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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#911

Hammie my comment is on d previous comment I made ,please read it.I m reserving this comment of mine.will comment on next two chapters together.I dont want this thread to b locked.u stopped writing and if ikrs forum gets locked where will I comment ?
U better come up with something hammie please start a new story.

Hammie hammie hammie I unres my comment on green eyed monster.Shakespeare again.fair is foul,foul is fair.lol.u know it by heart, dont u?same is with me when it is all about tagore n sharatchandra,d writer of devdas.I cant even remember how many times I have read sharatchandra.I guess I got my specs cz of these two.

Romance romance and romance.hammie u truly r too much obsessed with d hairy chest of dutta.hahahahah.zyada ho gye to I remember anil kapoor. 😆.here comes d twist in tale ,tadaaa the antagonist comes and what an entry, harshad got an hair cut just like dutta.what is he upto?n nakku seems to b too close to him.aise coffe shops mein jayegi aur rumal puchegi to ladka rumal k jaga apna dil de baithegi waise she is extremely pretty.

Thank God dutta thik ho raha hain.baaji still d kabab mein haddi.iske timing itnaaa galath kyun hain?

Looking forward to read more.
Thanks for writing for us.

Edited by simple2joy - 8 years ago

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#912

ohhh Ham m done with Tempest,,as in cyclone,, the Romance Hurricane that was..😛 some fine Deep n Graceful storytelling of TaSha Romance Ham,,😳 TaSha were like 'saaf chhuptey b nahi,,saamne aate bhi nahi!!"😉 the hide n seek was pleasing indeed!! 😉 hmmm Datta k chest hair k deewane kon kon hain hume sab pata hai,,😛😉

so Ganpat was here with the Champak ka Rishta,,chalo ths Rishta bring TaSha even more closer,, 😛

yea Ganpat n Datta the 2 bewadas of PN n I came across a VM on them,,,🤣 OMG I split in laugter watching them like ths in that VM,, I accidentally came across ths wen u annotate my previous reply,,😆 will share in my reply agar I found it again,,😆..

ur bold lines were there even in ur fisrt FF,,, shru se he u ve ths habit of emphasizing on the Highs n Lows of plot,⭐️, n it was really brilliant,,, those musing left me speechless,, I jst love Datta's whole Battlefield strategy in getting his Lady Love, his lioness in his life back with her own Will,, that's my man datta,,👍🏼 ufff these intelligent n smart moves of Datta is leaving me helpless n I'm falling even harder,,😛 see shru se hee sharp witty n intelligent never go unnoticed by me,,😉 I'm fond of these qualities n ur Datta is mixture of all these,,😳 that's y I love him,, opar se ye khadoos b nahi hasta bhi hai,, n he love Nakku without any inhibitions,,matlab khul k,,😳

Champak is gvng me bad vibes in cafeteria,, r u planning to make him villain,, chalo dekhte hain wats in store,,😃 bt yea story is really picking up nicely n temperature s soaring..😛

joyu Ham's storytelling in ths one is top notch n I think shes lieing,,,PR cannot be her first,, wese I wonder is it going to be a sad one,,, Dark??? u kno naa I'm sucker of dark stories,,😛 maza aaae ga,,😛

chalo Ham ab bass will b bac with 10th one soon,,😳

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#913

goshhh suddenly a buzz of activity on this forum... erhhh swati andbarbs.. lovely to see you thanks both of you for reading the String of pearls set of shorts pieces on baji,dutta and naku... listen since we arre short of pages here.. please bear with me if give brief responses.. nus and joya are reading a longer piece.. lucky they are reading and giving succint comments to..
much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: NusiSg
this post is a bit of reverse tempestous !😛
ohhh Ham m done with Tempest,,as in cyclone,, the Romance Hurricane that was..😛 some fine Deep n Graceful storytelling of TaSha Romance Ham,,😳 TaSha were like 'saaf chhuptey b nahi,,saamne aate bhi nahi!!"😉 the hide n seek was pleasing indeed!! 😉 hmmm Datta k chest hair k deewane kon kon hain hume sab pata hai,,😛😉
Nus... all the girlies of Laagi were ga ga about the matted hairs on his chest...
so Ganpat was here with the Champak ka Rishta,,chalo ths Rishta bring TaSha even more closer,, 😛 yes... as Supriya actually led to Tasha first marriage.. in LTL
yea Ganpat n Datta the 2 bewadas of PN n I came across a VM on them,,,🤣 OMG I split in laugter watching them like ths in that VM,, I accidentally came across ths wen u annotate my previous reply,,😆 will share in my reply agar I found it again,,😆..
I know that vm is mindblowing..😆 it would be lovely to see it... most of vm are now blocked by makers..

ur bold lines were there even in ur fisrt FF,,, shru se he u ve ths habit of emphasizing on the Highs n Lows of plot,⭐️, n it was really brilliant,,, those musing left me speechless,, I jst love Datta's whole Battlefield strategy in getting his Lady Love, his lioness in his life back with her own Will,, that's my man datta,,👍🏼 ufff these intelligent n smart moves of Datta is leaving me helpless n I'm falling even harder,,😛 see shru se hee sharp witty n intelligent never go unnoticed by me,,😉 I'm fond of these qualities n ur Datta is mixture of all these,,😳 that's y I love him,, opar se ye khadoos b nahi hasta bhi hai,, n he love Nakku without any inhibitions,,matlab khul k,,😳 hummm openly... see fauji 's have a rough brash streak and war strategem was his mind set... you can imagine the impact the persona of dutta left in me..

Champak is gvng me bad vibes in cafeteria,, r u planning to make him villain,, chalo dekhte hain wats in store,,😃 bt yea story is really picking up nicely n temperature s soaring..😛

joyu Ham's storytelling in ths one is top notch n I think shes lieing,,,PR cannot be her first,, wese I wonder is it going to be a sad one,,, Dark??? u kno naa I'm sucker of dark stories,,😛 maza aaae ga,,😛... Nus it was my first FF.. Mishal suddenexit in March 2011.. triggered it all..the whole forum was devastated... I HAD to bring Mishal back.. the story was led by the pulse of the readers... but there were many readers who left as soon as Mishal left...
chalo Ham ab bass will b bac with 10th one soon,,😳 thanks for ressurecting this tale .. my memories of how Mishal

.. looking fowrard to your much love , as your yours hammie

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#915

Hello hammie lion...

I must say tera baji is highly impressed.. LTL has always been the most special for me.. So anything related to naku and dutta, I will definitely love it more than anything else..

Just completed your OS, the string of pearls.. I had though to comment after I am done with wedding bliss too but could not resist myself from praising my dearest hammie..

Hmmm.. I am gradually discovering my bhau.. And I am loving this naughty side of your work.. Nakusha had turned a beast into a human, then into a loving and caring husband.. If mishal had stayed back in LTL1, dutta would have learnt doing romance too😳

LTL1 ended, but who can stop the imaginations of Tasha lovers??

I have completely enjoyed this OS, the string of pearls.. The start is wonderful.. How dutta wanted to have Naku in his arms..and take a shower together..wild thoughts were revolving around his mind😳😆 Naku blushing hard seeing her half clad husband after shower😳, then their shopping, kitchen scene.. All were very nice.. Loved this new dutta in your story..such a gentleman he is, the top gun of Patil wadi, who loves his wife beyond imagination.. The respect both has for each other and the right with which dutta, everytime, was trying to get close to Naku as if she belongs just to him and he has every right to do what ever he wants to do with her.. Their stealing glances during the party, having food and dancing on the dance floor..And yes their drive...how dutta urges to spend the whole night with his beloved in the back seat of the car ☺️ I have loved every bit of your story dear...

And the dialogues which you have used, keeping in mind the accent of the people of laagi world, was perfect..

Like "ab bachcha nahin hai mein, mein tujhe khilayega and baji's dialogues like aap dono yaha solid date mar rahe ho".. I was completely lost in laagi dreamland for a while..

Fantastic piece of writing hammie...

I must thank LTL1 for bringing out the writer in hammie...

Our tasha is magical and so was their story..the journey of a gangster and a maid..both met their salvation upon meeting each other.. Only laagi fans like you can understand what these stories on tasha do to my heart, when I read them..

Had read all the OS from LTL forum.. Short ones but all were dreamy.. Now I see many of those writers are not even active in IF.. People like us will never be able to keep the memories of LTL1 aside and move on..

Anyways.. I have typed a lamba chauda comment...and now I need to stop.. But bhau, mein tere ko nahin batayegi toh kise batayegi.. how much I love tasha and ur writing?? Who will understand??

Ok dear.. Byee for now.. Will come back to comment after I finish reading the wedding bliss..😳

Take care and always stay happy and blessed🤗

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 8 years ago

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alex1

@alex1

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#916

@all, to you who are still here,
@Barbie_KK9629,
Barbie, as an oldie LTL1 member, I can say with accuracy from other PM and e-conversations in past and from reading comments from other LTL1 members, the LTL1 members had no choice but to move on. It is people like me who come to IF once in a while look for LTL1 members/fans comments everywhere but truly LTL1 members had no choice but to move away from IF and LTL1. Wish it was not so but I can honesty say so. To all who still love LTL1 and still come, we/I always will remember you N Laagi1 even if we don't say so or this forum or anywhere else, this I can say to you all with surety. Hugs, Alex

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: alex1
@all, to you who are still here,
@Barbie_KK9629,
Barbie, as an oldie LTL1 member, I can say with accuracy from other PM and e-conversations in past and from reading comments from other LTL1 members, the LTL1 members had no choice but to move on. It is people like me who come to IF once in a while look for LTL1 members/fans comments everywhere but truly LTL1 members had no choice but to move away from IF and LTL1. Wish it was not so but I can honesty say so. To all who still love LTL1 and still come, we/I always will remember you N Laagi1 even if we don't say so or this forum or anywhere else, this I can say to you all with surety. Hugs, Alex

many people preferred to move away from IF after LTL1's end.. Many had to move on but u/hammie/me..we cant.. It's quite difficult for us.

Yesterday I was reading stranger2rose's FF ishq wala love..

Alex, did you read that story???

I cant believe that I still have this much tasha left in me, even after 6 years, that literally made me weep and shed a few drops of tears after reading her last part..where tasha died..may be she had tried to show that it was not in their destiny to unite in this life.. but true love never dies ..But her story killed me.. The very imagination that they could not live together pained me beyond anything.. when I very well know that it's nothing but only a fan made fiction..

Now I must resume to hammie's wedding bliss as soon as possible.. Only there I will be able to find some solace and put my troubled mind at ease...

see we are still so much in love😳..sometimes I wonder dutta kiska pati hai... Naku ka ya hamara..??😆who loves Naku more..dutta or LTL fans??😆

Good to see you alex.. It makes me happy when I get to interact with people like you..

As a LTL1 fan, lots of love for another crazy Laagi deewani..

Good wishes and hugs for you

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 8 years ago

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#918

Green Eyed Monster wow wat an apt description fr Jealous champak,, superb title fr chap 10..⭐️ champak somehow unknowingly bring thm even more closer,,😛 he was predictable wen he came n try to trap Nakku,,😛

bt ur Datta is jst tooo unpredictable,,, perfect,, really Amazing,,, really really Mysterious,, sochta kuch hai aur karta kuch aur he hai,,😉 oper se extremely Romantic b hai,,😛 making him completely IRRESISTIBLE!! 😉 how he reacted after champaks outrageous behavior,,, I was pleasantly surpised,,, bt it seems something cooking in his head,, mazaa aega,,😉 also his love fr his uniform n his duty making me proud of him!!

amazing writing Hammie as usual n I'm glad I'm reading ur FF,, find myself lucky I didn't miss ths treasure!!😳 will b bac soon!!

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: NusiSg
hi Nus good to see you😛
Green Eyed Monster wow wat an apt description fr Jealous champak,, superb title fr chap 10..⭐️ champak somehow unknowingly bring thm even more closer,,😛 he was predictable wen he came n try to trap Nakku,,😛 green eyed monster was aquote out of Othello.. green ,bilious is the colour associated with jealousy
bt ur Datta is jst tooo unpredictable,,, perfect,, really Amazing,,, really really Mysterious,, sochta kuch hai aur karta kuch aur he hai,,😉 oper se extremely Romantic b hai,,😛 making him completely IRRESISTIBLE!! 😉 how he reacted after champaks outrageous behavior,,, I was pleasantly surpised,,, bt it seems something cooking in his head,, mazaa aega,,😉 also his love fr his uniform n his duty making me proud of him!! its the true nature of an officer.. they have to keep rank and reputation in mind all the time

amazing writing Hammie as usual n I'm glad I'm reading ur FF,, find myself lucky I didn't miss ths treasure!!😳 will b bac soon!! thanks nus ,means alot to me you reading this archived work.. read on and comment .love reading them... much love ,yours hammie