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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#941

Shailu... I have a strong feeling that Abhimanyu is Shekawat's chamcha... When his attempt to snare Both Renu and Khushi failed he let Abhimanyu renter... Shyam, Renu and Mihir are under the radar... All of them are Shekawat's people... You know why? Renu came into the picture only when Tewari and sons was being sought by Anandrams... Shyam came into picture only when Arnav countered Shekawat's moves... Now the puzzle is what is Mihir blackmailing Anand Raizada with??? If it was an affair... It will come out... For truth can never be hidden for long... So that rules out... Why did Anand appoint Mihir in the first place without consulting Poonam... Is he being framed? A lawyer by profession is being blackmailed... Whom is Anand protecting? Interesting isn't it?... Is it Poonam herself? Some blunder unwittingly committed that could have repercussions on their business and family?

looks like it Rashmi...initially I thought Shekhawat said non sense about Kushi to break her rishta..but now his resurfacing feels like he is his chamcha only..

Anand is so mysterious..!! he is protecting someone or may be himself? I had forgotten he got Mihir in picture..!! about his affairs, were they real or only Poonam's imagination? I want to know desperately

finally it looks like only Kushi and Aarav are innocent here.. I remember the movie Manorama six feet under..in that only Manorama was innocent..

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#942

i just relish each and every chapter of yours..its like each one is packed with so much ...even the small details have something in it...

i love this update...you do leave us behind with questions that intrigue us until your next update...so i shall wait...until your next 😉

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sairam03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#943

My guess is Abhimanyu is back because now Khushi has a job. I don't think he has anything to do with Shekawath.
Ok let me introduce myself... I am shamefully reading and admiring this story for a while but lazy to comment ... I know ... No excuse right.

It's a punishment to wait for next update... But the updates are worth waiting.
Najar Na lagae to this author . God bless you dear.

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#944

Folks, thanks as always for your generous comments and patience (kind of).

I wanted to address a couple of things.

I had originally envisaged this story to have about 30 to 35 chapters. I have a chapter outline in a lil notebook. Based on my original outline Khushi & Anand confrontation should have happened around Chapter 14/15. So I am a little behind, but I would still say that I am over the halfway mark. However, when I began writing this story, I envisaged shorter chapters and frequent updates. But between my laziness and desire to ramble, both have been difficult to achieve. So my plan now is to post chapters in two parts. That way I will be able to reduce the gaps between two updates. If you guys feel it doesn't work after the next couple of chapters we will revert to consolidated chapters 😊

Chapter 20 is going to be a milestone because I will cross two lakh words in this story. I am sure it is no biggie for most people, but it seems like a big achievement for a lazyish fangirl like me 😆

About not breaking hearts of all the boys in the story, well some hearts will need to be broken. But I promise you that I am no masochist who derives perverse joy in extreme angst. The opposite actually.

So I hope to give interesting arcs and closure to all the principal characters, even if it is not all neatly resolved and tied into a bow.

And yes, I would like to restate that this is at the heart of it still an Arnav & Khushi story. A lot of readers still suspect my intent with this story (don't blame them though) 😛

But please believe me that it is.

Thanks again, readers, commenters, lurkers. Much love, Radhika

Over and onwards to Thread 4 now.

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#945

Wonderful update Radhika ji. Thank you.
Finally, Arnav met Preeto. :) Lately he seems to be meeting all important people in Khushi's life.

Anand Raizada made an appearance. I am not sure how I feel about this. Please do continue your next chapter from this encounter.. please.
Somehow in this journey, Poonam started out to be evil (for me atleast), and Anand was the jovial guy that I liked. Not sure how you did it writer ji... Anand is now the fishy character, and Poonam became more tolerable, and can see why Arnav sympathizes with her... kudos to you for this character transformation.

Our ever perceptive Anjali di.. loved her for saying that "there can a be a thousand Amans and Aakashs but I don't think to Khushi they are going to be better than you".

Loved Aman's dialogues... :) Arnav-Khushi's dance.. its not teri-meri, but it was funny imagining Khushi dancing to that song. And they had a little moment after that... was that our Rabba-Vey? :)

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#946

Radhika, the fact that we are still half way through the story and we have a lot more to read is making me super happy.

Whether you want to give updates in parts or not, its really left to you.

But the longer the updates the better, we are surely not complaining about the length of the updates.

Thanks for the note and a big hug for penning this awesome story down.

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...ASB100...

@...ASB100...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#947

Can I just say that I am glad A-K didn't dance to Teri Meri? Especially with Arnav lip-syncing? While I absolutely LOVED that sequence in the show, I think I like Pappu can't dance just a teeny bit more :)

And I think that's why I love this story. A-K manage to Rabba Ve and have eye sex in believable situations. There is that element of fantasy, but it's still grounded in reality. And it's unbelievable just how well you're able to pull that off!

Uff, I can't wait for the next chapter now!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#948

Originally posted by: ...ASB100...
Can I just say that I am glad A-K didn't dance to Teri Meri? Especially with Arnav lip-syncing? While I absolutely LOVED that sequence in the show, I think I like Pappu can't dance just a teeny bit more :)

And I think that's is why I love this story. A-K manage to Rabba Ve and have eye sex in believable situations. There is that element of fantasy, but it's still grounded in reality. And it's unbelievable just how well you're able to pull that off!

Uff, I can't wait for the next chapter now!

You said it Asha... I would love to read this story at a go and the impact would be super...⭐️

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bakwas_serial

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Posted: 10 years ago

#949

I was smiling as I read the chapter. Loved how smoothly Arnav was reintroduced to other important person in Khushi's life-- Preeto ! And Khushi will spend time with Anjali soon - a very important person in Arnav's life .

Arnav is ready to settle down and start a family 😛 Forbidden chocolate and he equates Khushi to be a strict future mom... earlier update he had mentioned that he would be as wary as a parent like Khushi's dad is towards Arnav. The weight of Khushi's admirer club ( Aman, Tripathi..) will this guy spill the beans soon !

Their relationship is progressing--- khushi carefree with Arnav ... her dance ...reminded me of ... a time in college when she joins Arnav and someone else ... for coffee after a sports meet... to gleefully share the bug embedded gluab jamun story to all !

The bro-sis duo are close, he shared Akaash/Payal smooching with her

Aman is sheer entertainment. Will Aman be paired with Lavanya ? ( Her hubby is never around)

Anand was in the hospital...is the money withdrawal related to sickness; his active involvement in business , giving money to Anjali is because he is very sick OR did he hire Mihir ( and this guy is shady shaky nephew) under pressure

Shyam - where is the money for smart phone?

Payal : she wears make-up before she goes for a run ( yikes) and I hated her comment to Khushi in college that Arnav is her "chotte sahab" ... hope her heart is broken

Edited by bakwas_serial - 10 years ago

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Manishi1

@Manishi1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#950

I love your story a lot dear and always waiting for an update. All the characters are so well and strongly defined. Khushi who has her self respect, dignity and so hard working with no grudges of past and Arnav who respects her of what she is. I just love both of them a lot and Aman too. Keep writing👏👏👏

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