ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015|

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Just found this story.

Couldn't stop reading.

Its quite intriguing.

The past experiences has made Arnav to be who he is today.

Khushi has had to go through so much.

At least the Raizada family knows she's telling he truth now.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

awesome update

devyano raizada is smart, she is expert in manipulating others.

I feel sad for Arnav and understand that he doesn't wish to feel but i think le clearly loose manner as well after his break up. He must controll his language. Lavanyah destroyed a life and now because of her Arnav see everyone with one notion in his mind, never to trust strangers and treat them bitterly especially woman.

I like khushi character now. She isn't an abla naari and an educated woman. I hope her determination and independence would be enough for Arnav to make him remind to think before speak in front of khushi.

I hope a day will come when someone will listen her misery and all she went through without judging her.

can't wait to read more.

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Awesome update.

Khushi is retaliating. She needs to fight to survive.

Arnav is dumb to hide behind that arrogance when he knows the truth.

Cant wait to read more

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Praying for your speedy recovery tanvi.

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narmatha biju

@narmathabiju21

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

nice story..waiting for the next update

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Anjali

@crazylovey

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Nice update...

Seems raizada's have bulldozer over her house so she can return back to shantivan...

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Finally Reporting myself in Splintered dreams thread. I caught up with all the four chapters and I should say I am in awe with the concept and the way you are handling it. Frankly as per the record of Arjun Singh Raizada.. the Raizada's doubting Khushi is not wrong. All their worried are valid. What if more woman come and claim that they are his wives and they had already children with him. And Khushi feeling depressed for what was happening in her life and feeling disgusted for the man who is questioning her character is also not wrong. It's not her fault for where she is now. Her brother used her to keep the partnership and to get benefits out of it. Her husband used her to quench his thirst for her. Now Raizada's are using her to save their reputation. In one way The only person who is helping her is Arnav. By saying all those rude things to her.. he is giving the strength for her to fight her ill fate. It is boosting her up to fight the world and the circumstances for her unborn baby. It will take time to come out of this for her.

Amazing concept Tanvi..

And what is that ending yaar... Will be desperately waiting for the next update.

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shazia

@shaziluvbarun

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

just come across this story n read it in a go.. i loved it.. please do pm me when you update..

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

hey read all 4 udates.. ur fab writer dear.. also read ur other story the dark silhouette.. nd now its time for smitten by the neighbour.. u just made my holiday hurray!!..