ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD** - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
It's so long 🥱
But you know what
I want more 😭
Lovely update 👏 👏
Waiting for next part
Update so
And when u going to start
You are my new dream
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
flashback was so nice. their office moments was good. liked it.
waiting for next part.
thanks for long chapter...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful updates.u have written the emotions so well that i can see them play before my eyes.wonderful 👏👏 waiting for the next part so eagerly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one...I feel bad for Lavanya though ...but poor arshi how can the mothers be so heartless ...anyway I hope our arshi come out more strong in this storm😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice updte...
flash back scenes are superb...
thks for the pm...
waiting to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Di That was such a wonderful update
How beautifully you had described Arshi's past
I really liked this bold Khushi
She was so outgoing
I just wanted to give 👏 to you for making Khushi's character this strong,chirpy,intelligent,hardworking and overall a superb personality
I was thinking that Khushi might have been docile or like show with some B.A and maybe his P.A or something. Very Glad that you made her equivalent to Arnav
I am sorry if you had mentioned before and I didn't notice
I felt like that because in last chappy and all Khushi was behaving just like a typical wife fulfilling all wifey duties
There was no chirpiness,intelligence at all
She even agreed to Ratna and La's mother so easily
And she went from the place where La- Arnav was present
Now I am extremely happy knowing about this side of Khushi
This made me to like this story a notch higher than before
The flashbacks were utterly cute
These both are like made for each other
And even more glad that Arnav was not that deeply n love with Lav himself. It was just like circumstances and for family. so That was another plus point
I would have felt sad Di that you haven't given us Arnav's POV this time but this update was worth it
And the way Arhi took care of each other was so good
And Khushi embarrassing herself and Arnav's smirks was very cute
No words Di
Overall an utterly butterly delicious superb updateNow Please PLease Please update the next chappy soon
Can't wait for Arnav to know about the divorce thingy
Now since I had known that Arnav do like Khushi for sure and That la's love is not that much serious I am so happy
And very eager to know about Arnav's POV and Arhi's sweet marriage moments
Update soon
Pretty please ⭐️😳


Edited by ragvir92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hope we are getting our next update Today😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
UPDATE NOTE:

Sorry guys, no update today.
See thats why i dont give a date or day caz i know i would never be able to fulfill.😕

Yesterday i had work and today had relatives over and then have to go for shopping.
Just got home half hour go and logged In, caz i knew i will have ppl saying to update today and writing a note here.

I am going to start writing now, but i know it wont be finish today nor tomorrow.
So sorry guys but it will take more 2, 3 days on my part to finish it.

So for next time, i wont give an specific date or time.
Hope you all understand.

TC Arooma
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Posted: 10 years ago
No worries dear...take your time, AD is always first. Take care, will wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its ok dear
We will wait for update

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