ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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Natasha08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

awesome update

waiting for khushi to reveal everything

loved it

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

thanks a ton for the update.

Really good update with a emotional touch between Arnav n Khushi which I felt it too.

This is just beautiful para/lines .Its just beautiful :)

Breathing through her mouth, she raised her hand cupping his jaw, sniffing with wet eyes. "I have always been in love with you. Ever since I was 12."

, "I have always been in love with you, Arnav. Even when I knew nothing about it. Even when I dint know that what I felt for you, those deep, strong, pure feelings are named as love. I have been in love with you all my life."

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__blossom__

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Amazing update! Cant wait to read how the story unfolds

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Aimee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Great update, loved it as usual!!! 😉

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Pari (But I go by Saphira)

@narutolion

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#355

So sweet. Hope that doesn't change in the next ch!

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S.B.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Awesome like always...
loved the update
looking forward to the next part

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Beautiful is a less word fr d update. U make me fall in love with arshi again and again. Thanks for the pm

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sagar

@sagarpatadia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Nice update! !

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Finally Chav is back.

Good to know that your exams are over. All d best for your result.

The emotions Khushi felt after Arnav's confession was very beautifully portrayed by you. It's very nice. The moment they share, the activities they participate in all were just awesome. Khushi is very understanding, so she make sure that Arnav should enjoy his 2 days, before making him aware of the reality.

The twist which you as usual keep on hanging is , entire part of Khushi's story. Hope, Arnav's insecurity will not create any distance between them. & this time , he should not feel betrayed. Eager for next update.