Aasmano Pe Likha.. || [Part 14 PG. 28.] - Page 4

Wow..
Superb and awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Both the families' share such a piouss and lovely bond.
Lagta hi nahi ke neighbours hai.
Syra-Zain ki bonding was truly amazing.
Bilkul Tom and Jerry ki tarha.
Nusrat aunty praising Adhira.
Family meeting was great.
Syra-Adhira talk was lovely.
Zain is such a fun loving person.
Hehehe...
Zain all praises for Geetanjali aunty.
Continue sooonish.
Precap is amazing.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Shanu

Awesome update & Love you lots🤗

I must say what a start to a wonderful story

It was just beautiful

both Families share a wonderful bond

Its true that Love, Friendship & Humanity are above all religions

& that you have very well shoen here

Zain Flirting with her Kaki was too cute

& I too just loved the entire warm & positive enviourment of this story

waiting to read how things turn

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Thanx Goldie! 🤗 Love You Lots Too! Well, I have tried to create the 1940's era where Neighbours lived like Family! 😳 Zain will evolve more in cuming updates! Stay Tuned..😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

[font color=#0000FF]A really nice read! Very simple and enjoyable. Waiting eagerly for the next part!
P.S. It would have been better if we got to read the whole update together instead of the breaks!

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Thank You Pro! 😊 Well Im a Mobile User and Have word limits to my post so have to update in Parts! 😳 Stay Tuned..😊

Originally posted by: ...anika...

Wow..
Superb and awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Both the families' share such a piouss and lovely bond.
Lagta hi nahi ke neighbours hai.
Syra-Zain ki bonding was truly amazing.
Bilkul Tom and Jerry ki tarha.
Nusrat aunty praising Adhira.
Family meeting was great.
Syra-Adhira talk was lovely.
Zain is such a fun loving person.
Hehehe...
Zain all praises for Geetanjali aunty.
Continue sooonish.
Precap is amazing.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanx! Stay Tuned..😊

Part-2 "Toh tumne koi rishta dekha?" Nusrat asked Geetanjali. "Haan Aapa. Ek bohot acche ladke ka rishta aaya toh tha Pindi se. Ladka Padha-Likha hai, Accha Khandaan hai, Aur Maa Durga ki daya se Parivaar bhi khushaal hai, Paison ki kami nhi hai.." Geetanjali replied. "Mashallah! Rishta toh bohot accha hai. Meri Maano Baat pakki kar do. Ladkiyan jitne jaldi apne ghar ki ho jayein utna accha." Nusrat replied. "Ji Aapa. Main bhi wahi soch rhi hunn ki iss rishte ko haan karke, Adhira ki mangni karwa dunn. Waise bhi jo halaat ho rhe hain Hindustan mein.. Mujhe toh bohot darr lag raha hai." Geetanjali voiced out her fears. "Ek maa hone ke naate tumhara darr main samajh sakti hunn Geeta! Siyaasat ke thekedaaron ne jo Hindustan-Pakistan ka maamla uthaya hai usse kissi ka koi faayda nhi hoga." Nusrat replied, thoughtfully. Geetanjali nodded. "Amma? Kaki Kaka? Chalein Aayein. Khana lag chuka hai." Syra came and informed them. All got up and moved

towards the dining room. After washing their hands and feet, Men sat down first. The Clean Floor was covered wid a clean carpet on which Ashim, Arnab and Zain sat to have their lunch.. The women served them. Syra sat down on a Cot as it wasnt advisable for her to work so much. Adhira and Geetanjali served food to men. Zain became concious everytime Adhira served him something but she was oblivion to it. After Men finished their lunch, Women sat down for having their food. Syra was served on the cot itself as she cudnt sit on the floor. While, Adhira, Geetanjali and Nusrat sat on the floor itself. Zain after washing his hands and mouth was wiping them when he saw Adhira eating. "Aree Amma? Adhira ko toh aapne kuch diya hi nhi." He spoke. "Aree Haan!" Nusrat spoke up realising. "Beta tumne toh kuch liya hi nhi. Biryani lo na? Kabaab lo." Nusrat served her the dishes. "Ji Kaki." She smiled. "Amma? Zara Dhyaan Se! Kahin aisa toh nhi Ki Adhira kam hi khaati ho? Weight badh jayega na?" Zain chuckled.