ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

amazingly beautiful beautiful update

many thanks for pm and apologies on late reply x

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

I miss dis story..
Plz updt soon

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

awsome.. No words..
Lov it very much..
Thnx fr pm..

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

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Candy 🤗
I loved read the 1st part of the update.. That feeling when Arnav said it!!

She could hear nothing, not even the harsh rush of the winds. It was just a deafening silence. His words flew to the winds, reaching the farthest corners of the Earth, making everything that it touched a witness to his heart, which now bet for her.It is a divine combination of silence and warmth.

A silence that is now being dominated by her erratic heart. A warmth that is now being dominated by his heart's truth.

Specially this particular para is just wonderful!!
I just LOVE the way you write Candy..

Arnav is just too good!! One moment he confesses his love nd the nxt moment he is happily ready to let go ..IF Khushi wishes too.. He is too selfless.. may be thts why he has been Hurt..alone..SCORCHED.. 😔

I love him more.. 🤗 Waiting until "tomorrow night" where we too will know some facts nd details... Ofcourse nothing is gonna change Arnav's love for his Khushi 😳

Why is Khushi so scared of loosing her Arnav.. thr is something more to it kya candy ji??

Omg.. that cottage is just so beautiful..nd tht moonlight.. wowww

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 10 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

i forgotten about this space i reserved...and commented on page 60...awesome story ...loved their moment of confession

Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Mine
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Wwooowwwowww it was just... Just so amzng...
I loved it..
Their magical moment of confession...
So beautifully written... Awesome it was..
I ddnt expect dis kind of reaction from khushi...
But I must say it was more beautiful than dat..
She was waiting fr dis moment to come into her life...
Nd when d moment here she was speechless...
I loved d way u described hwht she felt at dat tym...

End of d chappy was lvly <3
Their kiss nd confession.. Wow dnt ask fr anything more...

Continue soon

Edited by gowtu - 10 years ago