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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Zakham pe marham, tere naina</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Dhool pe shabnam, tere naina</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Jag bhoole bhoole, tere naina</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Dil chu le chu le, tere naina</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Ap toh chaa gaye qasam se.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Kya hi pyara song share kiya hai</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#999999">Maza a gaya. Seher angaiz :)</font>

Glad you liked it...I love the words, the music, the voice...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next update jenny di. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
very beautiful..
now i m just waiting for the update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Magnifique the update the teaser
When is thursday can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Jen!!! Apologies for the prolonged absence of comments. AD had been quite chaotic.

Finally got some time to peacefully and properly catch up with the updates.

A significant portion of the previous chapter was covered by Khushi's mails...and gosh, I was in tears by the end of it. Her love, her faith, the pain and hurt...it's so cutting. My heart broke for her. And I felt so angry at Arnav, for his impatience, for his anger, his indifference and his unmindful cruel actions.

Even when I know Arnav's thought process, his intentions, what drove his actions, the guilt and remorse he feels, I couldn't help but blame him for his brutal behaviour. I love him but I don't like the bitter person his anger and pride had turned him into.

I loved Khushi's letters. I guess it helped me understand some of her earlier actions and insecurities a little better. They explain a lot of what she should have said in person to him but couldn't. She took the initiative and laid her heart bare for him. And even though it led to heartbreak (albeit temporary I hope), I'm glad and proud that she did it. I'm proud that she took a stand and decided to move out of her house. She took her time, but did everything she could to the right things, as she sees it.

Her despair and hopelessness, in the letters and in her time in Allahabad is painful to witness. She has been through hell really. But, hopefully it will end soon.

On the other hand, Arnav's remorse, guilt and his compulsive need to make things right give me a perverse pleasure and a sense of peace I guess, that eventually, he will make his way back to her.

Oh and can I reiterate, I totally adore Anita. She's a sweetheart. Her strength and resilience are amazing. Aman is too blinded by his attraction/feelings for Khushi to notice this gem. I hope this wedding forms the setting for more than one love story 😉

I'm really looking forward to the chapters ahead!!!

P.S. What are these worries I read about... story being too long et al. Please do not worry about all that. No one is getting tired at all. We love Drs. G and R. We love SF. We love you. I'm hoping for a century, personally 😉😆

Edited by UV_Arshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aweee jenny lovely song...feeling so much positive with this song :)...
i think some times eyes deliver much strong message than words :)...ankhain dil ka aaina hoti hain :)
Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Overall a total feel good chapter.
Anita and Khushi share a beautiful sisterhood bond.
Rekindled friendship with Akash has brought Arnav to Allahabad and Khushi. Their nostalgic meeting was bittersweet. Not easy for either one.
Houseful of family in the midst of a wedding, a new young love and a mending of hearts for lovers in pain should prove to be interesting.
Love your story Jenny.

Damnit, those darned eyes, such beautiful traitors! 😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just love Anita !! She is such a thoughtful, caring sister.. Khushi's thoughts gave an insight into her pain. She cannot forgive him so easily. And she is right.
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Posted: 10 years ago
will arnav dance to this song in the sangeet ...hope so
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Posted: 10 years ago
Truly a teaser!! How about a small itsy bitsy chotu sa paragraph where Arnav and khushi r fully using their eyes(and eye lingo) ? That is - I mean along with that title teaser , it would have been a bonus for us well behaved readers ;)? Counting hours to Thursday is going to be a task now so.. :) Just saying ... 😃
Edited by Serene77 - 10 years ago

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