ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015|

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Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Wow nice cocept so khusi was married to arnav's brother but why was he in drug dealing.

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: lalarukh
wow wt a start ...awesome writing ...till reaching last para i was thinking that oh arnav dead and maybe story is going to play in flash back...but its a pleasant surprise...too good ...loving it :)

Lala I was thinking the same 😆

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Lala I was thinking the same 😆

haha 😃

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison

haha 😃

Tanvi you have pulled it so good I really was so sad hehe at the end I was able to breath lol

Edited by Srilathalolla - 10 years ago

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

khushi married to Arnav's brother...
and Arnav and his family members unaware of that..
is Arjun involved with shyam's business?

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: GoGreen
Lovely story.

Sumu are you back missing you

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Tanvi, glad that you have started a new story.

Very interesting start. I kind of guessed that the Raizada in reference cannot be Arnav but what surprised me more was Arnav being Khushi's so called husband's brother.

If the dead Raizada was from a rich and wealth family, why did he get into this ugly drug business and how he befriended Shyam???

This story looks like is filled with lots of tears and heartbreak. Waiting to see how the story moves forward.

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Wow... what a start...
nice twist with the name...

this should be interesting...

But khushi went through 1 part of hell...

until they know... she caring