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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

<font color="#0000FF">Wow! That was so nice, how Zain was lost in Adhira's beauty!

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Thanx Pro! Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -Brilliant-

Keep it up Shanaya...sorry for being late,

Loving the story.

Thanx Sanaa! Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Hey diii...
awesome storyline yaar...
kya ho kya tum?????... kahan se lati ho aise ideas..
Ideas ki dukaan...😉
on a serious note..., wonderful start..
Zain is adorable, naughty and responsible guy..
IDK how Adhira managed to ignore him for last 10 yrs...
truly loved Zain and geetangali convo...
Update soonish..
Thanks for d PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Hey diii...

awesome storyline yaar...

kya ho kya tum?????... kahan se lati ho aise ideas..

Ideas ki dukaan...😉

on a serious note..., wonderful start..

Zain is adorable, naughty and responsibleguy..

IDK how Adhira managed to ignore him for last 10 yrs...

truly loved Zain and geetangali convo...

Update soonish..

Thanks for d PM

😊

Thanx Nandini..😊 Well, lets just say My grey matter works actively! 😉 It isnt that Adhira ignored him, Its just that they dont talk to each-other much. As it is in those days, Persons from opposite gender didnt talk much..😳 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Part-3
"Aur waise Bhi, Agar iss Zindagi mein usse mera hona hai Syra toh usse mujhse koi alag nhi kar sakta. Aur agar woh meri Kismet mein hai hi nhi? Toh main uske paas chaah kar bhi nhi jaa sakta." Zain replied with a small smile. Syra lukd at her brother. He may be all the naughty and adorable, but a sensible man when it came to thinking. "Par Apni Mohabbat ko aise dum mat toddne do Zain." Syra rqstd him. "Adhira ko tumse sacchi mohabbat shayad aur kahin na mile." She pleaded. "Koi Faayda nhi inn baaton ka Syra! Woh mujhse theek se baat bhi nhi karti, Mohabbat toh durr ki baat hai." Zain replied. "Bas! Ab hum aur iss baare mein koi baat nhi karenge." He added. "Par Zain?" Syra tried but Zain silenced her. "Maine kaha na Bas? Samajh Aayi?" He spoke. Syra nodded and kept a loving hand on her brother's shoulders. Zain Smiled back at her.
The Next Day..
Zain had to leave for Lahore today. Geetanjali, Ashim & Arnab
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
were present to bid him Goodbye. One By One, Zain took all the blessings of his elders. He bent down to receive blessings from Geetanjali. "Jeete Raho, Khush Raho. Bhagwaan tumhe khoob tarakki dein." She gently kissed his forehead. "Aur haan 1 mahine baad Adhira ki mangni hai. Tujhe aana zaroor hai. Samjha?" She spoke. "Jee Kaki. Aapka hukum sarr-aankhon par!" Zain chuckled. "Kaki aap chaahe jo kar lein. Yeh nhi sudharne wala!" Syra laughed. The Jeep which was to take Zain to the station had arrived. After Giving a Hug to Arnab and Syra, Zain kept his trunks in the Jeep. Arnab helped him and Zain got into the Jeep. He waved to all of them and cast a glance towards The Ganguly's terrace and as expected Adhira was standing there luking at him. He gave her a soft smile which was returned by her. The Jeep started and Zain waved to all of them who waved back. As he left, Nusrat and Syra moved back to their own house while Ganguly's came back to their own house. Adhira turned and went downstairs for sum work..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
The Next Day; Islamia College Campus..
As The Bell announced the End of The Class, Zain picked up his books and walked towards the Green College Grounds. Gathering His Shalwars so as to prevent them from getting dirty, He made his way amidst the group of Students which mainly consisted of Males as it was a Boys College and In those days, It was a rare occurence for a girl to enter in Engineering. And If u cast a look around, You wud find all the students dressed in the same White Kurta and White Shalwars, Be It Hindus or Muslims. Zain spotted his frnd and sat down beside him on the grass. "Notes Cumplete Ho Gaye?" Zain asked his frnd Nader, who was with him from school and now college. "Haan, Lagbhag!" Nader answered smiling at him, scribbling in his notebook. "Tum batao? Ghar jaa ke kaisa laga?" Nader asked him. "Bohot accha laga. Ammi, Syra, Kaka-Kaki, Arnab. Sab bohot khush the." Zain smiled fondly. "Chalo Accha hai. Syra Baji kaisi hain?" Nader asked. "Acchi Hai, Allah Hai Shukr."
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Zain replied. "Aurrr.. Usse mulaqaat hui?" Nader asked. "Usse? Usse Kisse?" Zain asked. "Aree Ussi Se, Jissne Pichle 10 Saalon se tumhara Chaain cheena hua hai?" Nader smiled, mischiviously. "Kya Yaar? Tum bhi kahaan ki kahaan milaate rehte ho?" Zain smacked his frnd lightly on his arm. "Ab aisi kya baat keh di maine Zain? Adhira se mile ya nhi?" Nader spoke, rubbing his arm. "Haan hui toh. Par ab shayad naa ho!" Zain spoke. "Kyun kya ho gya?" Nader asked as his frnd seriously became sober all of a sudden. "Uski Shaadi hone wali hai Nader. Ek Mahine baad uski mangni hai." Zain replied quietly as he tore a blade of grass. "Kya? Par Yeh? Achanak?" Nader spoke, sumwhat stunned. "Achanak kyun? Yeh toh hona hi tha." Zain replied. "Haan Par Zain, Tumhara Kya?" Nader spoke as he stopped writing. "Mera Kya Yaar? Mera toh kabhi kuch hona hi nhi tha." Zain replied, luking at his frnd. "Zain? Tum aise kaise apni Mohabbat ko jaane de sakte ho?" Nader spoke. "Yeh Mohabbat kabhi Mukammal ho hi sakti Nader!" Zain replied.
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
"Hum dono ka mazhab bilqul alahada hai. Yeh baat mujhe pata hai, par phir bhi main hi bewakoof tha ki apne dil ko samjhaa nhi paaya!" Zain replied as he tore a blade of grass and threw it away. "Mohabbat Mazhab nhi dekhti Zain." Nader replied, quietly. "Kisse-Kahaniyoon aur Qitaabon mein Beshq! Par Asal Zindagi mein, Yeh shayad ek aisa aazab hai jisse durr karte karte insaan ki poori umar beeth jaaye." Zain answered. "Khair main ab iss baare mein koi baat nhi karna chahta. Main Zara Paani Peekar Aata Hunn." Zain replied getting up and walked towards the Water Tank. "Aree Saqib Miyaan! Sher-O-Shaayari chhod kar, Padhayi kar lo." He laughed and spoke to one of his fellowmates. Nader sighed and lukd at his frnd's retreating back. He picked up Zain's Notebook which he left and from it fell sumthing. Nader picked it up and turned it around. It was Adhira's Photograph which was taken at Syra's Godh-Bharaai, a couple of months back. It was solely a women's function and the photographer had been invited to click..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Though the snaps were later on developed and taken by Syra and Nusrat. But Zain, got Adhira's Photograph developed again secretly and kept it wid him. Nader lukd at the photograph. Adhira's Sapphire Eyes twinkled wid happiness as she laughed at sumthing or sumone. The Photographer had captured her innocence. Though The Picture was black and white but still her beauty was unmatchable. "Aur baatein toh aisi karta hai jaise usse bhula baitha ho." Nader spoke shaking his head and kept the photograph back in his notebook. Though, He had never met Adhira but he knew her since the last 10 Years. Zain had told him everything abt him. Zain was forever in love with her.. And perhaps, He wud be till eternity. Zain came back after drinking water and sat down again beside him. "Tumne Geeta Kaki ke haath ka khaana khaya ki nhi iss baar?" Nader asked, changing the subject. "Haan khaya naa? Kaki bohot lazeez khaana bannati hain." Zain smiled. "Hmm, Lagta Hai ek baar unke haath ka khaana khaane aana hi padega." Nader laughed.
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