Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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rosalineak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Awesome update...

Loved NK - khushi part...

Arnav hugging khushi is the best part...

Update soon...don't make us wait a month...

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bakwas_serial

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

--- Her scooty rams him into the ground and she uses the opportunity to beat him up with a chart .. supposedly removing dust off him. Could she not have shaken him up with her delicate hand to remove the dirt ! And he understands and gets riled up 😉

---- " You look very pretty when you smile" ... fixing her errant hair lock... and all the inner monologue of Arnav's regarding Khushi... hugging her... and now trying to keep a distance. When will this kiddo grow up ? I guess Arnav is " mein thoda ajeeb hoon " or maybe next update 😉

---- Both have not shared with each other that Payal and Tripathi are history.

---- On a more serious note... when nothing is working out for Khushi she has taken the time to coach and improve another little girl's life. It is heartwarming... like Arnav I want to hug her and she deserves a break.

Beautifully written chapter

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aquagal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

From Khushi to Poonam Raizada everyone is in giraft of Ghalib's poetry except Arnav.. but woh toh ishq ki giraft mein hai 😉😆
Ok.. why do I have a feeling that Nk may take Khushi to Anjali's place and Poonam Raizada may meet here there. I know too dramatic but kya karein!!!
Too many Guptas.. Khushi Gupta & family, this Mihir Gupta & NK's teacher is also a Gupta. Surely all Raizadas are smitten/affected by one or another Gupta. 😛
I loved the morning flashback. It was without any pretense and too natural. I too hope Arnav tells Khushi what he wants to tell her some day and secretly hoping that that day is not very far.😳

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akai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Nice update.

So Kushi and arnav is little moving forward.

Waiting to c y nk calling arnav.

Waiting for your updates.

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shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

interesting update.. lots of things happening..

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Cest.la.vie

@Cest.la.vie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

I'm so enjoying reading T&S!

'Ghar ki yaad aagayi' kinds?

I wish I could say more but I can't. I find myself lost for words.

T&S...if not for it, Khushi's life would've been so different. It is not just a shop. Its her life. Becoming everyone else's too, it seems.

With NK's frantic calls. Arnav and his mom heading to Anjali's house, could it be possible that cutie Khushi is there too?

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Thank you all for the comments. I know I keep saying I will post more frequently, when in fact I don't. But I will certainly post one more chapter this month. I think I have an easy work-week ahead, so hopefully I will be able to get some writing done.

I might post an addendum of sorts to Chapter 15 on Tuesday. I am working on something. But I am somewhat undecided if it makes sense. I will know when I write some more.

Edited by YellowBoots - 10 years ago

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: canapoem

More tomorrow???🤔

Are we going to get another update tomorrow???? 😉

Hahaha. I wish. But nope. I meant I will be back with some random comments.. so here I am. 😆

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zainza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Bwahahahahahah...the translation of Ghalib's evergreen shair had me in fits hehehehehehehe brilliant

Aah ko chahiye ek umr asar honay tak

Kon jeeta hai teri zulf k sar honey tak

Jagjit has sung it beautifully, I never imagined I would go crazy laughing over this shair. Love your wit and sense of humour YB and of course all the characters you have created are wonderful.

I want to add,

updates sabr talab aur readers betaab

dil ka kya rung karun agli update honay tak

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lilyattitude

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Posted: 10 years ago

#430

I was smiling to myself and even laughed out aloud startling my husband while reading NK Khushi parts! Loved loved loved this part ! I could totally hug you dear writer :)