Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 43

Hi hamlet

Awesome ud..AS should have told the truth before she knew dutta was going through hell with his identity issue..Gul bahar dutta should shift just like Krishna..Naku will inspire him back to life😊..Ud soon

Amazing update Hammie. Seems not getting enough cant wait for the next update. Update soon😆

Hey hammie enjoyed the update a lot. I was expecting some kind of stupidity on dutta's part but he pleasantly surprised me. The opening part was beautiful, the emotional turmoil of Dutta was well written. Thank god he didn't meet with an accident. Now Dutta dhokha and booze go together so he lands up in a local bar. You know I was expecting kala to be remorseful but she didn't seem to be. And what is it with baaji he was shocked but why? Good he went out in search of Dutta and even better took him to Gul bahar and best that he disappeared from there. No KMH smart boy. Now again I was hoping for an emotional over dramatic scene but it turned out to be funny. Dutta wrapped in a bedsheet is hilarious. Hammie what a makeover lol. And once again in the morning he himself opened up to her. Quite surprising but I liked it. This Dutta is more approachable and easy to reach out. All in all a very satisfying update. One more thing why do I feel that Dutta is an illegitimate son of Patil sr.

follow the heart
part 21
love the update dutta finally won and there babies cute what i love the most was the last line beti baap pe gaye hai.. give her time, she'll learn when she follows her heart.. like I did Naku... and got the whole universe..

blue blood
awsemmm promo getting a new story is always good

blue blood part 1
dutta security chief nakku flower seller quite good and meeting was awsem

blue blood
part 2
krishna became the medium for tasha meeting fab

blue blood part 3
finaly tasha going for shopping for krishna fab