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Posted: 10 years ago
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My Murderer

Believe only half of what you see and nothing that you hear.

"Ghost" no one believes in this, science says its our presence of mind what we think that only we sees,
but if suddenly some unbelievable things starts to happen with us. what will you do then???
same is in there situation...
for people goes on a trip, working trip and fall in prey of ghost,
some untold secrets comes out, when friendship starts converting into love b/w them then on biggest danger comes.
they can't go back.
all have to die.
its story of for unknown people, swayam, rey, sharon and taani, story of blood, story of revenge, dark secrets, big crimes, and their deeds...
will all of them gonna return to their house safely??
or all of them will die????
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Character Sketch

Swayam shekhawat: A free minded boy, in age of 24, photographer by profession, son of a rich business man, still finding his love lady.

Reyansh singhania: 23years year old boy from middle class family, fashion designer by profession, always ready for any kind of adventure, flirt by nature, for him love is just time pass.

Sharon rai prakash: 25 year old girl, belongs from rick family but believes in living simply, she is a researcher, always ready for doing different things and want to make her career best. no time for love.

Taani malhotra: 23years old orphan girl, she is TV journalist but never cover any field coverage, she is afraid of blood, and not believes in love.

Some more character Aadi, Charlie, Gini, Lavanya, Prof chaturvedi, Ananya, Mishthi, Arjun

Swayam, sharon and rey dont know each other but taani know all of them as she had done interview of them.

Ready for a ride???? 1st chapter will be posted soon. and im writting this story wid help of my some more friend, Pavi, Tanisha, Kavita, and me Nalin

P.S. this story is not taken from any movie or serial and if any scene match with them and it will be coincident anothing more...

thanks


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept and character sketch do continue soon and pm me
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superb concept n cs
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Excited for season two
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superb concept..
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Chapter one
My Murderer


Kaanch ki neend aayi
Patthar ke khawaab laayi
jaane rab jaane kab
zakhmo se mil agye naina
chill gaye naina...
chill gaye naina...

Tan Tan.. Tan Tan.. Tan Tan..

Again Pendulum of big weird wall clock which was on front dirty wall made sound reminding them that its 2'o clock. time was clearly seen in even darkness, how? don't know 😉

four of them were standing in front of that big weird wall clock, glaring at that like that clock was gonna eat them alive...
Fear that can be clearly seen on their faces, who will say that they are same people who use to say that they are not afraid of anything.. life is such a surprising what can happen in next moment no one know... and same was in their case... many things changed in within few hours...

Rey, for whom, what is fear? was always a question, maybe now he is well aware of answer.

"All.. All of us will die... we all... no one... no one gonna be safe... no one gonna be alive" rey stated

other three of them moved their graze from clock to him, but rey's eye was still fixed on clock.

"right we have few hours to live, not more than that, but i... i don't want to die, how can we... no... no.." sharon said dis time,

this time rey also moved his graze to sharon, there was fear on her face... she was crying lil bit but still some confidence was there, it was the sign that she was most mature among those kids. she always preferred to go alone on her every research, she was never afraid of death but today.. the same sharon was crying... if it was any other day no one would have believed it, but right now situation is different.

"Death is all around us, and now whose next turn is we don't know, we don't have any option except dying" syawam said while trying to sound little brave but he was failing in that

swayam.. who always fought to live was helplessly waiting to death... or may be wanting little less painful death.

"Exactly, we don't have any option except dying, so why to cry, why to be afraid, let fight with it..." taani said after gathering some strength.

all glared at her as she was joking in this situation, but she was not... she was the same girl who never went on any field coverage as she was afraid of violence and blood, she always knew that its dangerous to come at this place but she took her 1st field assignment just for promotion.

"right guyz, when we all knows that we have to die then how it matters ki we cry or laugh?? unfortunately we have to die, so before dying let fight... we can't act like this much week, we have to show some strength" this time sharon said as she knew someone have to be brave

all of them nodded in agreement and wiped off tears...

"you are right, rather than waiting for death to come to us let find some way to challenge them.. may be we can find some way out" swayam gave his idea to them.

"guyz its not a good idea, we can't fight with them... they will kill us... more painful death.. plz better is that you both kill us... as they said... kill me and sharon.. it will be better death.. and may be you both will be alive then" rey cried

"what are you mad rey???? you are believing them??? listen we all are in problem.. and rather than becoming each other's weakness be each other's strength, no one will be alive from us... or all of us will be. so let choose 2nd option and let fight to be alive let fight for life" taani said to them.

and for that its important to find prof. chaturvedi firstly, only he can help us to be out from there" sahron told them

"haan but do you think he will be still alive... i think they must have killed him by now" rey asked

"yes he will be... coz he know how to keep himself safe, as he told last time also he went from there being safe.. and they are taking revenge from us.. so i think we can find prof." sharon told them whatever she knew

"ok then let start our search, and one thing we all will go together, no one will leave any one alone, as we can't divide out strength" taani warned them.

"yes we all have strength together as prof. chaturvedi had told us, we have power of love and we can't let our this power go weak" swayam said

all of then nodded and went for a group hug., they passed each other a weak smile but that was enough for now.

"I Love You" they said in unison.

suddenly a big table rolled down from stairs, making a huge dangerous sound in a silent atmosphere.
they broke their hug and saw in direction from where sound came,
Now they know from where they have to start their search. "prof. chaturvedi" is their last hope now.

they all saw clock which was showing 02:30 and they they glared table.. and moved toward stairs.


Many things changed in some time, these last two days changed almost everything, their bonding, their personality, they themselves changed completely, their way to see things changed, nothing was same now, 2days back they were living a normal life, which is no more normal now,
how things can change this much, suddenly??? how??? and why????

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why they are in danger? and wid whom they are afraid? why death is around them? is thing gonna change? or they will have to face death??? wanna know?????

then welcome to the land of revenge, land of blood and death...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting concept
nice start
upd nxt prt soon n pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii... Interesting concept...
Continue soon n pm me when u update
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really interesting chap.
though a little confusion..
why they were in such danger?
really want to read further..
so plz updt asap..
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Nice concept
nice update
little scary but wanna read
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