ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015| - Page 21

Originally posted by: khareshelley

wow.. nice story line..!!!!
khushi is married to arnav's younger brother.. her husband and her brother deals with illegal drugs works..!!!!

she didn't have any witness for her marriage.. and she is pregnant..!!!
how will her life will be now..!!!

does arnav's family knows about their younger son and his dirty works..!!!!

Originally posted by: shils28

brilliant!! 👏

Originally posted by: mushat

Awesome concept dear..
poor khushi ..is pregnant and married to a criminal..
First I thought it was Arnav .
Now looking forward to know what happens next..
will Raizada accept khushi when it was a secret marriage or will accept him for the baby ??
continue soon

Originally posted by: Teddybear_doll

Awesome update. ...
omg ...I thought she is married to arnav ...but no it was arjun ..
poor khushi ..
she is carrying his child..who is no more
dum dum!!!! arnav sigh raizada entry was really blast yaar ...

Originally posted by: atheenz95

Amazing start!!! I was thinking khushi was married to arnav... but the twist in the end was really good!!! Interesting story. .. would love to read more... :)

Originally posted by: lalarukh

wow wt a start ...awesome writing ...till reaching last para i was thinking that oh arnav dead and maybe story is going to play in flash back...but its a pleasant surprise...too good ...loving it :)

Originally posted by: sharminrahm

Totally in love with the concept, keep up the good work :)

Originally posted by: Uzii

Wow nice cocept so khusi was married to arnav's brother but why was he in drug dealing.

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Interesting start

Originally posted by: GoGreen

Lovely story.