ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015| - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Story is good..but please don't put lines that portray marital rape is okay in the name of duties of a wife. Women are not property to be abused..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great chapter.
So khushi is left alone, carrying a child of one irresponsible evil man and his family more specifically his ill mannered elder brother is too much for khushi. Khushi's life is going to be so tough from now on.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing start cant wait nxt update plz do hurry
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison



The outline of this story has been sketched by a dear friend, who prefers to be anonymous. I hope justice is done to the outline of the idea, dear 😊

As usual, PM's will not be sent and updates will NOT be regular...

Thank you for all the love and support you've given this far... Those who wish to read my other works (SS and/or FF) can refer to these links, if you've not yet read it...





Here's the first part of the story... Hope you enjoy it... Do leave your feedback as it helps me write better. Criticisms most welcome 😊



In the hurry of reading the update I did not read the note @Bold 😭 I thought you will be updating it regularly as your other FF Smitten by the neighbor
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesum concept very unique...loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: candyjan

Wow brilliant concept dear...

Plz continue soon...


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Arnav is Khushi's Jethji...Interesting. Arjun seems like world class idiot, leaving good luxurious life to join the gang. I am hooked, will be waiting for next chapter. 😊


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aish002

new story from u..yippiee...luvd first chappy...so nyc..u threw a few red herrings in our way..lol...for a sec i thot shyam was khushi's hubby..😛...

n u started it vth 1 of my fav songs from one of the best hindi movies...masoom..nycc...pls update next chappy soon...😊

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

😎 wow..
First I thought Arnav is her hubby but then...what the...he is dead..
At the end her dead hubby is Arjun.not our hotwa Arnav Singh Raizada..waiting for more..
👏


Thank you so much 😊

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