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Congrats for the new thread Jenny. In the beginning, I liked and commented on each and every chapter. But last few chapters were so depressing. May be I liked the story so much initially, I could not tolerate what arnav and khushi were going through. After Manya's entry, I stopped liking and commenting. But I am eagerly waiting for the lighter chapters. Update the next chapter soon.

Aman singing this seeing Arnav & Kushi together 🤣😆 [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CHisfUcA90I[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: jduke

Aman singing this seeing Arnav & Kushi together 🤣😆 [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CHisfUcA90I[/YOUTUBE]

For you Jenny...
...and your Khushi and Arnav...


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0agOTuM2mg[/YOUTUBE]


Contrary to the title...it is a Goodbye to the separation between two lovers and together they want to discover life wherever they might go.

It's in Italian...English translation below...loses a little of the essence in translation. 😊

When I'm alone I dream of the horizon
and words fail; yes, I know there is no light
in a room where the sun is absent, if you are not here with me.
At the windows show everyone my heart
which you set alight; enclose within me
the light you encountered on the street.

Time to say goodbye. -- I'll go with you to countries I never
saw and shared with you, now, yes, I shall experience them.
I'll go with you on ships across seas which, I know,
no, no, exist no longer; it's time to say goodbye.
-- with you I shall experience them.

When you are far away I dream of the horizon and words fail,
and, yes, I know that you are with me; you, my moon, are here with me,
my sun, you are here with me with me, with me, with me.

Time to say goodbye. -- I'll go with you to countries I never
saw and shared with you, now, yes, I shall experience them.
I'll go with you on ships across seas which, I know, exist no longer,

with you I shall experience them again. I'll go with you on ships across seas
which, I know, no, no, exist no longer, with you I shall experience them again.
I'll go with you. You and me.


Enjoy. 😊

Congratulations on new thread 🥳

Hey Jenny!! It's May already ..where are you? Eagerly waiting for your update...and please no..cliffhanger in the upcoming update.pleaseee..I think I will pass out of frustration if khushi and arnav have only a eye lock and the update will end there...like NO.

where are u??//😒

Congratulations jenny for new thread ,u simply rock with ur awesome writing, do upd soon

Hi Jen, Just saw your note. Please do not apologise for your story or for the actions of your characters. It is testament to your integrity as a writer that you are being true to your characters and their lives.

Though you have created the story, it is the story of your characters who people it, not yours or ours and you are doing a brilliant job at telling us their story.

Please do not change even an iota of your story, be true to your muse. Your story is perfect, as it is in the pain and the pleasure it evokes in us the readers.


Happy moments will come, but they can come only once the people involved have found a way to it, not because the writer changes things to suit the happy ending.

So carry on as you intend to, letting your characters tell us their story through your words.

Now after that endorsement, as dreadful confession, while I fully appreciate your choice of song for Arnav, I'm afraid it does nothing for me😔. Sorry, sorry!

For me Arnav's song has always been Sonu Nigam's song in Agneepath

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SymkawFO8R8[/YOUTUBE]