. You have done absolutely full justice to their confrontation. The depth of emotions was just wonderful and left my heart filled with this feeling for which I have no word to describe but feels good.

I also have to applaud the way you have written step by step starting from dinner table, nap in afternoon in summers in India, clothes drying on terrace, even included clothespins in your update( such a minute but real detail), upstairs room and stairs. It was just marvelous and I could vividly imagine my parents and cousins homes in India and the atmosphere. It seemed so surreal. the way you described about Khushi's feelings when she went upstairs and her heart wants to look at THAT terrace room and it's occupant and her mind tells her no.

I loved the way both have talked like adult this time. I completly agree with Khushi that it is not the Deeds but intent which is more important. Although our dear Arnav did not do the deed but had the intention to do that was the most hurtful part for me as well. Someone rightly mentioned it as "Emotional Infidelity".

Also she raised very appropriate question about his anger, distrust and their future, how dare he compares her with La.

I am still lost tn their emotions after reading it three times already.

Thank you for the PM. Look forward desperately for the next update already😆.

Ye Kahan se kahan aa Gaye hum is Saffron fields ki journey me Jenny ke sath( starting from silent and quiet reader to almost active participant).

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sushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

Hi Jen another wonderful part as always. Even after reads of this part I am still roaming in their conversation very matured way I wish all adults could do that without being nasty and if some one makes a mistake a straight forward heart felt apology is all that is needed . No I am not saying that is enough in Arnav's case as his mistakes were not small or little so he does need to work harder but this is a very sincere and good start.

I had read other readers comment too right after the part the first comment by AKamber and conopoem they both have put my thoughts in words perfectly i could not have done such a great job .

I really loved Aakash and Arnav convo remembering their boyhood time together 😊

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ks_Larhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

Such a beautiful update 🤗

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abigail93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

Wonderfully written!!

Till the end of time. Hamesha...

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

To all those hearts that are meeting in Allahabad for eternity 😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VvMD5pIITM[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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IPK007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: jduke

To all thoseheartsthat are meeting in Allahabad for eternity 😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VvMD5pIITM[/YOUTUBE]

Love this song :)