ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD** - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb. Hope evrythng becum f9 soon. Update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part. Hope Arnav returns soon and removes her MU.
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing story..initially I thought Lavanya is evil but she seems to be a nice girl..their mom's can't force Kushi to leave Arnav..so stupid
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys ... hope everyone is well.

I know that the update was shot and not much Arshi but still it took me effort to write that much.

So why less LIKES ... i have added 10 more readers into my buddy list which is now around 290+.

I will be pushed to delete readers ... if i get less LIKES ...

At the same time i really appreciate those readers who COMMENTED ... thank you so much guys. 😳

Ok now i read all your comments and thoughts ... so i am going to reply them here in points.
It better this way instead of replying each comment as i know some don't go back to read the replies.

1) First thing, Why too much Lavanya in this? 2 reasons. I wanted Lavanya to come to terms that her relation is over with Karan.
Second. Wanted to show friendship between Lavanya and Arnav. they are very good friends and had been together since childhood. Their friendship is pure and understanding. How much caring they are to each other besides having their own life to deal with.
Also in this update i wanted to show How much Arnav is attached to Khushi and how important her presence is in his life.


2) Of course i won't separate Arshi. But If i clear MU soon then whats the point to write the story. I can't show MU in one part and then clear it in next. It will take some time. So be patient.
And yes i won't drag the story. Only 2 more parts.

3) Lavanya is NOT making distance between Arshi, even unintentionally. Its Khushi who is going away without talking to Arnav.

4) Why Arnav is waiting to confess? Well its not easy for everyone to go and confess. Some takes time. And my Arnav in this story in slow in expressing his feelings/emotions.

5) Is work is so imp for Arnav that why cant he go to Khushi and talk with her?
Arnav here, believes in giving one his/her personal space. He asked twice but Khushi didnt tell. So Arnav thought to give her space. He will be back to talk. Don't worry. And i assure you it will be a different kind of talk ... 😉

6) Why Arnav is not understanding the problem with Khushi?
Come on yara. he is not a magician to know what problem khushi has. how are you suppose to know what other is thinking until and unless you communicate.
Remember communication is the biggest key in successful marraige.
(hehehehe sunitikapoor, copied ur line here 😆)

7) Ratna and Astha are not doing any good. both are ruining Arnav's happiness.
Agreed. Thats what i wanted to show. That sometime what parents think are not in the right direction. NO offence to any parent here.

8) Hope Arnav comes soon and confess his feelings to Khushi before its too late.
Oh he will. Dont worry. Arnav and Khushi convo, Arnav's reaction. Khushi dealing with Angry Arnav is the main point of this story.


And in the last my question to you guys:
Most of you are talking about Arnav confessing his feelings to Khushi. Have you guys thought that whether Khushi has confess her feelings or not?
Think Think. 😉

see you guys on next update.
TC Arooma.
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Posted: 10 years ago
when will you update next ??

and yeah ... i agreed that its not necessary that parents are always correct , whatever decision they take ... as they sometimes take decision based on society first and then children happiness , this is what i feel and therefore always give hard time to them 😛 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
makes sense what you said
arnav cant read her mind
and has khushi confessed to him she loves him
somehow i doubt it
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Posted: 10 years ago
dont u think any wife wud get jealous seeing arnav lavanya relationship specially when she knows that her husband was in love with that frnd and now frnd home is broken...

why wont she feel insecure and especially when she thinks that arnav happiness is in lavanya.. then why wont she try to go away frm there...

agreed Arnav giving her personal space but after staying with her for so many months.. didnt he feel that something is wrong and khushi isnt actually saying...

he shud hav talked to her before leaving... sometimes we dont get time to actual clear things also

what if roles are reversed...then wont arnav feel jealous or insecure???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Misunderstanding caused by Arnav & lavnya mothers
And Arnav she share his feelings with khushi before too late
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part
Hope khushi mu will clear soon
Tanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good point abt khushi...but again she was not in love before...it was Arnav who was in love before marriage. ..so there is always a change of rejection. ..
Giving space is good but not much...

Even if khushi is so supportive in case of La. ...then it should be his first responsibility to knw what's wrong with khushi. ..why is she upset
Edited by sans12 - 10 years ago

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