ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015|

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: snehal.sharma
Amazing 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: sanayairanifans
Its awsome start Do continue

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: suji5
khushi married to Arnav's brother...
and Arnav and his family members unaware of that..
is Arjun involved with shyam's business?

Yes, Shyam and Arjun are involved in the same illegal activities...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: canapoem
Tanvi, glad that you have started a new story.

Very interesting start. I kind of guessed that the Raizada in reference cannot be Arnav but what surprised me more was Arnav being Khushi's so called husband's brother.

If the dead Raizada was from a rich and wealth family, why did he get into this ugly drug business and how he befriended Shyam???

This story looks like is filled with lots of tears and heartbreak. Waiting to see how the story moves forward.

It is filled with a lot of tears... Lot of exchange of words coming up...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: sher_lock

congrats for new ff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Linsie
Wow... what a start...
nice twist with the name...

this should be interesting...

But khushi went through 1 part of hell...

until they know... she caring

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: apoorvaarnav
Story is good..but please don't put lines that portray marital rape is okay in the name of duties of a wife. Women are not property to be abused..

I do know that marital rape is a crime. But unless we talk about a problem, we cannot come to a solution. A Woman is definitely not a property to be abused. But a woman's empowerment doesn't come from how others treat her. it comes from self-empowerment. Khushi is yet to realise it, and she will grow with time. I ask of you to have faith in the story...Thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Great chapter.
So khushi is left alone, carrying a child of one irresponsible evil man and his family more specifically his ill mannered elder brother is too much for khushi. Khushi's life is going to be so tough from now on.

Thank you so much 😊