Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
ohhh boy and here it goes again... poonam raizada is probably pissed for her son calling off his marriage and she thinks its cuz he likes someone else... and now khush decided to take his help and call him...

I've said before this renu bhabh seems the shady type just like shekhawat to me... I hope akash tells khushi whatever it was that he was going to tell her about her bhabhi... and keeping this from her parents is the mistake she is making that might cost her...

oh I feel jhalli here .. just like tumpa my lil one has certain ways to sleep too and starts wailing if cant ...

very nice update
its always a pleasure to read you writings ... its so much covered ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so many things happening in this update.. OMG.. Poonam Raizada is going to make Khushi's life hell..
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update...very well written..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update!!

Arnav and tumpa were so cute.
And atlast the marriage is called off.
Hope Arnav will help her out with Shekhawat
Loved the way you portray the difference of views on things, be it Renu bhabi's marriage or Khushi's.

Waiting for the next chapter!!
Edited by moonstonespirit - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi, i recently came across your story and read it in one go... really liked the story... pls pm me when you update next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great progress...u are an awesome writer who makes good use of words for the most simple of things...the intricate facts u point out in the story like wearing cotton salwar caused abimanyu to reject khushi is something hardly thought of by me but u were able to bring out the most expected thoughts of normal people...
Payals day was really rough...hope something happens of akash n payal...

This is the only story where i find Khushi n arnav the most diverse from each other...n its not the usual flustered, erratic heartbeat feeling...its nice...

Really like this story...

Thanks very much
Sri.
Edited by srmirji - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Been waiting for you to update ... 😆
So Tripathi has said no to marriage with Khushi ! age gap being the reason !
The best thing that Arnav could have done was to call off this farce of a
relationship with Payal ...
Renu Bhabhi had been acting shady the past few chapters and now the reason is clear ...
she must have been meeting someone after work ... am glad at least Khushi approved
of her decision to remarry and live a fulfilled life ...
Khushi's parents seemed quite upset when they heard that Renu would soon be leaving
with their grandson ...
The disappointment in them apparent as according to them nothing seems to be going
right with any of their children !
Shekhawat the creep is still acting creepy and needs to be taught a lesson ...
Am glad that finally she has decided to take Arnav's help in that matter ...

Thank you YB ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am always astounded by your updates. As I read on, with each of your updates my wonder grows. Just how have you created this unique and vast motley of characters? And just how each of them, unfailingly comes alive every single time.

The dialogues are absolutely gorgeous. Something as mundane as Jun telling Arnav that he's going to get the Adhaar card thing done is a delight to read. You have made it all a delight to read. I often tell my AD friends, I read a story where every character is somebody we know and yet not really know. Every dialogue is something I must have said at some point of time or at least heard someone say and yet not quite.


It also amazes me, how much thought must be put behind every update that a thousand things happen and how on connecting all dots, the path leads Arnav to Khushi. Always. And none of it seems forced. A story of weird but very much believable coincidences.


Hats off to you Radhika behen 👏 👏. I am very irregular with comments (though I want to correct that) but much more regular with reading Tewari and sons.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Poor Kushi.
What's with poonam raizada anyway, I can't understand her.
If Mihir gupta is Kushi brother what she will do to Kushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey YB
First of all thankyou for the update ! Seeing the length of your update made me so happy.
You are a generous writer.
Now to the update.
Anjali and Arjoon make such adorable parents.
Anjali is so full of life. Unlike Arnav she has lives life to the fullest without any restrains. She has shortcomings but with Joon as her husband they make an awesome pair. With a little fairy in their world it is picture perfect family.

The picture of Arnav with baby covered in layers in his lap is such a cute picture. So he is playing the role of perfect Mamu. Taking care of baby while the mother takes much required sleep.

Joon, is he always ready for beer?
Hahaha..that was funny . She uses beer shampoo so she doesn't hate the smell.

So it seems destiny has started its work. It is so intresting to read how every road of their life is reaching towards their destined goal. Whether it be any of their lives , Arnav, Aakash , Payal ,Khushi.
The fact that something or the other is constantly stopping Aakash frm leaving this country.
He is sad for he is unaware of the predicament of his brother. But its nice to see that the cousins have progressed in their relation.
Payal , loses the election. It is the lowest phase of her life . A point where everything seems bleak. But then she doesn't realize that her life is leading towards much needed stability.
The saddest is Khushi's life. Atleast if seen from her point of view. It is really sad how she was hopeful in the prvious chapter thinking that all good things are happening to her. And how in this update all of her hopes her shattered.
She hasn't been called for alchemy job, the guy (brainless) rejected her. And Shekhawat becomes bolder by each day.
Every door closed and there is only one friend as she would like to believe can help.

The best thing was that finally Arnav showed some courage in calling off the wedding. Although the man doesnt seem to now much about emotions and timings. He is just unaware as how things can hurt people. He is still a boy in these matters. It must have hurt Payal.

The best thing was the progress in their relationship. Khushi is much relaxed around him . She has finally accepted him.

Kiska phone hai
damadji

arnav babu yeh damadji kehlane se chutkara na milega ...
Har raasta inhe ek dusre ke taraf hi le jaa rha hai.

Renu bhabhi wats the plan?
Divorce Shyam and marry Mihir ?
Mystery continues.

Amazing update.

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