Arshi TS *~ Inciting Desires ~* Completed..Part1-3/All on Page1 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Amazing. Sooo passionate...heats up the atmosphere...thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
First of all Welcome back...WOW...mast first chapter...loved the way you described their feelings specially Arnav's...aag dono tarf barabar lagi hai. Arnav must be thankfull to his sister for inviting them and leaving her all alone...where he can do some romance with his Khushi.
Awesome chapter and teasing teaser.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
That's simply awesom. But the way you stopped and the situation you stopped... hmmm... nah... not acceptable. You better post next one fast, really fast...

But the shot was relly awesome and enjoyable
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Wonderful update
Loved it
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

👏 excellent poetry ...simply beautiful...


aweee wao faiqa wt a come back :)...first of all wt an amazing name inciting desires...cool infact hot :)...loved the kuch kuch hota feelings between arnav and khushi...from starting it seems both knock out due to attraction between :)...anjali and shyam seems good couple...a smile stays throughout the read :)..working khushi with confidence yet innocence is treat to read :)...i loved everything about the story :)...the ending flower with thorns..:)..and that silver star which is in starting with copyright thing...and that blue star in the end with buddy me option...hehe...see how much i noticed...lol...hugs and love u and looking forward to that mind blowing about to happ kiss u mentioned in sneak peak...all the best dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Superb start dear
Very nice written
Looking forward
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...
U MADE ME CRAVE 4 NEXT UPDATE...
THANKS 4 D PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
That was so beautifully written <3
awesome part,waiting for next chapter.
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I'm wordsLESS! if ArHi had serious dhak dhak while seeing , feeling, getting close to each other then my DHAK DHAK double increased! and the sneak peak UFFF! ☺️ and what can i say about your writing? simply brillant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Interesting start. Aag dono taraph barabar lagi hain.

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