ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015| - Page 26

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

One is 100% Jerk the other has the chance to change his behavior so will give him benifit of doubt lol

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome update...beautifully written...very painful ...its really sad for both sides khushi and arnav family...so poor khushi had to leave her college too after the shadi or she is still studying ...

ratna and arvind seems pretty decent people...hope they get the DNA so that poor soul can get at least a decent shelter for her...

tanvi must say how fab u have written harsh reality of life here...its not that only poor r going on wrong ways due to lack of money...some times those who having enough money still there greed for more and more r taking them at worst self distruction path...and in this all not only ruining there own life but many many relations attached with them they suffered equal...

well arnav asr mode is always treat to read :)...great going tanvi...u simply rock :)

ur note is absolutely right...

Hi...i read ur story "the dark silhoutte" n I just loved it. After reading that I came through ur other 2 stories as well n started reading them...I read the 2 parts of this ff n I am eagerly waiting for the next update...i know u updated today n waiting for another update is 2 quick but I just love the starting parts of this one...update soon n thank u for wonderful stories...

Originally posted by: ranogill

Whatever situation is one thing is clear that nobody can doubt that she is really pregnant with Arjun's child... Now it's upto raizadas family to make the decision how to keep the baby in their family... Let's wait when Arnav's mother will ask him to get marry to khushi ... I am waiting for fireworks... Khushi need not to be strong ... Her weapon is her baby and she herself is genuine person ... Very good concept

Aahhh finally read both updts...
Oh my god,., what was dat tanvi...!!!!!!!

Mujhe laga tha woh arnav nai hai...
Even when u mentioned ''raidpzada's'' name...
I felt like ye koi aur hai.. So it wasarjun..

Poor khushi,, felt so bad for her..
And arnav... Wish he to behave well wd khushi...
How can he treat her lk dis wdout knowing her !!!!!!
Hp he ll know d truth about her soon...

Arjun so disgusted me.. D way he behaved wd khushi...
He raped her !!!! His own wife !!!!! Aah he ddnt even consider her as his wife..
And shyam... I just dnt hv any words fr him..
Khuda kare kisiko naa se aise bhai...
I dnt fine any difference bw arjun and shyam...
Both r same in my eyes... Cheapos

Now what ll khushi do.. Where ll she go...
There only one hp... Ratna... Do something lady...


AmNg updt tanvi.. Loved it..
Intrstng story line...

Continue soon

Originally posted by: lalarukh

tanvi i must say in my eyes u have already shown khushi pretty strong in her own lil way...when she was standing in front of shyam complaining about arjun brutal act...in my eyes her voicing out the misdeed of arjun in front of her brother...shows she understanding her rights...she just need positive push and a hand on her head ...she stole my heart right there...:)...awesome tanvi :)

What a start !!! Exceptional ...
Feeling so bad for khushi.. Definitely it will take time for ASR to believe khushi is innocent.. !! Hope the other raizada's treat her well ...

Originally posted by: sman

wonderful update as usual

Originally posted by: shiv456

poor khushi nice update

Originally posted by: sweety1210

Hi...i read ur story "the dark silhoutte" n I just loved it. After reading that I came through ur other 2 stories as well n started reading them...I read the 2 parts of this ff n I am eagerly waiting for the next update...i know u updated today n waiting for another update is 2 quick but I just love the starting parts of this one...update soon n thank u for wonderful stories...