Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 33

Radhika... How do you come up with plots and twists... 👏 👏 👏 that shows that the next scene would be of happiness but yet there could be a twist to it... Just superb... Even the thoughts of characters...though simple and of everyday yet they carry a lot of weight... You do narrate certain things that need to be dealt with immediately yet with the day to day grind taking precedence, it gets relegated to back burner and one fine day blows up into your face... for instance, Akash telling Khushi about Renu Bhabhi... We now know her meeting is a tryst but the person involved is yet unknown... Is it Mihir or Shekawat??? Mihir angling at Renu Bhabhi and Shekawat at Khushi! What an uncle and a nephew!

Hypothetically... 😉 If this happens... then Renu Bhabhi will have to call Khushi Mami! What the! 😆

Arnav realizing that he is capable of looking after his niece for sometime to give his sister a respite and his subsequent conversation and thoughts he processes in his own head show that he is analyzing each and every aspect and coming to the conclusion that he and Payal are not made for one another... needed an Einstein brain to come up with the obvious... Payal is one sharp girl... She already knows Khushi and Arnav are a pair...😃

So Khushi has not yet got Alchemy post! Shekawat is trying his best to get Khushi... Poonam inadvertently hears the break of Arnav and Payal, Lavanya too joins the bandwagon of possessors of knowledge of Akash and Payal Jodi...

Now Payal is at cross roads... So is Khushi... Both are having strained relationship with their family though not their doing... Payal has changed... Though facing tough time she covered for Arnav and Khushi... Though Renu Bhabhi insinuated that she herself must have initiated to derail Abhishek alliance, Khushi is for remarriage of her Bhabhi... Shekawat seems to have ingratiated himself into the Gupta family by agreeing to invest in Gupta catering, he seems to have a hidden agenda and has cornered Shashi... Khushi's only hope seems to be Arnav and will he lift the phone or somebody else????

Loved the update...👍🏼

You have quite a few open ended links yet to be answered... Will be waiting...

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Wow.. That was great!

A get this feeling that Arnav and Khushi are in the same boat.. And it's their time now!


Love reading this amazing story your telling!

Awesome chapter...it was good that Arnav could decide that he and payal should break up...there is a Mihir gupta who is mysterious...well knit story...

I like Joon. I'm glad Arnav called off the wedding. For a moment there I was worrying if Khushi meeting a potential groom or INP losing elections would made him stop from telling Payal what he feels about them. But I'm so happy that he didn't procrastinate and told her clearly.
Anjali sometimes pushes Arnav to accept his feelings for Khushi and then pulls him back. anjali is so confused herself.
Payal is surely going through so much. A rejection hurts even when you didn't want the acceptance i the first place. It suits both the girls here - Khushi and Payal. But Payal saved Khushi from Poonam Raizada and I'm so happy for it. Whatever Payal may be but she isn't a bad person.
Khushi surely needs some help but I'm wondering who this friend is going to be - Akash or Arnav. I'm hoping for Arnav obviously. 😉
Its time Akash accepts his feelings for whoever he likes. Tell me its not Renu bhabhi? Akash wanted to talk to Khushi about her Bhabhi naa.. though at that time I thought by bhabhi he meant someone he likes. But now to think of it they both can be one person.
Waise renu Bhabhi surprised me. I agree with her logic but I'm sure she has someone in her life. She lied to Khushi and suddenly she has started coming late. May be there is someone in her life after all and I won;t hold it against her. everyone has a right to fall in love.
But what's the deal with this Mihir Gupta & Poonam Raizada.. These two names are scary enough for me these days along with that shady Shekhawat. Oh is that Mihir Gupta planted by Shekhawat in Raizada Industries?

Originally posted by: aquagal

I like Joon. I'm glad Arnav called off the wedding. For a moment there I was worrying if Khushi meeting a potential groom or INP losing elections would made him stop from telling Payal what he feels about them. But I'm so happy that he didn't procrastinate and told her clearly.
Anjali sometimes pushes Arnav to accept his feelings for Khushi and then pulls him back. anjali is so confused herself.
Payal is surely going through so much. A rejection hurts even when you didn't want the acceptance i the first place. It suits both the girls here - Khushi and Payal. But Payal saved Khushi from Poonam Raizada and I'm so happy for it. Whatever Payal may be but she isn't a bad person.
Khushi surely needs some help but I'm wondering who this friend is going to be - Akash or Arnav. I'm hoping for Arnav obviously. 😉
Its time Akash accepts his feelings for whoever he likes. Tell me its not Renu bhabhi? Akash wanted to talk to Khushi about her Bhabhi naa.. though at that time I thought by bhabhi he meant someone he likes. But now to think of it they both can be one person.
Waise renu Bhabhi surprised me. I agree with her logic but I'm sure she has someone in her life. She lied to Khushi and suddenly she has started coming late. May be there is someone in her life after all and I won;t hold it against her. everyone has a right to fall in love.
But what's the deal with this Mihir Gupta & Poonam Raizada.. These two names are scary enough for me these days along with that shady Shekhawat. Oh is that Mihir Gupta planted by Shekhawat in Raizada Industries?

Wonderful update as always Radhika ji. It answers few questions and raises more.. still love it nevertheless... all those hindi dialogues.. i am a big fan of those... Khushi's bua sounded so much like my mom "Har baat par andolan ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai.."... 😆

Glad that Arnav broke it off with Payal.. felt bad for Payal, for the timing he chose seemed cruel. But she handled it well.. I have a new found respect for Payal. Thanks to you for not making Payal a soap-opera vamp. It would have been that if she tried to incriminate Khushi in anyway for the breakup.

Khushi's status didn't change much.. 2 updates ago she was with no groom, bleak future with struggling business and her part-time job coming to an end. Same now.. except that she has a friend in Arnav now whom she can seek help regarding that Shady Shekhawat.
Would be nice if Arnav can offer her a job and she accepts it...Lets see what you have planned for them.. .whatever it is, I am sure it would be quite interesting...

Eagerly waiting for the next...

now what will happen..

Dialogue of this chapter - when Arnav callas Khushi and Faisal Bhai says "Shayad Daamadji Honge"... Just hillarious

oh i am v happy with so many things here...Arnav breaking of the marriage..now i would like to see the reasons why Payal was rethinking about their relation ..whats the status quo between Payal n Akash...