Aasmano Pe Likha.. || [Part 14 PG. 28.] - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A Month Later..
Zain stepped out of The Peshawar Station, carrying his trunk luking for a Taanga. "Aree Zain Miyan?" A Voice spoke, Zain turned towards the direction of voice and smiled. "Aree Chacha!" Zain smiled luking at him. "Iss baar bade dino baad aaye Beta? Laao Mujhe Do." Salim, The oldest Tanga driver spoke. "Nahi Chacha aap takleef na karein. Main uthata hunn." Zain spoke. With Sum help from Salim, Zain kept the Trunk on the Tanga and sat down. Together, They made their way towards home through the roads of Peshawar. "Peshawar ka mausam toh accha ho gaya hai Chacha." Zain spoke luking around. The weather wad pleasant and the roads were lined with green farms.. "Aap aa gayein hain na Zain Miyan! Ab toh mausam aur accha ho jayega." Salim replied merrily as he clicked his horse to drive faster. "Accha?" Zain laughed. "Aap bhi kaisi baatein karte hain Chacha." He lukd around. His Hometown had always been a bliss to him. The Fragrant Air, The Green Surroundings And The Peace..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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After a half an hour drive, Zain finally reached home. He payed Salim and after talking for a few more minutes, He thanked the elderly man and walked down towards his home. He knocked at his door and was greeted by his mother. "Amma?" He hugged her mother. "Mera Baccha." She hugged him lovingly. He greeted Syra too who was equally happy to see his brother. "Main Kaka-Kaki se mil ke aata hunn." Zain spoke. "Abhi toh aaye ho Zain, Thoda aaram kar lo. Shaam ko chale jaana. Waise bhi, unke yahaan abhi bohot raunak hai, 3 din baad Adhira ki mangni jo hai." Nusrat answered. Zain smiled and nodded. That Evening, Zain paid a visit to the Ganguly's. They all were happy to see him spcly Geetanjali. Adhira didnt came out today much to Zain's Despair.
Later That Night..
Zain got up from his bed as sleep was far from his eyes.. It was hot summer's day so all were sleeping on the terrace. He got up carefully not intending to disturb his sleeping mother or sister. He paced around the terrace quietly.
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The Night was quiet and serene. The Crickets sang in unison and the Stars twinkled bright. Zain was luking above at the stars when he heard sum shuffling from the Nearby Terrace which was Ganguly's. Thinking it to be a Burgular, He walked towards the closest railing. He lukd closely but cudnt make out anything. Unable to see anything, Zain took the oil lantern kept nearby and moved it up to have a clear view.. The light from the lantern spread it allusion and Zain cud see clearly. But what he saw, made his heart stood still for a moment.. Adhira was there. It seemed as if the Ganguly's were sleeping on the terrace too. Adhira took a glass and poured water into it from the Earthen Pitcher.. She had woke up as she felt thirsty. She lukd alluring as her thick black hair fell down open below her waist.. Her dupatta thrown carelessly upon her shoulder. The light from the lantern made her glow in the golden light.. Her Creamy Skin shimmering like Pure Gold. After drinking water, She kept the glass back and walked
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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back to her Cot. Zain quickly lowered the lantern and walked back to his own cot. He laid down quietly again, "Shayad sab sahi kehtein hain. Main tumhe shaayad kabhi bhula nhi paunga." He mused quietly and drifted into sleep.
The Next Afternoon..
Zain came out from the mosque with other fellow Muslim after attending the Sacred Namaaz of Jummah or Friday. He was wearing his Kolhapuris when a known voice made him turn. To his immense suprise, It was Adhira along with one of her frnd. They had cum down to the local market to buy sum jewellry.
Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi.. Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi..
Zain rested his frame on the pillar and watched her as she selected sum Jhumke for herself. Her Smile, Her Innocence was so pure.. She showed the pair to her frnd who found it Beautiful. Next, She asked the shopkeeper to show her Glass Bangles. She wore sum Red Bangles, and showed it to her frnd by shaking her wrists. The Bangles tinkled in her wrists making,
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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a sweet tinkling noise..
Aisa Lagta Hai Ke Hoor Hai Koi..
After paying for the Jewellery, Her frnd dragged her into sum other shop to buy Anklets. Zain smiled and titled his head a little to see where they went..
Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi..
He shook his head and went home.. Ater Lunch, Zain was upstairs on the terrace, reading a book. When he heard sum noises cuming from downside. Zain went towards the railing and peeped down.. As The Khan's and Ganguly's were Neighbours, One cud peep in from the terrace and wud get a view of another's courtyard. Arnab-Adhira were fighting over sumthing. And Adhira was furious at her brother, to an extent that she was ready to beat him. Arnab stuck her tounge out at him and she litreally ran after her to hit him.
Chalti Hai Toh Sang Tere Chanda Bhi Chalta Hai..
Zain smiled at her cuteness. "Baba? Dekhiye Naa Dada mujhe pareshaan kar rahe hain." Adhira Complained. "Arnab? Tumne Meri Bacchi ko rulaya?"
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Ashim spoke. "Adira Beta? Iski baaton par dhyaan mat do! Yeh toh hai hi Gadha!" He added. Adhira laughed hearing her father.. Zain laughed too as he saw her laughing.
Hassti Hai Toh Sang Tere Phool Khil Jaata Hai..
"Dekha?" Adhira spoke to Arnab. "Mujhse zyaada chahte hain Baba aapse Dada." She added, smiling. "Aur Bhagwaan Kare, Shubroto mujhse bhi zyaada pyaar de tujhe." Ashim smiled fondly at her daughter. At his mention, Adhira smiled shyly and lowered her eyes.
Tu Jo Palkein Jhukaye Toh Saaya Dhalta Hai.. Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi..
Zain watched her enchanted, His heart half-hoping that If his name had that effect on her too..
That Evening..
Adhira walked to her Neighbouring House and knocked on the door.. She waited for sumone to answer and knocked again. "Aaya." Zain spoke and opened the door. The Sight that greeted him was Beautiful. Adhira was standing in the doorway, Her Dupatta not covering her head, Her Long Hair Open..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Adhira didnt quite expect Zain to open to open the door.. She lukd at him for few seconds unable to comprehend. Zain lukd into her Sapphire Eyes which held Confusion.
Saagar Si Aankhon Mein Teri Nasha Sa Chaaya Hai..
Realising her mistake, She quickly covered her head with Her Dupatta.. "Jee?" Zain asked, smiling. His Barritone evident in his voice. Her Feminine Fragrance of Jasmine and Roses was all over him now. It was enchanting and mesmering that Zain cud litreally spent ages just luking at her..
Mehki Si Saanson Ne Teri Khushboo Ko Jagaaya Hai..
"Zain? Kaun hai Darwaaze pe Beta?" Nusrat walked in. Adhira lukd up as she had her gaze elsewhere..
Tu Jo Chehra Uthaye Toh Din Nikalta Hai..
Zain didnt answer her mother. "Chachi?" Adhira spoke. "Aree Adhira Beta? Darwaaze pe kyun khadi ho? Aao Andar Aao Na?" Nusrat smiled. "Nahi Chachi ghar pe bohot saare kaam hain. Maa ne aap sabke liye aaj shaam ka bulawaa bheja hai." She spoke..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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"Theek Hai Beta. Geeta se keh dena hum sab zaroor aayenge." Nusrat replied, smiling. Zain wasnt paying any attention to Her-His Mother's talk. For him it was just enuf that he had a chance to watch her again..
Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi.. Aisa Lagta Hai Ki Hoor Hai Koi..
"Accha Chachi main chalti hunn. Khuda Hafiz." She wished Nusrat. "Khuda Hafiz." Nusrat replied. "Khuda Hafiz." She wished Zain. "Khuda Hafiz." He wished her in his deep voice. She walked back to her house and for a moment turned to look at Zain. Zain too lukd at her. But before he cud smile at her, She walked away.
Aasmano Se Utara Noor Hai Koi..
Zain smiled, shaking his head and went inside. Geeta had imvited them for Dinner for sharing the happiness of Adhira's Engagement which was the Next Day. The Families had a good time Spcly wid Zain's Flirting wid Geetanjali & His Quirkiness. Precap- Adhira's Engagement..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now coming to update *************

Loved it Shanu
awesome update love you lots 🤗
I just loved the maturitty of Zain
he is controlling himself a lot but all in vain
Adheera is making things more difficult for him
I wonder now what will happen
what id anyone from the parents come to know of this
So the prerations od engagement are in full swing
Gangulys have send an invite too
I sense something fishy in this engagement
lets see aage kya hota hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Loved the way the shayari echoed throughout the update! It sounded heavenly!

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